Tokyo Strangers

Haha, such an important inheritance must be forcibly divided into half to others. The author's imagination is really enough. There is a common problem among authors. In order to suppress the pig's horns, they use various mentally handicapped plots to divert good fortune.

There are thousands of broken books written on Qidian, not to mention those books that were broken by eunuchs. A good idea can support half of a good work, unless the author is seeking death. . . The "Magic Star" I talked about in the book review section a few days ago is the same book that was badly written. A very good idea and beginning, the protagonist is a magician, and a magic system comes from the sky one day. The protagonist has superpowers like those in film and television works (growable storage space, telekinesis, teleportation, virtual body, etc.), As a result, the author has a lot of popular science magic knowledge, and some plots where the protagonist participates in magic competitions and pretends to be awesome. Haha, I have no imagination at all. He is simply the monkey king in the monkey mountain in the zoo. He can obviously be a human being and a zookeeper, but he chooses to be a monkey. You can be a superhero in the real world, you can be a big boss in urban life, but you can perform magic, and it's normal for you to be a fool.

Excerpted from "The Return of All Heavens" I Killed Myself "By the way, Teacher Xiao, if I absorb blood, do I only need blood?" "You want to go to the hospital's cold room to steal blood." Lao Xiao glanced at Ren Wu. "What, what is stealing..." Ren Wu argued, "I can spend money to buy it on the black market." "Although I am not familiar with the extraordinary path related to blood, I still know some basic common sense. What you absorb is not pure blood, but an abstract concept of energy attached to the blood. This kind of thing usually exists in living beings, and will only overflow when living beings are injured or die." Lao Xiao then explained to Ren Wu some little knowledge about extraordinary beings. As expected of a Chinese teacher, his explanations are easy to understand. I think this author's definition of "blood" is quite good.

After I read part of it, I found out that the author likes Yu Jie, and she doesn't agree with her if she doesn't agree. I don't want to read it anymore. Loli is the best.

I won't talk about those messy things. I would like to ask all the book friends for their opinions in order to make some decisions. Can I read this book? Can I write like this? To be honest, I haven't written more than one or two books, but what can I say about this book? It doesn't seem to be interesting, and it doesn't feel like a daily life novel. The main line has just been sorted out. If I can't write too much later, I may change the map, such as traveling again or something. In general, I just want to know if it is possible to write it this way? If it works, then I will continue writing. If it doesn't work, then I will finish it in advance, slowly clarify my thoughts, think about the original plan of changing the map to the idea, and write again in the future. I sincerely ask all book friends to give me some advice. Did you say thank you here in early autumn?

At the beginning, women appeared one, two, three and four. I was worried whether it was Tokyo Gentleman Style. If you have seen it, please tell me. I still like this kind of rebirth in the parallel world of Tokyo and having supernatural powers. But I hope it won't be a bitch... He is indecisive, ambiguous, has too many women, and he pretends to be noble and innocent, but in fact he is so scumbag that he can be compared to Hedinghong. Is there a Shennong?

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Can you please stop breaking your speech into paragraphs? It looks uncomfortable(;_;)

The title of the book is Tokyo Strangers, right? How did it become a dream? I feel that my enthusiasm for reading has suddenly dissipated, and I feel like I am going to collapse later! After waking up from the dream, will you be pretending to be slapped in the face in the city, or will various supernatural beings reappear or spiritual energy be revived?

The protagonist's father's surname is Tian. How come the protagonist's surname is only Tian? Will Japanese parents change their sons to Chinese surnames? Is it so casual? I'm not nitpicking, I just think this is really a poisonous point.

It can be written that the company where the protagonist works closed down due to lack of orders due to the trade war, and because of the sluggish economic environment. The protagonist originally planned to find a job immediately after losing his job. However, after looking for a job for a week, the protagonist could not find a suitable one. So, he just took the severance package provided by the company to go back to his hometown for the New Year. As for that golden finger, it could have fallen from the sky at night in my hometown, it could have been found in the house in my hometown, it could have been picked up when I was a child, it could have been bought from a roadside stall, or I could just use my imagination to make it up. In addition, briefly mention the accidental death of both the protagonist's parents, and talk about things like the compensation for a traffic accident (describe the protagonist's economic status sideways, which is also the protagonist's confidence to go home at will),,, or the protagonist bought hundreds of thousands in lottery tickets (this is another beginning).

The author's golden finger in this book is that the health point seems to have a small scope of application (the flesh and blood of carbon-based organisms). It is recommended to use energy points or existence value, which can not only strengthen life but also strengthen items. And the growth potential can also be ordinary, elite, master, legendary, extraordinary, god level, or super god.

1) Will other super supernatural groups or characters appear in the later plots of this book? If they exist, are these already there, or are they derivatives of the protagonist's Goldfinger. 2) Is Golden Finger in this book a body-enhancing style, or a super-mage style? 3) It is recommended that the author set up some plots and objects other than human beings outside the earth. 4) What is the author's positioning for the protagonist of this book. A otaku who accidentally mastered superpowers, a careerist, an ordinary person, a dreamer, or something else? Is the protagonist the same or does it change with the changes in his abilities, social status and vision? 5) Has the author thought about the plot arrangement of Japan in the book?

You can draw inferences by analogy. When you are an onmyoji, you receive (mother (funny)) a shikigami, the Yin Yang Bookstore and the daily life of the shikigami and the little beauties are just like the home of a slippery ghost. . . . Just a suggestion, the author can take a look.

With this kind of start, I hope there won't be too many bloody tricks.

Author, the title of your new book was not chosen well, it is not simple, clear and direct enough, In addition, Japan is very special in Chinese online articles (folk sensibility and official trend), which is difficult to grasp.