The Way of the Gods

I couldn't stand it anymore, so I wrote several dialogues between the two ghosts, and they were still worse than the dialogue, extremely poisonous, poisonous, disgusting.

Hongmeng Youdao God and Dao are the same

The content is good, but the main character is very different and his character is disgusting to watch.

I feel like the main character and supporting characters are all mentally retarded, and they talk too much nonsense to themselves!

This book is relatively new to the incense and Shinto genre, and it has a good setting. In terms of writing, you can slightly reduce your secondary psychological dialogue, and use more modifiers and environmental descriptions in fighting to achieve a sense of resonance and immersion with readers.

It looks pretty good, and there was nothing wrong with Steel after reading the first few chapters.

You are really a eunuch, so let's put it aside and study hard to accumulate literary literacy materials and strive to produce high-quality products in the future. In fact, there is a Shinto novel whose writing style is even worse than yours, but I insisted on it.

Write your recommendations well, just like the recommendations I write. You can refer to the recommendations I wrote. I'd like to put it on the top of your head.

You categorized it wrong, into Eastern Fantasy, or Mythology and Cultivation, which has more people than this one. The keyword "Shinto" was not found.

Use the Eastern Shinto to create the avenue of ghosts and gods in the underworld, suppress the human way and unify the gods and humans.