One Piece Supreme

I'll tell the truth, there's no need to delete me on QQ Reading.

The author writes this book as a fan of Fengyun,

At present, it seems that the heroine is one of Nami or just one.

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The more I watch it, the more rubbish it becomes. The more I watch it, the less I want to watch it. After more than 40 episodes, I don't know how many people can watch it. I was convinced by asking for advice specifically. Not a friend, nothing, just a treat. It's hard to watch this kind of person. They're rubbish.

Didn't I buy an awesome sword? Didn't I have a Moko Wuliang? Why don't I use it? I'm still there punching the enemy one after another...

The Japanese anime pirate culture is really scary. In this book, when you travel to the world of pirates, you become a pirate and you still have to kill the navy.

It feels weird to use martial arts in the second dimension. It would be better if it was unlimited.

Freeing slaves feels so boring.

Just jumped into the sea? Can a person who has eaten a devil fruit still go into the sea? Ox

I suggest you change the cover. I have seen several books with this cover.

Why is the cover not from One Piece or Fengyun?

I can't compliment the protagonist's character. Seriously, why are you going against the navy but not killing the navy? It doesn't make sense to survive being surrounded by the navy every time. Don't mention Goldfinger, it's useless.

Did you eat the immortal golden body of the author's pig's foot?

Author, can you answer me? How can these martial arts skills of pig's feet be released without true energy and internal strength?

I can't understand how martial arts can exert force without true energy and internal force. Fengyun martial arts is almost fantasy. By One Piece, it's not even low-level martial arts. Low-level martial arts at least have internal force. This one doesn't even have internal force. I won't watch it anymore.

Don't the authors read what they write? No matter how I look at it, I feel aggrieved. Although it has collapsed, Fengyun martial arts has been weakened a lot in One Piece. The system in which Fengyun exists is almost a fantasy outpost.

Why did I just realize that the navy was just at the door of Tianlong's house, asking Qingzhi to go to support, and it didn't take half a minute to arrive? Faster than Kizaru?

It was okay at first, but the rest of the writing feels like a different person, except that he is just pretending to be cool.

Why not teach the crew how to learn martial arts instead of fighting alone?

Where is your immortal golden body? Gone? Disposable?

I always feel that the style of calligraphy and painting is weird🤨

I suggest the author change the name of the martial arts, for example, use the name from the TV series or something. You are so embarrassed by this name!

Seeing that your recommendation ticket 1111 is too awkward, I'll give you one as a gift.

It's a pity that a good original idea has a relatively bad impact due to unfamiliarity with the plot and settings in One Piece, especially some basic settings. I suggest that if you write fan fiction in the future, you still need to carefully understand the basic settings and concepts of the original story. A good fan story is based on the original story and opens up the imagination, but when you think about it carefully, it seems to be very logical.