The Legend of the Hanging Sword in Shushan

This is called Xia. Those so-called martial arts and fairy novels can only be said to be fantasy novels disguised as Xia. They are all the same routine novels. It depends on who can change the skin better. Updating tens of thousands of words a day is no different from the toys coming out of the factory. That's why online articles are often talked about. 70% of the articles on Qidian. Com include fantasy, martial arts, fairy tales, etc., Without writing, 27% can be read from the past, 2% have good writing, 1% are excellent works with ideas, and 0.1% Or even 0.01% Are excellent products. I have read thousands of novels for more than ten years. It was not until I read this article that I realized for the first time that there is such a great talent in online writing. A combination of martial arts and fairy tales. Even if there are no immortals, there is an ethereal fairy spirit everywhere. It can be said to be a martial arts classic in recent years. The narrative reminded me of "The Legend of the Demon Cat", where I dreamed back to the prosperous Tang Dynasty, and in the later period, I saw the desolate scene of the Tang Dynasty being in turmoil and fragmented. The background is similar to that of Water Margin 108 when the magic star comes to the world. But this novel combines the immortals with the human world, and it is up to humans to break the seal, and destiny cannot be violated, releasing monsters, monsters, and monsters. The background of the immortals and demons is perfectly integrated into the narrative, and the whole article has a mysterious and romantic color. Not to mention the Tang Dynasty legends mixed in with each other. It is simply inseparable from the eyes. I followed it for several days and nights. It was so interesting. Actually, when I read the end, I thought of the soundtrack of Legend of Sword and Fairy. A few worldly songs are quite suitable, provided that the protagonist ends up far away from the hustle and bustle of the temple and wandering around the world Although I can't wait to read the whole novel, I still hope that the author will not be in a hurry to update and the quality will drop. Polish it patiently and don't let down such a good novel.

The writing is really good, it feels very real, and there is a sense of substitution. Unfortunately, there is no desire to watch the business war part now, and Bai Fu has experienced so much now, and is still so passive about relationships. From the beginning, Yang has been passively fond of Yang, and then Bai Li's line is the most interesting. Unfortunately, Bai had Yang in his heart at that time, and later he was cheated. Little sister Dugu was also very good. Later, she declined to marry the King Guang, and she was probably a tragic character. (Reading on Bai Fu's behalf, she suffered emotional betrayal. Then I met little sister Dugu, and I was deeply impressed by this character. Although her appearance is not the most beautiful, her personality seems to suit Bai Fu very well. She likes playing chess and gardening the most, which is a pity.) Although the princess line was buried early, as soon as she came to Chang'an, it gradually came online. Later, she was mistaken for Li and gave things and blessings, but there was still no spark with Bai. The two of them got along for so many chapters and were entrusted by the mother-in-law. They were completely passively liked again. Because Yang was like this before, and what master and brother warned him later, I can only say that because Yang's writing was so deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, I didn't have a good impression of the princess. On the contrary, in my heart, Bai Li was the most suitable, from Qingcheng to Chang'an and Luoyang, and then to escape from prison. They came to pretend to get along with each other, and after being discovered, it was another experience. Except for the first opportunity in the valley with Yang, the rest were basically with Li. I hope Li can have a good ending. I will raise him first. After seeing the art of war and entering the business world, I really can't pursue it. In addition, I feel that the author is better at writing war scenes. Unfortunately, because he is so good at it, the words he uses are common words in Internet articles, especially the description of crying and crying, which is not worthy of the character rendering of this book. If he can put more effort into the description of crying, I think it will be even better. In general, I am a fan of the author. It is a pity that he has not written other books, otherwise I would still be able to read it now. I'm looking forward to the rest of Bai Fu's story. I don't want to think about the rest of the plot now, just enjoy it.

? Fatoudui is convenient for taste. It will take a few days to let it go for air. Later, Dududu will send out several cigarette pouches on the street.

The author's writing style is very good, but it is taboo to write about an abusive protagonist in an online article and describe a female supporting character with unhealthy views in large amounts of ink.

