Red Mansion: My Life Experience

Luck and dynasty are linked together and are extremely poisonous

I checked out the introduction several times at the beginning, but this time I clicked on it and it turned out to be surprisingly good. At least Goldfinger has no restrictions, as well as reasonable upgrades and dilutions. The plot has not been overwhelming in the latest chapter, and the plot is quite compact. How demanding can you read the previous comments without thinking? I wanted to compare this to those batch-produced by studios and at least give it a lesson in careful writing. Put it on your bookshelf and read it later. A personal comment for a newbie, it is of average quality, you can read it with confidence, there are no major pitfalls for the time being, the plot is smooth and does not overwhelm you, and it is not a frivolous one. In other words, it is of a standard, and with hard work, it has the strength of two thousand people.

I ran away immediately after reading the first chapter. Super super low-end version of monasticism. Refining the Gods and Fighting the Void can only fight in groups with not many people. If the hang-up is too high, it can only be suppressed. I didn't want to look at it for a moment. Congratulations to the author on finishing the book

It can be said that the four major families are full of evil. If you want to kill someone, just kill them or torture them to death. There is really no need to humiliate others. Take a look at what you wrote. Are you talking about using money to buy Wang Xifeng in front of Jia Lian? Is this Nima doing human affairs?

You have the most powerful force in the world. Who dares to take your credit? Do you want to die?

What kind of sin have I committed? I have read several books and they always restarted them halfway through, as if they had changed the protagonist. And you call this thing Wanjieliu? It was the first time I saw the World Exchange Map. The previous world was all imagined by the protagonist in his dreams.

After reading the first chapter, the author successfully created a mentally retarded male protagonist, and then tried to let the readers understand the male protagonist's thoughts.

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I just read a chapter and a half. At the beginning of each paragraph, because, so, but, but, however, and then... Is this a junior high school student writing a paper?

It sucks, eunuch. The author is not fit to write a book.

The blatant garbage written in this book is extremely poisonous.

So 300,000 words is not Red Mansions? It is recommended that when writing books in the future, you should not keep mentioning what celebrities the characters in the book look like. It is really "drama".

Vomiting blood, nothing happened, the second time the Red Building collapsed again.

I really don't know what the author is thinking. The writing is messy. It doesn't want a good plot, just be normal. It doesn't want the protagonist to be smart, just like ordinary people. The protagonist is like a pig, arrogant and stupid.

Does this book include Grandma Liu and Mu Jia?

The little monsters that Tang Monk encountered in the early stages of Journey to the West were those who could use magic to fight back the void. They could at least use magic to withstand beatings. The protagonist is refining his spirit and resisting the void. The more he practices, the more sloppy he becomes🐔

What are you doing, banging your head here and there, experimental writing? The main plot is not clear, and I have no clue when changing dungeons.

The realm of monasticism introduced in the first chapter is also difficult to describe in one sentence, and the writing is too low. Generally, it is written as high as possible, but in the end, it is written as low as possible. After reading it, I feel that the protagonist, who is refining the gods and returning to the void, is nothing special.

Lin Daiyu just finished it and woke up before touching it😃😃😃😃It was completely unfinished

The red building collapsed in front of us, and the courtyard also collapsed. Let's start with the red building again.

Every dwarf family has a book of hatred. Records of enemies from generation to generation and deeds of hatred. The new leader of the dwarves opened the Book of Great Hatred belonging to the High King, but was surprised to find that the unfinished entries above were filled with a person's name: "In the 588th year of the dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why did other races resist large charges? A spear or a halberd is enough, and a dwarf can hold a shield? I said: This is a symbol of strength! A guy holding a warhammer slandered: Everyone on the other side was tripped. " ----Snorri Whitebeard, the first supreme king, note: This is too much of an insult to me, and this is a life-and-death feud! "In the year 2526 of the Dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why are dwarf helmets so thick and strong? I said: Dwarf blacksmiths are highly skilled, and the thick iron helmets can withstand all ferocious attacks of the enemy. A certain hammer man: Too short, afraid of being hit in the head by a knife." ----The second generation of the High King Gotrek Starbreaker, note: I have insulted me too much, and this hatred is irreconcilable! "In the 3273rd year of the Dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why are light-armored rangers and bare-chested butchers not much faster than heavily armored dwarves? I said: All dwarves are muscular men, and armor cannot be a burden to us. A certain hammer man: short legs, with an upper limit." ----Three generations of High King Mograem Blackbeard, note: The insult to me is too great, this hatred is irreconcilable! "In the year 3576 of the Dwarven calendar, Someone asked: Why do most dwarf helmets have spikes and sharp corners? I laughed and said: If necessary, you can use a head hammer to attack. A certain hammer man: If the spikes pierce your feet, the enemy will not step on your head to cut off the back row." ----The fourth generation of the High King Sgrim Mogrimson, note: The insult to me is too great, this hatred is irreconcilable! In 4143, the fifth-generation high king Logan Ironbeard... In 4508, the sixth-generation high king Korgan Ironbeard... In 5208, the seventh-generation high king Finn Thorkel... In 6235, the eighth-generation Supreme King Kendrak Grickson In 6728, the ninth-generation Supreme King Orrick... In 6825, the tenth-generation Supreme King Orrickson... Densely written: This hatred is irreconcilable! "Who is this guy with the warhammer? Why is he everywhere?" He was a little confused. "Why didn't the dwarves capture any replacements after the war?" A voice suddenly sounded from behind. "Because dwarves have no mercy towards their enemies, they can only kill them all!" He said proudly. "Shouldn't it be that my legs are short and I can't catch up?" Hearing this voice, he suddenly looked back and saw a guy holding a warhammer thinking leisurely. So, he angrily opened a new page and continued to write: The dwarves will be great again! Also, a guy with a warhammer insulted our clan, and we have a life-and-death hatred! ---High King Thorgrim. The Resentful One.

What kind of nonsense are you writing? You change the map now and then the people, just to satisfy yourself🪶. You have completely ruined the fanfic.

All I can say is that this author is a loser. Heed my brother's advice, you should change your career. Writing books is not suitable for you. I think writing bricks will be fine.

Try not to objectify the golden hairpins! !

In every Red Mansions novel, no matter it is about immortality, politics or gossip, it feels like the Jia Mansion and the 12 beauties of the Red Mansions are eventually included in the harem by the protagonist. The Jia Mansion is like a training institution!