When League of Legends Comes to the American Comics Universe

First, let's talk about the experience of reading a book. The plot is incoherent and jumps all over the place, making it very tiring to watch. Personally, this allows me to skim through the page, quickly flip through the pages, and find what I want to see. Writing. To be honest, the writing style is not bad, at the level of an average author. The problem is, the author wants too many things, and some of them cannot be balanced. Whether it's dialogue or combat, there's something mixed in that doesn't go smoothly. It would be a pity to throw it away, and it would be tasteless to eat. A little suggestion. First the main line, then branch lines. The main line makes people want to watch it, and the sub-lines can make the characters fuller. Only by complementing each other can we go far. Don't delay the plot. Sometimes you really need some writing formulas. When to be explosive and when to be depressed, just apply the formula and there is no shame. Meme! Geng, this kind of thing... Doesn't care about oldness, what matters is that you use it in the right place. Used correctly, it's a blast! Used incorrectly, embarrassing. 80/200... Is it suitable for a beautiful country? Supporting roles. Have your own ideas and your own story line. It must be able to connect with the pig's feet, and the logic must be clear at the very least. Kneeling and licking is no longer popular. Moreover, you, who earn 30 million per day, go out and give fake certificates to people by yourself? Description. Conversations between characters and descriptions of battles can be mixed in, but the readers must discover them on their own rather than being forced into it. Mix in some little things. You have to drink soup to eat steamed buns. Do you think so? Of course, adding things does not mean you are procrastinating. While it's still early, change it if you can.

The writing is pretty good, but the more I write, the more chaotic it becomes. There are transitions here and there, here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and now here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and here and there, and now here and there, and now here and there, and now here and there, and here and there, and now here and there, and now here and now, and here and there, and here and now.

The writing is quite good, but it is too messy and the transitions are inconsistent. When I turned to the next page, I even thought I had missed a few pages. And at the end of each chapter, there are a few sentences from the author saying, "For people like me who listen to books, the senses are really bad It's tasteless, it's a pity to throw it away.

It's well written, but the plot is not very coherent.

The first 30 chapters basically have nothing to do with Marvel. They spent too much time writing things that have nothing to do with the title of the book.

The hero Yongen was released too late. Many people no longer play LOL. His popularity is not very high. I should write a story that everyone knows.

Why is the name of the tavern not called Chivalrous Tenderness?

Come on, two million words a day

Let's re-open another book. This is the subject matter. Many people like to read it. If you write well, the results will not be much different. Just abandon this book. The early stage is too toxic.

Today, with this familiar writing style, it turns out that the author is Pang Tongmao.