Human Apostle

See Chapter 11. The author responded to me in the book list and post more seriously, so I read it again more carefully. The structure of the work has detailed settings and balance. In fact, how to balance supernatural forces with political economy has always been a difficult problem when creating urban supernatural powers. This work has a subdivided map of the urban campus, and the balance is very careful. It can be seen that the author has thoughts to express. The narration basically has the male protagonist leading the rhythm. Generally this is not good. On the contrary, it is necessary to downplay him and isolate him, which will highlight his wolf nature. You can take a look at the narratives of the first few Wolverine movies and The Matrix. There is a skill you need here, that is, everyone is a normal city in the bright field. Then use night or dark lines or copies to directly create dark scenes. This kind of repeated maxing out of the same event or map is very suitable for the protagonist's temperament. Finally, there is his partner. The distance should be kept apart and the age of the girl should be lowered. This feels better, so this is probably how an uncle matches a lolita. The action design should be cool, and it should be given according to the requirements of action movies. The tone should be cool and dark, and use a yellow car when necessary. The protagonist talks too much, so it would be better if everything was restrained so that the killing would be shocking. For multiple revisions, you need concise, violent and smooth writing, which is more suitable for such a structure and core. Come on~

[Qianshan Testing Poison] Rating: 9.2 After Effects: As for the book Human Apostle, Qianshan personally thinks it is very good. To be honest, Qianshan has conceived a similar book before, but it was too low-key and did not dare to write it. As expected, not writing it is the best. If I had written it, I think I would have been crushed into a scum in comparison. Articles on the subject of awakening always make people feel very immersed, and the first three chapters are of great weight. The author's writing and logic are also very clear and smooth. It is effortless to read, and the online processing is also very good. It seems that a small goal is thrown out randomly, but in fact it may be a small goal of "earning one billion first". Qianshan has already invested, and I hope it will be a big boost.

Spiritual energy recovery type (probably). The world mutates, the gods descend, and the protagonist is reborn back to before the mutation. One of the more interesting things is that there is an "I" inside the body, which reminds Doufu of the king in Yu-Gi-Oh. I wonder if there will be a plot in the future where this "I" comes out to control the body when the protagonist is in a coma. Personally, I am quite looking forward to this. Others are just average, without any highlights. 7 points, come on!

Why don't you write it? I feel that this book is generally very smooth and good to read. The setting of this book is quite novel. Although there are some flaws, it is the first book after all, so it is already very good.

It felt pretty good at first. Have the motivation to keep reading

The title and title of the book are a bit interesting. After reading the beginning, isn't this some sort of spiritual energy revival flow? My interest suddenly dropped. After reading a few more chapters, they are all about the introduction and development of routines. They are quite satisfactory and there are no innovative breakthroughs. It's not a poisonous weed, but it's nothing fancy either, just like that.

Liangcao Aura Resurrection Stream, but it uses a relatively novel setting. The plot is quite interesting and the twist is bizarre enough. It's pretty good. You can take a look.

In fact, your writing is quite good, but it's too fast-paced and not detailed enough. But it shouldn't be too detailed, it should be a little sensational.

I'm looking for a role, Jiangshan. I hope it's on the freshman list.

I think it's good. Why are there so few people?

The student party has no money to charge. You can only subscribe to your chapter by grabbing red envelopes. When I have money - let's talk about it then. Haha

I hope the author can make the plot bigger and add some sense of logical analysis. If it is just plain and straightforward, people will lose interest in the mid-term. I hope the author can learn from some of San Zha's silly jokes. Haha, I'm optimistic about you. I have added 1,000 starting coins.

All the gods and demons are showing off, only humans are being beaten

Okay - Please don't look at the picture above, okay, I think you have already seen it. I think the author can work hard to recommend it. If a friend has an author, you can recommend the chapter Okay, bye

A book of food and even grass jelly, why doesn't it feel popular?

Emmm The writing is good Why did you lose it?

Why not write 😡😡😡😡😡😡😜😡😜😜

Keep writing 😡😡😡

Let me start from Sequence. I originally planned to read this book, but found out that it was actually a eunuch. In addition, in the sequence, there is a bug in the setting of insect blood, such as abyss worms and other things. Throw the insect blood in and it will be done in minutes, so it doesn't have to be so troublesome at all. Unless the author makes additional settings for this insect blood. Don't be afraid of the incredible, but be afraid of logical contradictions.

Sequence players need 500 fan points before they can speak. Do you think it's worth it? There are typos in the novel, and there are always wrong sentences. There are 2-3 wrong sentences in one chapter, which makes my head hurt, but it doesn't make people complain.