The Host Is Collapsing the Plot Again

To be honest, I have been reading books for 20 years, and most of the articles I read are written in the same mold, which is boring. But this novel is really good, the author's writing is very nice, the story is unconventional and not cliché, and it makes people want to put it down.

First of all, I think this book is really good! It makes me want to read page after page. Of course, I have also seen some people complain that it is "very Mary Sue", but the author has said it very early on, this book is originally very Mary Sue! I don't know what everyone is complaining about... Because it's because you are so suede that you look very suede! The author's writing is very good, the story is smooth, and there are few typos. I like every story very much. I used to only read books that have been "finished", but this is a rare book that I am "chasing". Reading is fun. Although Yu Yao always gets bad cards in every world, she plays the cards very well in the end. What about Mary Sue? The author said that she just wanted to write such a suave book~ The male protagonist in each world (not referring to the original male protagonist of each story, but the one who ended up with Yu Yao), although they were full of inferiority and paranoia at the beginning, they loved pure and strong. I'm really looking forward to the story finally explaining the reason for the development of Yu Yao and A Zhan's fate.... The system is very cute, and the host and the two often compliment each other in business. Although the new system is not very capable, it is very lovable. What I like most is watching the scumbag finally get what he wants, and watching Green Tea White Lotus finally reveal its true colors... Every story in this book gives me these pleasures. So I like it so much! In addition, the world where people are punished and the system cannot exist made me cry many times. It's not sadistic, it's very touching... I was a little uncomfortable with it at first. I felt that every story was so happy. Why is this story so "bottom-level" and "dark"... I used to be afraid of books like this. If it wasn't a "quick time" "short" story, a book about struggling at the bottom and finally enjoying happiness after going through all kinds of hardships, I wouldn't be able to read it. After all, life is so difficult, and reading books just makes you want everything to go smoothly. But fortunately, there is not so much struggle here. Maybe because it is a quick time travel, there is not so much space to "fight", so it is within the range that I can accept, and it brought me many, many tears of emotion... I am really looking forward to the story that follows~ Come on, author! Maybe there are always people leaving comments that dislike it, but don't be discouraged, because I really think it looks good! ! (That's why I write book reviews) I hope you write more every day, hahaha!

So far, this is the only novel that moved me to tears in almost every dimension. It would be great if there really was a fast-travel system in the world. I could experience different lives, find loyal love, learn many skills, master survival skills, and laugh while constantly exploring and dramatizing lines. After reading this book, I was really happy, really sweet, and in short, it was real and real. Thanks to the author for his hard work, his writing brought flowers to life, his heart blossomed, I really fell in love with it.

Why do you look so frustrated? It was also said that the male lead was changed later on. What happened to the male lead? Isn't there just one in the introduction?

After reading it, although the ending feels a bit rushed, the previous part is quite interesting. I wonder if the author is interested in writing separate stories for several of the worlds, such as the infinite horror book, the Doomsday Crazy Flower, and the Mermaid Book...

I hope that through this limited-time free release, more readers will pay attention to and like this work. Because it's really good-looking. Although it seems to be very silly, it is actually not bloody. It is a refreshing stream of its own. The most important thing is that the writing is good! So I didn't feel any discomfort while reading it. Every story is tear-jerking, I burst into tears 😭 Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

The plot is indeed bloody, but every bloody plot is a new one.        ，，，                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 but I don't know why I can't read it. This work really suits my taste. I can't think of anything more than a yandere boy, someone who doesn't care about love, a tear-jerker, and someone who is not silly and sweet... I can only think of this much for the time being.       ，，😌       ，，，，， So I like it very much. Everyone has their own love for radish and green vegetables. If you don't love them, please don't hurt them and just walk away silently. I only comment when I think it looks good. If it doesn't look good, I just discard it without saying anything. Writing is not easy, and I was a little worried when I heard that she was stuck. 😢

Yu Yao is the light in the gloomy life of the crippled boy Wen Shao, Charlotte is the flame in the dark world of the devil Yin Sa, Yao Chi Xiaoxian is the spell to wake up the sleeping Huo Yun, Master Yu's "brother" is the salvation of Chu Qinghan's revengeful life, Yaoyao is Lu Cheng The sunflower in the dark corner of the wall, Yao Guang is Xiao Xingge's only tenderness when he plays stupid, Xiao Y is the repression and restraint in Q's paranoid character, Yu Zhiqing is the tofu heart protected under Xi Xinglie's knife, and Taimei Yao is Gu Lin's elixir for healing. . . . I wrote nine stories and I cried nine times. Although I will shed tears involuntarily later, I still look forward to it. . .

So beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! It is rare to see a quick travel article that is a guide + revenge + slap in the face + salvation, etc. In short, it is a comprehensive version! Dada is super awesome 🤭😚 In fact, I personally keep looking for strategy articles I really like to read the strategy part like the ones in Dada's articles I just like to see the scumbag who loves but cannot help but regrets it! ! ! It's so cool😌 Nowadays, there are more and more quick time travels without cp. Many articles with cp quick time are not easy to find... Or there are a lot of comments about cp saying that they should not be used. There are also some poorly written ones. For example, the male protagonist's thighs are too thick and the female protagonist is very incompetent in the world of quick time... A bit speechless The big plot is also very good. It doesn't make people feel stuck or watery after reading it. Although the ending of each world always leaves people unsatisfied, it is not unfinished To put it simply, it is three, four or five words It's so beautiful! ! ! The writing is great! ! ! ! It's the best! ! ! ! !

