Undead Farm

The subject matter is good and the author is good. The ratio of clicks and recommended votes is 4:1. It's a pity that the number of clicks is small.

Mr. Author, there is no doubt about your writing skills, but after reading two chapters, I found that you seem to be unwilling to leave more writing on the characters other than Da Ye San Geng. And that Weng Ling, also known as Lord Weng, should have been killed by Ye San Geng in the first chapter. As long as we combine it with the environment at that time, she was also He must die for the following reasons: First: Ye Sangen is an undead, and it is inevitable that he will have memory loss after waking up, and his understanding of wild creatures can confirm that he needs to survive in the wild for a long time. This can be inferred that he has been dealing with mercenaries for a long time, and he should develop the habit of vigilance. Second: Since he understands the local residents' hatred of the undead, but only has a superficial understanding of religious organizations, this shows that he is a character who is dismissive of religion, which eliminates the issue of sympathy. Third: He should be able to maintain a decisive mentality when it comes to unknown things. It would be too lax to let an unknown person rashly. A rational and highly vigilant being will not rush to the front line immediately. Most of them will choose to wait for an opportunity to act instead of talking directly. Another point to add: You seem to have some prejudice against knights and medieval aristocrats. Sorry, they represent the elite of that era and are generally well-educated. In addition, as for Lord Weng, I don't think she is a lord, but more like an uncultured Chinese idealistic feminist who traveled through the twentieth century.

The subject matter is novel and the writing is decent. What is lacking is a mature development system, cool points, and work operation. If you want to open a new book, you mentioned business simulation. Personally, I think you can refer to Caimao's "Gourmet Supplier" (which relies on cool points), and the air-conditioned "I Have an Adventure House" (this genre should be suitable for you), and Yuyou Zi's "Becoming a Boss from a B&B", Tututu's "Live Broadcasting Wilderness Challenge", if you have life and emotional experience, you can also write something like "Common People Return". Personally, I think the author has surpassed 70% of the starting point authors. It is much better than the nonsense written by some so-called masters who rely on the influence and fame of their hit works to buy seats. Come on! Look after you.

Succubus's final form

That Weng Ling is too stupid and too sweet. She always talks about the male lead and needs a male leader for everything. How can she survive in such a bad situation? The memory of her childhood is so clear, which shows that she has endured a lot of hardships. Why is she so white? She is not a flower in the greenhouse.

I've banned several of them, but I don't believe this one is still banned.

The skeleton elves filled the warehouse with tomatoes and celestial silkworm potatoes.

It's not easy, I finally have a cover. . .

This subject matter is okay, please come on, author.

The laugh point is low, The names are nondescript, neither fishy nor fishy, ​​and Western Fantasy has a lot of good names. The characters are white enough, like robots. It doesn't have the ease of farming, nor the adventure of Western Fantasy.