Star Train: Crazy, Give Me Crazy!

Although the mission is fun, it is not overly subversive. There are also some poisonous points that the author always makes. For example, the system uses the lottery tickets on its own initiative without the consent of the protagonist. This kind of involuntary plot is the most poisonous. It is easy to persuade people to quit. There is also the suppression of lottery rewards. Golden The magnification and reduction lamp has a lot of restrictions. It cools down for 30 days after 10 minutes of use. This is not a golden reward. It is a bit reluctant to say that it is blue, not to mention that the original version has no limit on the magnification and use. The continuous effect has a time limit, but it can be sustained through continuous illumination. I can only say that you, the author, cannot grasp the balance. The levels of the lottery should be divided according to rarity. If it is based on strength or value, many things will not match up. In the end, it will become the author's idea of ​​coming out, completely regardless of whether the logical relationship is reasonable. The more you write, the more mistakes you make. It is natural to end up in the street. It is different based on rarity. The level of items It doesn't matter. What items are drawn depends purely on luck, or the red ones are divided into a separate level, that is, concept-level items. Other levels may draw concept-level items, but the red ones must be concept-level items. This is not only reasonable, but at the same time, you can draw whatever items you want. It is completely under the control of the author. There is no need to think about whether the item meets the level or not, and there is no need to worry about logic collapse.

Spark

It feels like the characters and plot are starting to fall apart

Walter is from Earth, but he didn't react when he saw the braised lion's head?

I seem to know why you can't survive

Today is Labor Day. Many guests came to the house, drank wine, and asked for a day off.

The author, I would like to give you a personal suggestion. When talking to children like Kelly and Hook, it is better not to use such cute words, such as fish, rice, rice, etc. I feel uncomfortable listening to the book 😭. I feel that the sentences should be gentler.

Haha, the same old habit has happened again, right?

A blue card with 3% damage reduction is actually an unlimited concept card. So if there are similar cards of the same level, would it be possible to draw 34 of them and become invincible directly 🥵🥵

The writing style feels too naive, and I always feel awkward when reading it.

Author, I saw that you wrote about Pony. My personal suggestion is that it is better not to create it. It would destroy the combat effectiveness too much. It is recommended that you don't make the combat power too outrageous, and you'll beat the Star God at every turn, as was the case in the previous books. By the way, let me complain, Aha is so shameless.

The content of the three books is the same and has not been changed 🙂

It's also speechless that you wrote off some of Xing's opportunities. He clearly didn't embark on the path of destruction in the past, but later he inexplicably used the power of destruction. There is also a plot about obtaining the path of preservation. It seems that Xing has never seen the Amber King embark on the path of preservation, right?

Star Dome Railway

Like Keli's good daughter

Rt Scott is secondary, the main thing is, will he play tuba? 🤓

I write one book after another, but each one is unfinished. Can you think of an outline first and then write it?

Author: Your salary must be spent within 10 minutes after you receive it every month, otherwise it will disappear. However, you can only spend one-tenth of your salary each time. Each time you spend it, you have to cool down for one hour, and you can spend it again after one hour. However, if you do not spend your salary within 10 minutes, your money will disappear.

You don't want pigeons, do you? Can you finish writing a book?

This wouldn't be a sudden eunuch, would it?