I read it in one day. The author is such a talented person. There are few books in which the protagonist often disappears, but the overall character is well portrayed. At least after reading the whole story, the words and deeds of several elders are clearly visible. Many of the mottos of the master and Taifu Xu are really enlightening. As for Yichan, in fact, Senior Brother Qin had already written about this person thoroughly, so the subsequent actions were all expected. Many details in Chang'an also showed that she and Bai Fu were not the same people. In addition, I think the author should find a balance between narrative and popular science. For example, Taifu's talk about landscapes is very good, but writing too much about it does not have much effect on the development of the story. After all, it is not a paper about archaeology. I guess the author wants to show us some historical and cultural studies, which is good. I find some parts very interesting, but I think most readers would prefer to see the interaction between the characters and how the plot develops. The plot is still a long way from the troubled times. I guess the normal situation should be the start of the Anshi Rebellion? No matter what, the troubled times are the climax of the whole story. I hope the author can continue this quality and write the power struggle for hegemony well. I guess one of the heroines may be Princess Qingluan. Also, I really hope that Li Xuexuan can become the final heroine. Even if the author does not consider her, please try to give her a better ending. Finally, I hope that more readers can see this work. This is indeed an excellent work.

Watching Yang Yichan's plot gave me a little brain congestion

I'll just say a few words while I wait for the update. The following contains some spoilers This book is considered a masterpiece among recent martial arts. Seeing Chapter 290, this woman really disgusts me. However, the protagonist in the author's novel is still very immature and needs to experience things like deception and betrayal to shock his growth in order not to appear abrupt. (Just like the scene at the beginning where he helped his junior brother to cheat and was framed due to human sophistication, the master and the brothers all saw it clearly. The most fundamental thing is that he did help his junior brother to cheat. The protagonist couldn't understand it and was still angry. This was well written) Besides, this Yang Yichan was so greedy that he lived in Shu. At first, he was unable to show off because he was living under the fence of others and was weak. But later on, as he started to practice martial arts and was protected by his senior brothers, and when he saw the "vast world" outside the mountain gate, his heart became wild. I have read so many martial arts novels, and I feel that this is a very standard "green tea" in martial arts novels. Although this character disgusts me, the author writes it well. Even when Yang Yichan was having "green tea", she was still filial to her father, and her image was quite full. (But here I don't quite understand why she and her mother are so close. Her father worked hard to raise her up alone, but her mother ran away early and left the father and daughter alone. Her reaction should be very "resentful", rather than being very close after confirming her mother's identity. She also didn't react well when her mother scolded her father for being useless. Appropriate, but it can also be understood here that she is indeed the same kind of "green tea" as her mother, with a high heart and looking down on the honest and inactive knight-errant like her father.) I personally feel that it is a bit too hasty here. The relationship between her and her mother can change from weak to strong, but the plot does not progress very fast and there is no need to go into detail here.

The author's writing is really good and very detailed. I feel that this book can actually be regarded as a historical grouping. If I had applied for history, I would have gotten better results. I can learn from the author.

The first 800,000 words are all paving the way for the protagonist's growth and rise. It would have been okay 10 years ago, but now with such a slow pace, it still abuses the protagonist and persuades most passers-by to quit. What a pity😓

The author does not need to worry, development is a circle. When the starting point of the novel reaches its peak, it is time to get tired of reading. The traditional style of novels will slowly come back. Just wait and see when.

Hello author. I prefer to read Chinese classical literature or history, gods and monsters. Writing martial arts novels is no longer popular in the era of online literature, especially traditional martial arts. Nowadays, martial arts has taken on a new dimension in online literature, incorporating some elements that older writers did not have. I read the first chapter. The writing has both traditional elegance and the characteristics of modern online writing. The wording tends to be classical, and some parts of the description have the style of online writing. I have also written articles and novels, and I feel deeply how difficult it is. But when I write, I mostly write a few paragraphs when I feel like it. When I start writing, I agree not to place too much emphasis on fame and wealth. Full-time writers may consider this aspect very important. Your article appropriates poetry, which greatly adds to the ancient charm of the article. I rarely study poetry. This is good. The martial arts novelist Liang Yusheng comes to mind, but Liang Yusheng wrote many of his poems in his martial arts novels by himself. If you can do it, you are undoubtedly a skilled person. The writing is naturally a characteristic of this era. I personally think that this kind of traditional martial arts with the characteristics of online writing combines the author's innovation with the characteristics of the times (after all, many readers commented that the world of our generation is different), and has great room for development. Many works by those senior martial arts writers can be called classics and can withstand the waves. It would be a blessing if today's online literature works can do this! Please write for what you want in your heart. Even if it does not meet the taste of the public, your talents are insufficient, and times have changed, you must still write for what you want in your heart and your supporters. Write whenever you have time. It is very difficult for this kind of author. My humble work "The Legend of the Chivalrous Heroes" is not for promotion and promotion, but communication is acceptable.

