The Infinite Check-In of the Bright Moon in the Qin Dynasty

Can the author not tear down the pair of Snow Girl and Gao Jianli? ! ! !

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In front of the protagonist, the IQs of the supporting characters all dropped to the lowest level. Is the Snow Girl so easy to chase? How long has Xiao Gao been with the protagonist? The same goes for Yandan. There is also the fact that although Tianlong Bayin attacks in groups, it is only an enemy of a hundred people at most. It is exaggerated to a thousand enemies. The reason why the country is great is because of the existence of the army. If it is written like this, the Qin State can be unified with just twenty or thirty people. What does it need the army to do? There is another question: Will Li Si's city turn around and run away when they finally separate? The most ridiculous thing in the world

After reading Chapter 30, I couldn't help it anymore. . Yan Dan, Xue Nu, King Yan, and Yan Chunjun in front, etc., Everyone's IQ is gone. . . If Yan Dan had such an IQ, how could he escape from Qin without checking the protagonist before starting the fight? If Yuki-onna is always obsessed with girls, why should she call her Yuki-onna and just call her beauty? Why did King Yan want to find a place for Yan Chunjun? If he failed once, he would give up. What about the face of the country? The protagonist comes up to directly attack the ruling class of the Yan Kingdom. He is so brave. Is this the ideological consciousness of a Confucian disciple? The Seven Heroes of the Warring States Period respected Confucianism because Confucianism was self-denial and propriety and served the ruling class. If you don't need others, your fellow disciples will come out to clean up the family. I read the book based on the labels, and when I saw the calmness, I thought it was an IQ level, but I didn't expect it was a pretentiousness level. Come on, come on, ps (don't criticize me, you can do it, you can do it, I can't write and I will find trouble)

Yes, Yan Dan is not worthy of Concubine Yan at all. This has delayed Concubine Yan's life. I hope the author can change her destiny.

I hope to write less about Tian Xing Jiu Ge. The back and forth is about Han Fei, Wei Zhuang, the purple girl Yan Ling Ji, and the plot of the Qin Dynasty is more interesting. There are many farmhouses, Taoists, Yin and Yang families, etc. The female protagonists are also good, such as Xiao Yu, Gao Yue, Xiao Meng, Shao Siming and so on. Yan Ling Ji, the purple girl, the red lotus Yan Fei, is tired of it...

Let me give you a rough timeline. Organize the bosses 251 BC Xuan Jian joins the net 247 BC Ying Zheng ascends the throne 246 BC Wang Jue conquers Shangdang 244 BC Yan Dan as hostage 243 BC Xuan Jian failed in the assassination and was seriously injured, but was rescued by Wei Yong's daughter Xianxian 242 BC Battle of Yangping, Wei killed Qin 5000, Wei won Xuan Jian was plotted by Wei Yong and returned to the trap 241 BC Weijiazhuang, Zongheng and Xuanjian fought for the first time Wei Yong monopolized the Wei court, and was later impeached by Wei Wuji, Lord Xinling Jinglun Lord of South Korea and the Jade Tiger failed in the fight for wealth Pan Nuan led the five armies to attack Qin 239 BC King An of Han succeeded to the throne Han Fei left Songhai Xiaoshengxian Village and traveled around the country Li Si defected to Qin Lu Buwei Xuan Jian assassinated Cheng Xi Xiaomeng was born 238 BC Zi Nu 23 Zhang Liang 12 Nong Yu 15 Yan Lu 12 Honglian 11 Snow Girl 7 Yan Lingji 19 Gongsun Li 12 Mrs. Hu 30 Tian Yan 4 Cheng Xi was killed , except Lao Ai Han Fei Yibao, received water elimination gold Fire Rain Agate Case Baiyue Refugee Case Qin Envoy Assassination Case, Yingzheng Enters Korea Nanyang Disaster Relief Ying Zheng returns to the country 237 BC Nong Yu assassinates Ji Wuye, Bai Feng joins Liusha 236 BC Weizhuang returns to Ghost Valley for an appointment, but Master Gai Nie is missing. He gets the Ghost Valley Ring, the Hundred Steps Flying Sword 235 BC Lu Buwei dies 234 BC Han Fei appears Envoy Qin Fan Yuqi led his army to attack Zhao, was defeated by Li Mu, and fled in fear of crime 233 BC Weizhuang killed Ji Wuye and became a general Han Fei died of the Six Soul Horror Curse 232 BC Changping Jun cooperated with the Mohists to help Yan Dan return to the country 229 BC Destroy Han Sheng Qi was framed Tian Guang lobbied Yan Dan for his plan to assassinate Qin Tian Guang planned the massacre, and Wu Kuang went undercover Sheng Qi began to enter the prison of the Seven Kingdoms to look for Wu Kuang Concubine Yan teamed up with Wei Zhuang to assassinate the Six-fingered Black Man Kuang Xiu asked Jing Ke to give the music score to Gao Jianli, and the two met 228 BC Zhao was destroyed, and Gao Yue was born. Yan Dan's request for nian was rejected The Qin army attacked Yan, and the Yan army was wiped out on the front line, and the big hammer went into the ink Xue Nu left Zhao and went to Yan 227 BC Jing Ke assassinated Qin Xue Nu met Gao Jianli Join forces to kill Yan Chunjun The Qin army captures Yan Lianxin is born Xiang Yan enters Qin and plots the Qinglong Plan with Changping Jun 226 BC Xiaomeng was 8 years old Liusha launched a rebellion in Xinzheng, which lasted for three months, and killed King Han, and Lord Changping quelled the rebellion Xiaomeng entered Taoism The Little Sage Village was on fire, and Xunzi retreated The public losers began to create mirages Sheng Qi was captured by Ge Nie and sent to Qin prison Li Xin led his troops to attack Chu, and Lord Changping rebelled against Qin. Li Xin suffered a disastrous defeat from both sides. The leader of the army entered the Tomb of the Six Sages of Emperor Yan 223 BC The snow girl Gao Jianli was chased by the Yan soldiers and committed suicide by jumping off a cliff. She was rescued by Yan Dan and was cured by Nian Duan. Joined the Mohist family Qin destroyed Chu The Mohists rescued the Xiang clan 222 BC Destroyed Yan, Yan Dan was killed by Wei Zhuang and faked his death 221 BC Ying Zheng proclaimed himself emperor 220 BC The story of Mingyue in the Qin Dynasty begins Xiaoyaozi defeated Chisongzi Obtain Xue Ji Qingxuan failed to assassinate Wang Ben and was executed 219 BC Chi Songzi died 218 BC Wu Kuang assassinated Tian Guang, Tian Guang's whereabouts are unknown 217 BC Gai Nie Finding the destiny, Sheng Qi chased Gai Nie 216 BC Gai Nie killed 300 Qin soldiers in Canyue Valley Wu Kuang Luo Wang was promoted to the first class of killing characters Long Qie met Chu Nan Gong Li Si asked Wei Zhuang to chase Gai Nie Gai Nie went to Jinghu to heal

