Green and Nature

See Chapter 7. The adventurous Druid is a bit of a straight man, which is very interesting. If you want to improve, you should pay attention to the gap in rhythm. For example, when saving the little girl at the beginning, the character should hesitate and struggle under a heavy onlooker atmosphere, and then take action when even her parents have given up. It's a bit more difficult to escape after being injured. Then, instead of being as boring as Zhang Wuji letting Yang Buhui go, you can let the little girl ride the black panther (the protagonist). The old man talks a lot, so it would be much more interesting if she was with him. In addition to the structure, the character setting needs to be more refined. When it comes to the characters, the narrative has the same sense of dialogue. This aspect can only be repaired slowly. Clumsy works of each other

I'm busy typing at work and after get off work every day. After adding your books to the bookshelf, I don't have time to read them. I have to find time to learn your strengths.