To be honest, the writing style and plot are all top-notch. But seeing that Yang was really incompetent and forced to feed me, I was disturbed.

It's time to get a physical book or change the channel. It's pretty good money in terms of writing, but the plot is too slow and the protagonist is too weak. It's not that the combat is weak, but that the mind, thoughts, and behavior are all unsatisfactory. It's not enjoyable to read, and it's even a bit depressing. This book will be even more popular when it catches up with Jin Yong's martial arts craze. Now everyone prefers fast and refreshing books, and some book friends may find it difficult to read. Yang is a very poisonous person inside. He has not died for a long time. I really can't stand it anymore.

This book was written in the wrong year. I thought it would be a pity to explode five to ten years ago...

The writing is pretty good. The writing style of Wudou is crisp and clear but has traces to follow. The level is higher than 90% of the books in the ranking.

The writing is good and well written. But there is one thing I don't like. The characters in the book kneel down all the time, including ministers, Shaolin monks and others. Before the Song and Tang Dynasties, people did not have so much soft-heartedness and kneeling culture. The Chinese people should have the culture of kneeling became popular after they were enslaved by the Manchus. The courtiers called themselves slaves, and the Manchus' governance made people sigh.

In fact, it can be seen that the author has put a lot of effort into it, but I feel that the style is not suitable for the starting point.

Well, how should I put it? It's suitable for physical books. The book is very good, but it's a pity.

I still find it difficult to accept the Xiao Longnu incident, but it's okay, after all, it was Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu who fell in love first. However, Yang and the male protagonist in this book actually come together according to the author's arrangement and character design. However, I'm sorry, I am not a reasonable person, and it is still difficult for me to accept the above ideas rationally, neutrally and objectively from my heart. I remember a friend of mine who is a fan of Jin Yong. When I discussed Xiao Long Nv with him, he mentioned the saying "Heaven is crippled and earth is crippled." Yang Guo's arm was cut off because of the lack of ground. So they are a match made in heaven. But I think it is precisely because of these artificial shadows, or settings, that they follow the author's pen and express the thoughts that the author wants to convey to the readers. I know but still cannot accept it. Because this conflicts with my purpose of reading novels. Although I don't read novels purely for fun, I don't want to see such terrible things in the book. There is always a type of person who conveys what he yearns for and becomes the yearning for others. There is always a group of people who tell what they have experienced and become what others have experienced. There are also two types of people. One type wants to get what they yearn for or may yearn for from others, and the other type wants to relieve themselves from others from the pain that they cannot let go. And I think it's true that a person is a guest of ethics, but as a human being, you have to be clear about love and hate. Purely based on my personal preference, I hate this plot because it is not what I yearn for, and I don't want it to be what I suffer. Even in the book, just like I like Jin Yong's novels, I still can't let go of the Xiao Longnu incident. But coming out, in terms of effect alone, it is a classic, especially when Jianghu laughs and grudges are expressed. I got pregnant, but I don't dare to watch it a second time in the short term.

