Dimensional Fantasy Group

How should I put it, if this was the author's first book, it would actually be okay, but just pretend I didn't say it. In addition, I think there are some parts of this book that are quite far-fetched, but they are not enough to subvert my understanding. The author's subsequent writings are indeed better than this one, which is quite good. All in all, it's still worth a look.

After two chapters of persuading people to quit, some people still say that they are the best in the chat group. Has 7. Become a gathering place for noobs?

It ruins the character design. When you add a group member, it must at least conform to their setting. It can't be too different. It's so shitty that you've lost all your brains. You have to forcibly reduce your intelligence for the sake of the plot.

I'm coming😁

I'm here, the starfish who writes, come on,

If you haven't figured out the settings yourself, who do you blame? If you really find out why someone comes out to say this to you, how can you pay attention to them. Why not say that Kiana's original and original setting was really very simple, just a high school student whose father didn't know where to run. From the early stage, you could vaguely see some settings that you didn't understand at all. Momonga only has a primary school education, and in Momonga's world, he has to bring an air purifier when he goes out. Kaguya Otsutsuki is not Princess Otsutsuki. Her two sons can indeed create and destroy the moon, but it is not as easy as you said. Accelerator's vector control is not that powerful. It delays the rotation rather than stops it. Moreover, you haven't found out the ultimate purpose of the so-called "Absolute Abilities" program that Accelerator participated in. Just write one set of measurement units for the strength system. Don't write so many sets and then let readers do the math on their own. Updated on September 22nd. Give the author a small suggestion. Try not to write comics, animations, or novels that are too long or have too complex settings. If you have not read the original work (and are not in a position to read it), it is best to only write the parts shown in the animation. For the parts not shown in the animation, you'd better check some information first, and then decide whether to write or not. Don't just look up information on Baidu Encyclopedia. All encyclopedia entries are edited by people, and the reviewers of encyclopedia entries cannot be omniscient and omnipotent enough to know every knowledge point. Go to Wikipedia to check, it's very comprehensive. If you can't get on Wikipedia, there are so many encyclopedias like Mengniang Encyclopedia, 360 Encyclopedia, Sohu Encyclopedia. The last thing you need to do is go to Tieba and ask your friends. Or take a look at the high-quality posts in the post bar. If you have not read the original work and do not have the conditions to read the original work, the high-quality posts in the post bar will definitely be helpful to you. Thank you. High-quality posts usually include translations of the original work (if there is a big boss), translations of interviews and setting collections (if there is a big boss), and high-quality plot analysis.

The chat group will always be the same ones, Tony, Whitebeard, some new ideas, okay? If you are really not good at Pirates, you can just ask Zoro, and Naruto is also good. If you watch too many of the eternal ones, you will get bored.

The author's writing in the chat group category is very good. I hope the author will stick to it and put it on the shelves of Sajia Quanbing.

Friends who say that I am a bookworm, the author strongly recommends that you read the novel "Dimension Battle" written by my friend. If you read it for 200 chapters, I will convince you!

I think the author should change the title of the book to "How to Whitewash Villains Through Chat Groups." The introduction should read like this: No matter which villain you are, no matter how anti-human you are, I can whitewash you from black to white again, come and join my chat group! As long as you become my licking dog, I can let you do whatever you want in your world. No matter what you do, it is correct and good!

I want to say that your character is a piece of shit, forget about the Tony in the previous chapters, but this "symbol of peace"!!!! Group leader, you are so good, I am not as good as you. ""What's going on? Don't be too cruel. You're just pretending to be different!

The first ten chapters attracted me, especially the Tyrant Dragon and the Light Wings of the White Dragon Emperor, but the subsequent plot and the IQ of the supporting characters were so disappointing. 🤐

Please ask the authors of this type of chat group not to use your wits to attack! Mr. Big Shit wouldn't talk like that! Also, why do you always write the characters to look like your own delusions? Can't they describe their original personalities? I don't think so. Also, when I first came, I talked about eternal life. This, this, was poisonous to death. I withdrew. Shennong, please continue.

The author is a cute loli, I saw it with my own eyes

I think it would be more reasonable to replace the chat group with a system text. It would be outrageous to send a novice gift pack to the main character of the chat group. The group members are all tool slaves, which completely fails to reflect the necessity of the group.

