The Demon Source Shines Again

You are the worst person I have ever seen, bar none

I persisted until Chapter 35 and found no poisonous points, but it also didn't provide any excitement. It was too bland. Some articles about abuse of the main character are suppressed at the beginning and then promoted; some articles about humor are slapped in the face after only a few chapters; even for system articles that are criticized a lot now, the first three system cheats are released. The above is even a relatively low-level way of writing in plain English. However, in the first thirty chapters of this novel, it only talks about the protagonist's time travel, but does not give a golden finger. The protagonist has no change in strength. It is too slow and dull, and does not give readers a sense of freshness/anger/refreshment. I didn't read it later, maybe it's more of a physical writing method? But in an atmosphere like Qidian, it's not appropriate.

The magic power is revived. If you don't want to become stronger and practice, but you still resist, you must be mentally ill.

I don't know why, but when I see the title of the book, I don't want to click on it to read 😭

Book review No. 5, Squeak.

Author, thank you for your hard work, come on!

I regret voting for five monthly votes. I didn't expect it would be so disgusting after the early period.

After reading the first two or three chapters, I found it to be quite average in all aspects, but there are also advantages: the story is smooth and eloquent, and the environment and atmosphere are well created. The problem is that I have not considered the coolness and rhythm at all (it seems) I have paid attention to it. After training with this book, I think the next one will be much better in all aspects.

What a shame, this should be the story of the creation of the world. All 82 chapters are on the shelves.

It looked pretty good at first, but then I saw Darren's plot. Emmm, I feel like it's a little bit off, whether it's the plot or the characterization.