I don't know if anyone else feels like me that characters who feel familiar when reading fan fiction should be kept away by themselves 🤭 Otherwise, it would feel weird to see them in other people's arms.

Didn't the protagonist travel through time? I don't know the plot, and I don't recognize the plot characters, Mao's time traveler?

The supporting characters are all intended to be clever, and the protagonist wants to be free, but then is forced to participate in the plot. It really seems awkward. This kind of writing has long been outdated.

Are you asking silently to be anti-Qin? Leave him alone? Because Han Fei is anti-Qin! I admit that Han Fei is a great talent, but his structure and ambition are nothing compared to Ying Zheng!

After reading Chapter 90, the protagonist helped Han Fei, interfered with Li Si's plan, and made Li Si's history failure. The others gritted their teeth and saw it. This is where I feel it was handled particularly poorly. They are brothers in the same school. Although Han Fei and you Well, you can't help Han Fei deal with Li Si. It's obviously a fight between two people, so he shouldn't be involved. Can I think that you have defected to South Korea? It's obviously a fight between those two people, but the insertion of a third person makes me feel uncomfortable. If you don't know Li Si, I can completely understand and even applaud him for dealing with him, but if you know them all and help one party deal with another, I feel that the protagonist is a very ignorant person. Anyway, I hate the protagonist now.

Good guy, you lick the snow girl at the beginning. Are you pretending to be a dog licker for 13 pieces?

I don't know when I started. When I saw the protagonist's last name is Ye, Long, Xiao... I felt like I couldn't stand it. I don't know if everyone feels this way, 😭😭

After reading Chapter 15, I was already addicted 🤐🤐🤐 I can't bear to read the plot of a blind writer the most. Can you think about it in your head? For those who lived well in the later stages of the original novel, if you travel to the past, they will have to experience one, two, and three scenes of death. . . . Without you, people would die? ? ? ?

Isn't this book set at the wrong time? The Seven Heroes in the Nine Songs of Heaven are still there, and Qin Shihuang was only in his teens and twenties at that time. By the time the Warring States Period was unified at dawn, Qin Shihuang would be in his forties or fifties. Xue Nu looked like she was in her twenties or thirties after the reunification of Qin. If Xue Nu was born during the time period of Tianxing Jiuge, she would have been a lolita who was only a few years old at most.

He wrote everyone else as fools, how could Yan Dan, like a bird, become a Mohist giant?

After reading Chapter 12, I was convinced. Has the author never read Qin Shi Mingyue? The character's personality is not even written out. Is this what Yuki-onna is like? Like a little girl who has been living in a boudoir for a long time, the protagonist also doesn't act like a talented scholar. . . . . . .

Whoever wrote "Qin Shi Mingyue" either wrote pornographic novels or wrote it as a bastard

I feel my intelligence has been insulted. . .

We singled out the Kingdom of Yan in the capital of Yan. The younger brother of the king of Yan was deposed and the prince of Yan was left unscathed. Brother Zheng even cried. I had to fight for several years to defeat this shabby place.

The plot is also a mess. It's okay to write fan fiction like this. The author is great. He persuaded him to quit in more than ten chapters.

Why insult my intelligence?

Read the introduction. Master Xun's eldest disciple, Han Fei's senior brother. What does this mean? How does the protagonist's identity come about?

Why don't you have a character card? It affects the desire of new people to discover a lot.

It looks like there are two heroines, Xue Nu and Yan Fei, right?

I think Yan Dan may have been wearing a hypocritical mask for a long time. Thinking about Yan Dan being a hostage twice, and the second time was in the Qin Kingdom, he must have found help to return home, so he put on the hypocritical mask. In any case, he Yan Dan is just like Ying Zheng, he is a politician, and the most ruthless emperor. In this situation, Yan Dan can have true feelings for a woman who is not close to him. I can't.

I want to ask, Han Fei Qin was clearly a Legalist, but you changed it to Confucianism, but fan fiction didn't change it like this 😡

It feels too licking, like a licking dog

Book recommendation, "Qin Shi: I Can Stop Time"