Yan Nan Returns

The previous writing was really good, but after a hundred chapters I couldn't stand it anymore. It was so long-winded, the characters fell into the water and had their legs broken at every turn 😥, they got tired at every turn, there were no healthy people, and there were all kinds of infirmities. There was a misunderstanding of a few sentences, but it took a long time to explain clearly, so I gave up.

Saw about 70 percent. I really can't stand it anymore. I feel like I was deceived by the introduction, which was so irritating and domineering. But this book is very depressing throughout. And a lot of words are used to describe N other characters' emotional lines that are not part of the main line. Especially the emotional description of my parents made me feel embarrassed + disgusted. Please forgive me for using such straightforward words. It's really hard to accept. The parents who have given birth to a child that was considered a eldest child in ancient times still live and die for love all day long, sad for Qiuyue. Of course they can love each other deeply, but I hope they can be described in different ways, otherwise it will lead to a contrast between their love and their children's love. The result of the comparison is that it is disrespectful to be old. There is no elder's responsibility, not like a pair of parents. It's so selfish to only say that I love you and I'm sorry for you, but to continue to be myself without taking any actual actions. But obviously the author didn't want to express this feeling. There are too many points to describe one by one. I can only say that this article disappointed me. The author's writing skills are obviously more than that. I hope the next one can surprise me.

Can the heroine speak with more energy? Either her eyes are confused and dazed, or her tone is calm, and she occasionally frowns 😂 Can we get agitated? 🤔

After reading the introduction of the novel, I personally feel that it is necessary to explain that class distinctions in ancient times were very strict. A lady from an official family would not marry into a merchant family, unless she was a down-and-out official lady. Seeing that the heroine in the article was born as the daughter of a treacherous minister, she was a relatively powerful official family. How could she marry into a merchant family? This doesn't make sense? Although the author does not allow it to be studied, this is not a trivial detail issue. It is a very particular class issue in ancient times.

The original person was simply abandoned by her parents and died 😒 She was disgusting and unworthy of being a human being. Either she would have given her life for love or to save her life and not have children 😒 Is the original mother really weak? She also knew how to save money to buy concubines and dowries for her brothers and sisters. Her husband's family looked down on her, so she hid in the mountains. Didn't she want to have a backer from her natal family? It was so selfish to pay off gambling debts for her brothers. Why didn't she say that she was saving a dowry for her original body? The original father is away at war, so he won't come home, right? After giving birth to a daughter, he doesn't care about life or death, right? Girls who time travel are unlucky. They traveled to such a family and were killed by their parents when they were only 10 years old. Why did they travel to this family? Don't talk about whitewashing their parents later 😒 Disgusting.

I'm a little confused. Why is the heroine always confused and her brain is not working well?

This is another book that I liked very much at the beginning, but in the end it became extremely long-winded and I kept going back and forth in my memory. The male protagonist in the description of "Double Life" seemed to be very powerful. However, the two of them and the heroine's family still suffered a lot. The heroine still hasn't remembered the memory after the halfway point, and her rosy face turned pale every day because of the memory. The hero often got sick, and none of the people in the article were healthy. I was worried that they would suffer from diseases in the rest of their lives! Obviously everything is clear in my heart, but the result is that I don't take action to solve it🙄It's uncomfortable...

Why do I feel so tired and have no desire to continue reading? I've read more than ten chapters and I don't want to read anymore.

The content is lagging and the plot is empty. It is not recommended to enter the pit, it does not look good.

I am reading Chapter 186 now. After a hundred chapters, I feel that it is not the readers who want to abandon the article, but the author himself who has started to fool the readers. The author himself abandoned the article first. It is too long-winded.