I Join the Chat Group as the Protagonist of the System Stream

Very good review, don't worry about bad reviews, I'm an old bookworm after reading novels for more than ten years, it's very good. I only have one sentence in this book. In the Dragon Clan chapter, he complements the old Jiangnan thief and brought you some regrets in youth, although it was only spiritual.

The original work of the members of this book is the highest level (from Wangba). If you have any suggestions for revision, you can put forward your suggestions Xiao Yan: Super surface-exploding stars "Fights Break the Sky", galaxy "Great Master" Han Li: Earth surface-exploding stars "Spirit World Chapter", universe structure "Fairy World Chapter" Lu Mingfei (Black King): Exploding the country-continent, hard stacking can reach the surface Ye Fan: Super single "Covering the Sky", Infinite Box "Holy World" Ruins" Emiya Shirou: Unknown Luffy: Blast country left and right, extreme stack weak continent (five levels) Zhongli: Blast city - super blast city Ruffian Dragon: below the galaxy (mainly not the protagonist) Zhang Chulan: super blast wall (uncertain) Irena: blast building - super blast building Song Shuhang: multiverse - super multiverse, hard stacking can reach infinite diversity. (Transcendental Realm) Klein: Super stars - galaxies, stacked on top of each other, divided into three pillars, can form part of the structure of the universe, but are very virtual.

What a lousy book! You actually started charging for it after it was put on the shelf. I miss the books written by authors with bad attitudes like you. Just throw them out of the bookshelf and never read them again.

When I read Chapter 879, the first thing I thought about this book was the word "chaos". The order of the characters' appearance was really messy. In several chapters, characters who could not even be seen suddenly popped up inexplicably in the middle of one chapter. The description of the place when the characters appeared was also extremely vague. One second, the supporting characters were following the protagonist group, and the next second they inexplicably entered another place. I was really confused. Summary: This book always gives me the illusion that I have missed something.

The writing in the front is quite good, but the back part feels a bit confusing and confusing. If you don't read it carefully, you can't understand it at all 😅. The problem is that everyone is reading the novel to have fun and pass the time. It also feels like the author is coming up with things as they come up. For example, when the old road appears in front of the protagonist group for the first time, it just appears in a transition. If you don't read it carefully, you will have a really inexplicable feeling when you look at that scene.

Fast forward to the story of Su Niuma entering "The Lord of the World" and incarnating as the Wind Spirit Moon Shadow Destiny Man, following his second junior brother (Ye? Hao? Lu?), Walking all the way to the West to find Wukong (monkey - Meng Qi's six great powers).

I like it very much. The only flaw is that there are too few updates. Author, how can you sleep well?

Could the author please explain the basic settings of Star Iron in this chapter? What about billions of realms, star gods, and time spans? The fun that the protagonist is looking for is all in the air.

If you write more, how will Huai Shi's story change? I really want to see it😭

Although I know that I have decided to have a single female protagonist before, I still want to say that your emotional writing makes me feel comfortable and uncomfortable. Finally, I would like to make a suggestion. If you want to write another book, please do not change it midway. For example, if you change from no female protagonist to single female protagonist, you should make it clear at the beginning. To be honest, if someone hadn't mentioned it in the comment section and I joined the group later, I wouldn't have known you had ordered a single female lead. That's it, I'm just making complaints. If it affects your perception, please ignore it.

When will you arrive at Changshou? I want to read a prehistoric love story.

The main character is a fun person, and aside from the plots related to the harem or one person in the article, it is still good. Well, some of the plots are so awkward that I want to cut out the three-bedroom and one-living room, especially the one about the high jump expert (Emiya Kensou/Kage). Others are very happy, although it is a bit silly (ノ^o^)ノ

I prefer group building

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Can the author's update time be faster? The plots of some chapters can be written in a very sloppy way, but every chapter feels stable. This shows that you have an outline behind it.                                                                                                      It feels like the chapters are released after adding water to the outline. If the chapters are really watery, it will be like next door, I became the emperor, Golden Finger only came out with a bunch of water. There are only a few key plot lines in it, and then each one is inconsistent. Even if the climax of the next one is reached, it feels like it can be skipped.                                                                                        But what you wrote is like writing the plot for the first time and then revising it again. But others did not write well when they revised the plot, and then they thought about it for a long time before starting over again. But yours feels like how to integrate water into the plot. The key is that it doesn't feel like you have written a chapter so late because you have no inventory.                                                                                                               The first half of the written chapter is about running to Zhetian, getting a small twist in Zhetian, and then chatting with Ye Fan. Finally, Shirou runs back to Xingyue. There are many servants who want to investigate Shirou. Then Shirou talks to Chaldea and then solves the King of Heroes to end the Holy Grail. But it feels very fragmented. It depends on the feeling of Xing Yue. The previous Zhe Tian is watery. The key is that there is no progress in the two worlds. If you want to Zhe Tian, you don't need to have fun with the original plot. It is just a group of friends chatting about the plot. There is no fun in a visit to Zhe Tian. The sudden transition to Xing Yue breaks the fun of Xing Yue written earlier. There is no hope of continuing to write Zhe Tian. It feels like I am stuck in the butt and can't get out of the toilet.

How will the plot of the main world develop? Will there be new characters added? . .

I want to see the super-god world. When can I write about going to that world?

Tifa won't join the group, I hope the anchor can see this comment

Vote, please update

I haven't watched it for a long time. Can anyone tell me who the group members are in the group now? Please.

Write quickly! Write quickly! Write quickly!

Only 20 chapters have been written, hurry up! You guy!

Why are they all scolding me? Am I the only one who enjoys watching it? They all say it's confusing, so maybe you didn't read it carefully. After all, this book is positioned as a light novel and enjoyable, and you want to finish the next one as soon as possible. It can only be said that everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables. . . . .

I understand, Xiao Yan's most powerful strange fire in this book is not the ones with fancy names, but the legendary "fire in the harem". He is worthy of being the Emperor Yan's other and my prisoner. It's a pity that the cows and horses can't open the harem, otherwise the cows and horses must be tortured with fire🐶

Emiya Shirou? I was born to be a swordsman. The origin of the sword is a sword with magic properties. It is God's reward. If you put it in the world of Xianxia, ​​you will be a swordsman with a heart, a sword, a bone, and a vein.

There are 67 in total (now 84), four of which were drawn by Tony, and ten were sold by Zhutian City

If there is a problem with the love line, the comments have already exploded. I like it very much, okay? Don't represent me, I love knocking! Fun and emotion are not in conflict at all!

Can there be less Dragon Clan? I'm really speechless. Just watch Dragon Clan.

The Devourer of All Realms may be fake, but Su Niuma, the Salary King of All Realms, is absolutely real! All over the heavens and worlds, he lures others to think that he is in the same position and burns the body for a spectacle.

I'm really speechless 😓, why should I touch the emotional line? It was a masterpiece before without the emotional scene between the protagonist and Irena. After writing the emotional scene between the protagonist and Irena, it became a piece of shit. The more I read it, the more disgusting it became. I didn't have any dislike for the character of Irena at first, but after I wrote the emotional scene between the protagonist and Irena, the character of Irena became more and more disgusting. I deleted the book and it was so disgusting that I couldn't stand it anymore.