I can only tell you, the author, what kind of stuff you wrote! It poisoned me to death! It's so disgusting

The protagonist is too empty in the early stage, just like a puppet. He has no soul. Even if you want to write an invincible article, you should not use this simple and brainless way to get invincible with a big gift package. Also, the tone of the overbearing president is really speechless. The chat group is really not suitable for writing a protagonist with this kind of character, because you can't talk to the group members in this tone, but if you change the tone, it will give people a sense of invincibility. Does it feel like schizophrenia? The other thing is that I really don't want to talk about the previous opening, but it is really poisonous. How to write the opening? The protagonist was confused at the beginning and traveled through time, and then the system came out. After saying a few words to the group members, it went directly to the stage where the protagonist Tony begged for mercy. The middle was passed by in one sentence, and then he said a few words to open the gift pack. The protagonist was invincible and confirmed the next power. The opening was six or seven thousand. You squeezed the plot to this point with the words, I am really convinced, and the overbearing CEO style of the younger sister's words instantly ruined the character design of the previous six or seven thousand words, and what is even more speechless is that after only six or seven chapters, you can't wait for the protagonist to start pretending to be B, and dressing up to pretend to be B is more important than anything else, at least write a few chapters of the daily interactions between the protagonist and relatives and friends, and the pretending to be B slap in the face, I am convinced. , I don't know why it is necessary to set up a plot where the protagonist is a waste in the eyes of my sister's best friend. If you use such a domineering tone and this kind of plot, you are alienating the other person. This plot gave me the feeling that the protagonist is not only a waste, but also has no respect for the sister who has always taken good care of him. When he saw someone coming on stage, he asked him why he came here with an angry face. Brother, if your predecessor were not such a waste, why would someone else be like this? You think you can disapprove of the reincarnation of your predecessor, right? Regarding this sister, as I said before, you didn't write at all about the plot of relatives and friends. When you wrote about the protagonist being angry, there was nothing but puzzling for me. At this time, the sister in my eyes It's just a person A, B, B, D on the side of the road. I can't understand why a newly reincarnated protagonist cares so much about the life and death of A, B, B, D. This shows the hollowness of the plot. If I wrote a chapter or two earlier about the plot where I get in touch with my sister and accept it, I wouldn't find it so embarrassing.

The first and most important thing is that Suzuki Satoru only has an elementary school education and only went to elementary school Suzuki Satoru only has an elementary school education and only went to elementary school Suzuki Satoru only has an elementary school education and only went to elementary school Say important things three times. From the moment Momonga said that he practiced kyudo in high school, I officially confirmed that the author has only watched the animated version and checked Baidu Encyclopedia (the encyclopedia may not have read all). Secondly, in the latest chapter of the class reunion, please don't write the plot of pretending to slap someone in the face, okay? Our two-dimensional fanfiction, in such a pure place as the two-dimensional area, shouldn't write those urban cool novel routines, okay?

Poison, the protagonist is like a mentally retarded person with sperm in his brain

The Zhoutian Starry Formation is so rubbish. Even Accelerator can block a star for several minutes. It's such a crappy Starry Starry Formation.

As long as you join the group, no matter what villain you are, you can get away with it. You don't even have the most basic bottom line of being a human being. It's painful to watch.

I feel like the protagonist's sperm has gone to his head. I'm not against having a harem, it's just that... It's detrimental to one's elegance.

The realm of cultivation is not clearly written. Hei Xiaohu can be compared with Shen 55. As long as the protagonist is a woman, he will basically love it, which is a bit vague. I hope the cultivation can be distinguished a little more clearly.

The early stage was very good and funny The later stage became worse and worse with no continuity and a messy structure The ending was not interesting at all

Whitebeard, Iron Man, and the Marquis de Vauban, who are all not arrogant and arrogant? You can admit it if you kneel down and lick them, but it would be a bit too much to kneel down and be a dog to the male protagonist in less than fifteen chapters in the first fifteen chapters, right?

What's the use of my brain? Don't look at it with your brain

How should I put it... It's like a running account but not a running account

The character portrayal is so scummy, so I just used a name that is full of shit. After reading more than ten chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

It's so disgusting that books of any quality come out. Infinitely low IQ. Lulilu is angry

How should I put it? I started the book in 2019, and when I looked back at it in 23, I felt that it was getting boring. I enjoyed it when I watched it before. Alas😔😭😭😭