Wasteland Ranch

It is recommended that book friends who are passing by ignore the introduction and click on it to take a look at the content... By the way, I vote for recommendation and hope that I can always stick to the development path without wavering and not turn into some weird harem novel...

1. The character of the protagonist in the first chapter. The parents died. Although it was not a direct injury, it could be considered an indirect cause, but the protagonist did nothing. In wasteland novels, the character of a loser is either abusing the protagonist, or the character of the protagonist is ruined. Two, the setting of the heroine in Chapter 7, two hours of periodic amnesia, the logic is too flawed, I don't know how to complain, skip... Third, the setting of skills in Chapter 9, the thermal weapon hit –100, the one who can't hit anyone at a distance of two or three meters can only be a blind man.

I haven't read the book, I just collected it, and the answers are really awesome. I'm not interested in this subject. I'll open a new book in the future and read it carefully. Come on.

Introduction to the new book: Skeletons filled the warehouse with tomatoes and potatoes, death knights milked cows, vampires gnawed on watermelons, succubi carried eggplants, and the Lich King quietly licked the ice cream... The man with the crown of death pointed his sword at the clans: If you don't let the dead live, you will definitely let the living perish! (This book is based on Dungeons and Warriors, Warcraft, Heroes of Invincibility, and Mounted Blades) Well, martial arts farming was rejected, so I had to write skeleton farming. I hope that everyone who likes farming can go and support the new book. Thank you.

It's actually not a farming article, alas 😭, I read it after reading a comment saying it was a farming article.

I've finished reading it, and overall it's okay. Let's summarize the advantages and disadvantages, let's talk about the disadvantages first: 1. A common problem in web writing is that the architecture is too large and the planning is insufficient. Many characters are lost as soon as they are written. Man cannot set it up. Too little foreshadowing, sudden surrender, sudden death and so on. 2. The structure is confusing and there are too many settings. The points are not described well, and the aspects are not taken into account 3. The data is confusing, and millions and billions appear too casually. 4. If it's not cool enough, it's also a matter of foreshadowing. There are also some foils and contrasting techniques. Resulting in thin writing. Suggestion: Don't make the map grow too fast. This kind of grand strategic theme can be explored in depth in a single scene from multiple angles. An event is cut from different characters. Explain clearly the infected, new humans, humans, cities and other forces through events one by one. It's not so confusing, and I don't understand what's being said a lot of the time. There are also characters, special descriptions and event progression... Which is ugly to say the least. The author should be relatively new to the world and not understand the complexity of the world. The whole text is full of unreasonable construction and childishness... It is recommended to practice with small characters and small scenes. The future is promising

I suggest the author change the introduction. Ye Liangchen's breath is too serious and it is easy to scare away old readers.

I read more than 50 chapters, and then I couldn't stand it any longer. I thought it was okay at first, but when I went hunting with Bai Ruchu, I felt like it was about to end. Sure enough, a good farming novel doesn't have that feeling; Farming! If you start with a broken house, a tree, and a dog, it will be better than fighting and killing each other later.

A tree that is 4-50 meters high is probably about the height of this tower. I think it is okay if your butt breaks into several pieces. 😢😅

This is probably what it will look like after the mutation. . .