I'm Playing Games in the Red Building

The pig's trotters are getting better and better, and he doesn't lick Jia's house. He is also very eloquent. He is a talent. It is a rare and exciting article in the red mansion world, but the plug-in is a bit unclear.

I refuse to lick other people, but Daiyu still wants to lick them, and Yingchun loves them both.

Why write a character who is more fucked up than those fucked up things in Red Mansions? You have to find a valid reason to punish people. You really think of yourself as the protagonist.

It started to fall apart. I don't know if you had this setting in the outline or something. A group of women entered the game world. Are you preparing to finish the book, or are you planning to change it to an online game routine? If the Jia Mansion Garden Opera is gone, it will be gone. Can't we write other things? Even if there is an invasion plot, it would be good to extend the story line by fighting a war. Even if the world is at peace, there is a way to upgrade your protagonist's power. Is it over when the Nine-Layered Dragon Elephant Skill is completed? I feel that the protagonist has no desires and desires, and everything is Buddhist. If there is a serious branch that can be developed, he will just mention it at once, and then continue to lie down and do nothing. Isn't it tiring to write the plot line like this? It's too late to build the framework, and the protagonist has already finished pushing and replacing the copy. It was the same when I first watched Stranger. Invincible didn't have the momentum of Invincible's push, the upgrading didn't feel as good as upgrading, the characters came out like water, and the facial expressions changed after the release, leaving no impression. Writing about Red Mansion is also a quick promotion route. Is it possible that the content of Red Mansion, which has more than 100 chapters, has not been included in the main line of the outline? Is it the beginning of the main text when playing a copy of the Legend of Twelve Golden Hairpins?

There are no more comments than even numbers! What a rush! 😂

This book has a nice cover, take a look first

Can you use the word "there" less in this sentence? This is to tell a story, not to show off.

I think the writing is pretty good, and I don't think it's a bit of a licking.

It's going very well. Keep it up. I gave you the monthly ticket.

I gave you the monthly pass, please try to update it.

Update is too slow

Update quickly

To be honest, not even 100 people have invested in so many chapters. It looks like they are going to rush into the street.

No thanks, please update more

I haven't figured out how to deal with the monks yet. If you have any good suggestions, everyone can put them forward! Thank you very much!