The Strongest Grandmaster Across the Heavens

I read the beginning; it was a very ordinary opening. The logic was acceptable. The language was fluent. The basic writing skills were decent. Here are my personal opinions. First: The degree of freedom is too low. Everything is guided by the system, making the protagonist seem incredibly incompetent. The humor feels like clownish antics, not the refined, game-like experience.

The fact that the system has intelligence is a bit jarring.

I checked the recommendation votes, wow, that's terrible! Okay, I've decided to give you two of my four recommendation votes each day, starting tomorrow. Here you go, good luck! The book's introduction is really good.

I just want to ask fellow readers: During the fight between the protagonist and Jiang Li, the protagonist, risking injury, used the bell to put Jiang Li under an illusion. Am I the only one who felt this was jarring? Shouldn't the protagonist have channeled spiritual energy into the magical artifact, making it effective? Have all the cultivation novels I've read over the years been fake?

I couldn't take it anymore after chapter 34. The protagonist and the little girl he just met are acting like father and daughter, with no sense of unease towards a stranger? Besides, a child from a poor family, who has experienced so much hardship, shouldn't be so spoiled. This is toxic, extremely toxic.

The author's writing is indeed quite poor, like a child's. I skipped through eight chapters and couldn't take it anymore, so I gave up. Before leaving, I still want to say a few words: Although the author's writing is not good, you still managed to write hundreds of chapters. I believe you will definitely improve in your future books.

I only read five chapters. The protagonist's incredibly chuunibyou (delusional) personality and intelligence, along with the system's incredibly chuunibyou-like way of speaking, made me immediately drop the book. I want to ask, is this the author's first time writing a book? Only those who are absolutely new to reading novels would read such a chuunibyou protagonist. Anyone with even a little reading experience would abandon it.

I'll pop up occasionally to let people know I exist!

This type is alright, but the system rambles on too much, taking up half of each chapter. It's a bit scatological, not very wordy, and a bit padded.

The system's assistance is so weak, and the protagonist's talent is equally rubbish—and he's the strongest ancestor? Are you kidding me?