The Strongest Grandmaster Across the Heavens

I read the beginning, a very ordinary beginning. The logic makes sense. Speech is fluent. Basic skills are okay. Let's talk about my personal views. One: The degree of freedom is too low. Everything is directed by the system, and the protagonist is very incompetent. Funny also belongs to clown swagger, not the legendary game dust. This is why system literature generally resists being too intelligent and has too little freedom! The characteristics of the second protagonist are not obvious, or the character is vague. The opening scene with the sword should be very suitable for system flow. Third, be grounded. You understand this yourself. Fourth, reward 200 starting coins 😌

The system has intelligence, which makes people a little confused

I looked at the recommendation tickets. It's so miserable. Well, I decided to give you two of the four recommendation tickets every day. Starting tomorrow, take them away. Come on, it's really a good introduction to reading.

I just want to ask all the fellow Taoists who are reading. When Zhu Tiao was fighting with Jiang Li. In the end, the pig's feet were injured. Taking out the bell made Jiang Li fall under the illusion. Am I the only one who saw something happening here? Shouldn't spiritual power be input into the spiritual weapon? You can fight the enemy with a spiritual weapon. Could it be that the novels about cultivating immortals that I have read for so many years are all fake? Or is the system really watery? The author's description of the system. I'm really speechless. Also, the total time before and after practicing pig trotters is reduced by one year. Fight. Killed with a vendetta. Being robbed. Kill. The state of mind has also undergone a baptism. Can you act a little more mature? Sometimes the author describes pig's feet. I can't stand it. You can only watch it in fast forward. But generally it's okay. Can see. But there are a few places where the moments really shine.

After reading Chapter 34, I couldn't hold on anymore. The protagonist and the little Loli who just met were kissing like father and daughter. The stranger didn't feel any resistance at all? Besides, children from poor families have gone through many vicissitudes of life. How can they be so delicate, poisonous, and extremely poisonous?

The author's writing style is indeed quite poor. Like a child, I skipped through eight chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. I gave up. I still want to say a few words before leaving. Although the author's writing style is not good, he can still insist on writing hundreds of chapters. I believe you will make progress in writing books in the future.

I only read five chapters. The protagonist's incomparable character and IQ, as well as the systematic way of speaking, made me decisively abandon the book. I would like to ask, the author must be writing a book for the first time. With such a character of the protagonist, only those who have just read the novel for the first time will read your novel. Anyone who has read a little bit of books will abandon the book.

Bubbles pop up on time to show that I exist!

This type is okay, but the system has too much nonsense. Each chapter takes up half of it, which is a bit shitty. There are not many words and it is a bit watery.

The help given by the system is so rubbish, and the protagonist's talent is so rubbish, but he is still the strongest ancestor? Are you kidding me?