It turned out that I was looking for new books to read, but I didn't know how to find books about women's videos. Haven't seen it. Beginning with Chapter 11. 5 Recommendation votes will be given out every day. Congratulations to everyone who writes novels

I will never understand the psychology behind the request to make an enemy fall in love with me and then get rid of me. After all, if I had an enemy, I would definitely be disgusted and not want to have any emotional entanglement with him. Is it necessary to sacrifice so much if I want to take revenge on someone? Besides, using someone else's body to fall in love with my lover is quite strange.

The writing felt very good, but reading the whole story felt very depressing. And when choosing the final male protagonist, was it necessary to choose the most imperfect person for the sake of uniformity, or was it obsession? Don't wait for him to be paranoid and evil, as long as he has a righteous heart that loves you. Moreover, the heroine herself feels that she has no power to protect herself. Although she has experienced many worlds, she still puts herself in a state of powerlessness. She has no confident courage and always has the thought of "WTF" lingering in her heart.

20，2，， It always feels like there could be a side story but there isn't. This is probably one of the characteristics of writing in a big way, leaving room for the reader's imagination. In short, stick to genuine subscription and always support us!

The author said it was a Mary Sue from the very beginning! ! ! When you read the book, can you read the introduction first? The author's writing style is getting better and better, and the plot becomes more and more interesting as you read it. Tell the truth! Although I was mentally prepared to be a Mary Sue, I didn't expect it to be such a Mary Sue! Well (ಡωಡ)hiahiahia I like ٩( •̀㉨•́ )و get!

I really can't stand it anymore. In the first world, there are only a few scumbags. They can't destroy the characters, and they are allowed to be the protagonists of the Mary Sue world. Isn't it really disgusting? I almost feel sick. Seeing the reborn male protagonists and male supporting characters feel good about themselves as if they had drunk tons of oil. They feel that the female protagonist is a little white rabbit. They want to be good to her, but their faces are based on what they did in their previous lives. It's really disgusting. The female protagonist is also like a dumpling. I feel physically uncomfortable when I read it. Wasn't the author disgusting when he wrote it? They really don't deserve it. Too greasy. Do you still allow these scumbags to add to the relationship between the male and female protagonists, just to disgust me, the reader?

This novel...😂The bloody thing has started again! Hahaha, so funny😂

I was almost halfway through what I originally thought was a good book, but a pair of BL suddenly appeared. I really don't understand why many authors today like to intersperse BL with BG. I really don't like 😅. If you want to write it, you can open another book and write it. It's not necessary. Some people don't like BL so they should read romance. (Representing only personal views)

Emmmm's story looks really good. The disadvantage is that the sense of déjà vu is too strong... Especially for the male protagonist, his mental journey is the same every time: This woman has bad intentions, I hate her, I want to kill her → Why is she being nice to me? She must have some agenda for me → She is very cute → I love her so much → Why doesn't she love me → I am blackened → It turns out that she loves me, and I want to save her. This is the most common male protagonist template. All fantasy worlds are like this. The most annoying thing is that every time there are all kinds of amnesia and misunderstandings... The male protagonist in the real world is a rich kid who has been lost for many years. He has an indifferent personality. After falling in love with the heroine, he has low self-esteem and crazy restraint, and then he recognizes his ancestors and returns to the clan... Objective analysis and rational discussion, I suggest that the author can enrich the character library, and hope that the author's books will sell better and better.

It's so cool, it makes me sick. If you want to write a quick travel game with cp, I suggest you don't get tied up in the first world. You can figure out the subsequent story from the first few chapters and develop it later. By the way, do any sisters recommend one without cp? Thank you.

It feels like the heroine did the green tea thing in the name of completing a mission, and the author just gave the heroine a reason.

So much love! ! ! I have played almost every world 5 or 6 times! ! !

I am a man. Today I came to the female channel to read novels. The male channel is tired of reading and I don't know what to read. I came to the female channel to see if anyone knows what novel to read first.

It's so frustrating... In almost every world, the heroine sacrifices herself to save others or the world. System Apple's growth is almost non-existent, and it seems cliché to use system mistakes or inexplicable misunderstandings to promote the plot. I don't feel much about Mary Sue, she is quite satisfied with the unlucky little white flower working as a worker. (As soon as the core is changed, the male protagonist and the male counterpart have an inexplicable affection for the female protagonist, which is really very Mary Sue.)

Treasure, treasure, I finally found one. I finished reading it again. I'm going to go find my little sister to discuss it. Woohoo, cheers up.

I don't quite understand how someone can reach the peak of life without breaking down their character. For example, if the character is cowardly and unable to resist domestic violence, how can such a person reach the pinnacle of life without breaking down? Kneel down and lick me, don't hit me? I really couldn't enjoy the first few dozen chapters of the first story, so I skipped it. After reading the stepsisters, it's still the same routine, so I abandoned the article.

The original protagonist was tortured all his life in his previous life, but now the protagonist is here, so the male protagonist and supporting actors find out that the protagonist is not bad at all? It's nothing, I'm just curious. I'm obviously doing the same thing, but can I feel okay just because I don't feel like it? Hurt is hurt, right? They all do it the same way, but the reactions are different, which is hard to understand. If the original owner came and did what they agreed to, I believe it would not be so beautiful.

I couldn't stand it, I couldn't break down the character and reach the peak. It was too awkward to watch. I thought the first story might not be well written and I would change it in the future, but I read the next few and they were all like this.

The character design and plot are not perfect, and the three views are a bit incorrect.

There are many flaws. The male protagonist is not described too much, and he has no idea about his character or thoughts. The story ends very hastily. I thought that when I return to reality or there will be more background explanations about the system later in the story, I really forget everything. Anyway, Mary Sue is very happy to watch it, and overall it is okay.

The author's introduction didn't lie to me, it turned out to be a bloody Mary Sue