Dimension: Sign in to Leilu Core at the Beginning

No need to wait for the update. According to internal news, the author has been arrested and moved to northern Myanmar. This book will no longer be updated

It would be great if the plot at the beginning was like this.

It's a bit unpleasant to change the soup without changing the medicine. This should be called a precise attack on designated users. There will not be people who will always like Zuoyuan, but there will always be people who like Zuoyuan. How great is this fixed group and stable income. But if the author wants to change it, I suggest that there be fewer elements first. The previous book on a super-dimensional shop had spiritual energy recovery, shop, chat group, time traveler, harem, system and other elements. It was too many and too complicated. At least I only read the book when I saw the shop. The more you go to the back, the more confusing it becomes.

Chip Yuan, please accept my blessing

Why do I feel that the four novels written by you, the author, just change the soup without changing the medicine? It's just a matter of time before it collapses.

If you don't like the female characters, just write some random fragments. Don't write any emotional scenes. If you write emotional scenes, you won't accept them. Emotions can be accumulated slowly, but now that everything is clear, writing many chapters of emotional scenes and not watching them is really disgusting to the readers' senses! The same is true for my classmates from the previous 40 chapters! It was really uncomfortable to watch, it made me feel like a scumbag

Dear family members, Benyuan is back again🎶

I feel like Han Cheng is a bit redundant. If you want to have a supporting actor, you have to be helpful to the protagonist or have a life-long friendship. Han Cheng always feels like he is either feeling depressed or on the road to feeling depressed. It is not right to say that he is just a passerby. It does nothing to help the protagonist. On the contrary, the protagonist has been helping him. I can't understand the character development, and I didn't find out what he was pursuing. Her only personality trait is her lustful oral pleasure, which always feels weird. I wonder what the author wanted to do by creating such a supporting character? But if there are any foreshadowings or big events later, just pretend I didn't say anything.

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I recently found a high-quality article on Ai Li's illness, which I reprint here for everyone... "Where is Ai Li?" "Where is it? The fire-chasing moth?" A classmate guessed. "The past is a happy land!" My friend disdained. "Isn't it on your bed?" The roommate joked. I ignored them and walked outside. "Where is Ellie?" I asked a robin. "Ellie? I saw her under a palm tree in California. At dusk, the setting sun spread across the skyline and fell on her skirt. Her whole body was dyed a romantic golden color. She was more moving than the wheat during the harvest and more beautiful than the narcissus blooming on the grass. Go find her there!" "Where is Ellie?" I asked a piece of white snow. "Ellie? I saw her among the aurora in Sweden. The aurora that night only favored her, and the snowflakes that night fell only for her. The colorful light cannot match her elegant eyes, and the flawless white ice and snow cannot get wet on her skin that can be broken by blows. Go there to find her!" "Where is Ellie?" I asked a wave. "Ai Li? I saw her on the beach in the Maldives. She walked slowly along the coastline, stepping on the soft sand with her bare feet. The cold water washed her petite and cute feet, and the sea breeze picked up her floral dress gently. Go there to find her!" "Where is Ai Li?" I asked a drop of rainwater. Ellie? I met her in an alley in Jiangnan. It was drizzling slightly and the air was thick. She stood at the entrance of the alley holding an oil-paper umbrella, quietly listening to the sound of raindrops falling on the bluestone slab. She seems to be waiting for someone, and she seems to be just enjoying the rain. Go find her there! " But I am just me, and I can no longer be ordinary. How can I find her? Maybe I can pick a bouquet of sunset in the backyard, hold it warmly in my hands, and say: "Hi, Ellie. " Maybe I can put a dab of white frost in the refrigerator, rub it carefully until it melts, and say: "Hi, Ellie. " Maybe I can pick up a round pebble in the pond, which still has the temperature of the seabed where it once slept. Maybe I can close my umbrella in the rainy season, let the almond blossom-like raindrops fall on my face, and feel the softness of the wind that is not cold. Original Come here! It suddenly dawned on me that Ellie was never anywhere else, and she had always lived in my heart! Hey, Ellie, look! Everywhere I look is filled with love. ​ Reprinted from Station B.

Chip Yuan is really short-lived, I wish you a complete guarantee of Honkai Impact, and Genshin Impact can only be a weapons master.

There is something wrong with the author's writing in Chapter 9. What is Ai Li's strength? What is the ultimate strength? Ellie's flowers are unable and impossible to dispel most of the power of the end

? ? ? The previous book was well written, wasn't it? Why was it taken off the shelves? ? ?

Finally

There are too many male supporting characters in the harem manga. Look at you pretending to be a harem. The male supporting characters have more scenes than some female supporting characters. And everyone knows how imaginative things like the two-dimensional world are. The male supporting characters have so many scenes than the female supporting characters. It would be good if you want to write some male supporting characters in a chat group. I even feel that there are not as many scenes in the chat group as this male supporting character. Even the daily interactions with the male supporting characters will make people uncomfortable. These verbal jokes are really painful. To be honest, I would be very happy if I had such a brother in real life, but this is a variety show. I can only say that this male protagonist will be very uncomfortable and the dialogue will make me think a little more. I have read many of the author's books and basically there will be a male partner who has a lot of roles. To be honest, I love reading this kind of novels except to make up for some regrets. After all, harem novels are all about women. I ordered a lot. To be honest, I am disappointed. The male protagonist is not as beautiful as I imagined. I can accept not splitting the original CP. After all, men like to watch lesbians. Women like to watch gay men. Male partners appear too frequently. If my friend goes out with a girlfriend, I try not to talk to her. Although I think I have a clear conscience, people always change.

Collapse Fu Hua is so handsome, I wonder if the character can appear

The author should change his name. I think the name Yitianzhiyuan does not fit your character. What do you think of the Abyss of Birth? Why do you want the memory of the dead to suddenly attack me? Birth, birth (›´ω`‹ )

Bubble!

If you say this book is rubbish, he can still read it. If you say he can read it, it is rubbish.

The ancient Greek god who was in charge of deceiving corpses, Zaiyuan, used his hands to deceive corpses again.

No, I mean Yuan, can you let Tan Yuqin appear a few more times?

The god of deceiving corpses, Chip Yuan.

It's already March 27th, and this book is still a stagnant pool of water.

I just want to know where to go and come back to fake the corpse.