35 Years ago you were a god

When I read Chapter 56, I had always thought that Bai Fu just sympathized with Yang. I jumped to the back and read a few chapters. After combining the book reviews and the author's replies, I understood the character of Yang. The author's purpose is not only to be different from ordinary short stories, but also to create this kind of character with the intention of becoming a classic. I don't dare to judge whether this book can become a classic. Firstly, the book has not been finished yet, and secondly, I have only read this point, but from what I can see so far, the author has this potential and ambition. I originally thought that the two heroines mentioned by the author were a masked woman in white and the other was a Miao woman, but later I found out that I seemed to have guessed wrong. The title of the chapter "If Life Is Only Like the First Meeting" is indeed very meaningful (wry smile). In fact, I think the author would be able to write a traditional plot of traditional martial arts very well if he wanted to write it, but the author should have a higher pursuit. However, I, a young warrior with pure love who kills a tauren with one sword, really can't stand a character like Yang. I'm just eating candy at the moment, and I can't bear to watch such a stomach-ache plot. I can only put this book on the bookshelf and read it later. I would like to make some small suggestions. In fact, I feel that there are many detailed historical stories in the first dozens of chapters that are a bit redundant. There is no need to write them in such detail. I am blind to history and don't know how many of them are historically accurate, so I dare not read them carefully for fear of confusing my shallow historical knowledge. Moreover, I feel that they have little effect on the plot, so a brief explanation is enough. Finally, I wish the author success!

After reading more than 400 chapters, is Yang Yichan still alive? You can feel the author's serious attitude towards writing a book, but the existence of the character Yang in this book is really disgusting to readers and has affected the perception quite a bit. I would like to ask, when can Yang receive the lunch box? Come back and finish it then.

It's really not like saying it like this, it's just a plot. Writing about Yang requires more writing power and the plot needs to be more reasonable. The evaluation of being poisonous is really unreasonable, considering the author's painstaking efforts.

The book is really well written, but the character of Yang really broke my guard. I just finished reading the first volume, and then I read the reviews and found out that there are so many ups and downs in the later part. It would be nice to give her a plot to kill her during her time in Beijing, or let her receive a box lunch. This kind of plot is really not likeable.

The writing is quite good. It's rare to see such good martial arts novels nowadays.

In fact, some familiar martial arts can appear in novels. The numerous martial arts secrets in Jin Yong's Gu Long novels are a big part of the appeal. Moreover, the secret books in Jin Yong's novels have simple and interesting names that are very eye-catching. Although plagiarism of Mr. Jin Yong's novels must be avoided, some common martial arts names should be able to appear, such as some martial arts classics of Shaolin, Iron Cloth Shirt, Golden Bell Cover, etc. In addition, you can use the pseudonym to take advantage of Mr. Jin. For example, the Eighteen Palms for Subduing the Dragon can be set to thirty-eight palms in the Tang Dynasty. Mr. Jin's Eight Parts of Tianlong contains the Twenty-eight Palms for Subduing the Dragon. Xiao Feng (also known as Xu Zhu) improved it to eighteen palms (the last ten palms are not as subtle as the first eighteen, so the last ten palms are integrated into the first eighteen). Why are the last ten palms not subtle? Maybe one is missing. Some (reasonable guesses are enough), the setting of this novel can be set as the thirty-eight palms passed down by an unknown old monk (the saying of subduing the dragon is originally in the Buddhist scriptures), and then the protagonist finally retires and passes it to the beggar gang. This is a string of connections, and it also touches on Mr. Jin's literary style. In addition, it will also add a bit of romance to the novel. Martial arts is a romance for men~

I hope it can be made into a TV series. It's too easy to be touched when reading novels, so a TV series won't be possible.

If you, the author, don't write anymore, you still have to recommend a book to our book shortage. Qidian's list recommendations are getting more and more popular.

The plot is well laid out. How can youth be without regrets? You can think that the protagonist is naive and childish. You can also think that the protagonist is sincere and does not go against his true heart. Instead, it is Yang who changes in Vanity Fair. This is the portrayal of most people. Where can you give up the bottom line for fame and fortune? Yang Yichan

The beginning is too poisonous, and that's not a big deal, but everything turns out to be so stupid and it harms the protagonist, and the protagonist is so enamored with Xue, so they fall in love with Xue after going through something that seems to be a test of life and death? And the things given by the senior masters were given away so easily, and the adventures and opportunities were just revealed? Want to write a story that is both mysterious and mysterious but ends up being inconsistent? Alas, the book is a good book and the concept is very clever. It's a pity.