Pomegranates Bloom at the Vermilion Gate

This is my favorite book by Xian Da. The heroine is very mentally retarded. She picked up a scumbag here and there, and she went to sleep with his two companions just one month after their wedding. The heroine continued to sleep with him even though she was dissatisfied. This is really unacceptable!

I guess this book will continue to be unfinished.

Have read it on other websites. . If this is just a new release of the old story without any changes, there are a few points that don't feel like it was written by a master. First, at the beginning, it is said that the heroine's father is missing. There is no evidence that he is dead. It is thought to be foreshadowing, but it is not the case. Secondly, it is the opening chapter, which uses a lot of space to describe the adopted brother and his brothers and sisters from his original family, thinking that there will be drama later on, but there is no such thing. Thirdly, the heroine is such a person with an indifferent temperament, but from the very beginning when she came into contact with the Queen Mother, and she was a time traveler but did not know the identity of the other party, it makes no sense that she would pounce on her like a fire-like precious jade and be enthusiastic about her just because of her appearance. Fourth, if the interaction with Mr. Jiang Wu had not been so complicated as a falling in love, at most they would have treated each other like guests for the rest of their lives, which would have been quite embarrassing for the time traveler. It also contradicted what he said at the beginning, "The only requirement is not to have concubines." What's more, he personally picked this husband even though he knew that the other party had two concubines. Fifth, the surnames in the text are often confusing, and the preface and the follower are inconsistent. Sixth, the heroine's personality is too different before and after. The key point is that except for occasional memories, it is almost impossible to tell that she is a time-traveling woman, and there is no golden finger at all. All in all, after reading it, I thought it was a very useless article (the first time I wrote such a long review)

It was only after I saw the broken update that I remembered why I didn't watch it before, and accidentally fell into the trap again 😒

Relist? Sell ​​it again?

This book was finished several years ago and I have read it more than once.

There is nothing wrong with the writing technique of the book. I just can't tolerate it. Will the bottom line of post-modern people be lost once modern people cross it? Although the normality of ancient men is understandable, the heroine is a modern person! ! ! A man can have an ex, but still have sex during the wedding period? ? ? ! This kind of thing is not as good as Mr. Rabbit before. He sticks to his own hobbies and doesn't mess around with women!

I have never been able to like this book The male protagonist is so disgusting that he only married a wife He is so entangled with the girl

"Liuxiang" is a revised and republished old book. When I re-read it, it is much slower than the rhythm of the current online writing, so you need to read it slowly.

I opened it for the third time very seriously. It's really wonderful. I'm especially looking forward to the follow-up.