The Record of Forged Heroes in Smoke and Cloud

There are not many online martial arts novels that are not divided into levels or yin and yang. Come on.

Vote for it. Cleverly conceived and rigorously logical. It's just that the update is a bit slow.

I wish the new book a great success, welcome to return and collect it!

The chapter "Sowing Sowing" is wonderful! The intricate struggle for power in the court and the struggle for interests in the world are intertwined, making it complicated and interesting.

The same rivers and lakes are different from each other. There are many things going on in the rivers and lakes. Everyone has their own agenda and fights openly and secretly. This is the same in ancient and modern times. It is rare to depict each Jianghu in such detail, just because each Jianghu person has his own origin and profound background. This is also the result of empathy, multi-perspective switching and multi-perspective focusing.

The affairs of the rivers and lakes are also the affairs of the government; knights from all walks of life have their own origins, sons and daughters of the rivers and lakes, rushing around the rivers and lakes, forces from all sides compete with each other, fighting openly and secretly, and wolves rushing and fighting. The Record of the Smoke and Cloud Blacksmith is a bit brain-burning, and there are more plots, which are worth pondering.

It is very well written. It is a rare traditional martial arts novel in recent years. It is a book that can be read carefully. It's just that I'm a little tired from reading it. Recently I've been listening to books as background music. This book is obviously inappropriate 🤭

Traditional martial arts, the road is hard and arduous~ Come on＾0＾~

Simple review This is a good book, the story has ups and downs, and the characters are unconventional. It is worth recommending. It is dozens of times better than ordinary short stories. The author should not put it in the traditional martial arts genre. If it were placed in the oriental fantasy genre, the effect would be much better than now. Disadvantages 1: Multiple threads go hand in hand. I hope each thread has at least three chapters, so that it will be more comfortable to read. The second Prince Li is a little Wang Mang. I don't know what the author's setting is. I feel that Prince Li can kill the emperor at any time. See how the author explains later 1. Prince Li's father-in-law was the prime minister of the former dynasty and had disciples all over the dynasty. The father-in-law did not avoid suspicion, lived in the prince's house, and often went out to visit other court ministers. 2. Prince Li has been in charge of the elite border troops of the imperial court for half a year. After returning to Beijing, the family general is still the chief general in the army, under the control of the prince. 3. Prince Li has his own secret intelligence organization. He secretly makes friends with Jianghu secret organizations, accumulates reputation, and collects Jianghu militants for his own use. 4. When Prince Li has a relationship with a powerful general in the capital, he does not avoid suspicion, does not submit it to the court for handling, and handles it privately. . . . . . 🙂 A little poisonous point, one of the above points is suspected of treason, two points of treason are solid, and three points can be directly contradicted without being suspected by the emperor.

There is no sense of immersion, the protagonist is not prominent, and the completely third perspective is very traditional martial arts. The plot layout has failed to arouse readers**. Three hundred thousand words have passed. Let's put it on the shelf to see the effect? If not, just cut it. I read the first ten chapters twice, and it felt like cold delicacies, but the writing was tasteless. It should revolve around the protagonist, so that the rhythm is better and it can be brought into the story.

The advantages of the book are also disadvantages. If you want to present a fuller world, you must write a small male protagonist. Most people who read novels now should be like me. They are most concerned about the male protagonist's role and feel the protagonist's growth and gains as the storyline gradually unfolds. Most people don't care much about the overall love and hatred in the world. Too many 'narrations' make it difficult to read. No one in the world has read a story yet, but what really moves people, what really makes people see "chivalrous", and what makes people feel breathless are still Xiao Feng, who is unparalleled and willing to sacrifice his own life, and Ah Zi, who may be the only one who truly understands her brother-in-law and jumps off the cliff together. Where is the hero in Gu Yi reflected? It's easy to kill but hard to save. What kind of transformation will he undergo in the future? These are what readers are most concerned about. Cuiyan Pavilion, Taixianfang, Imperial Court, and Great Wall Shuiwu are all giants. You can read the atmosphere of Jianghu from here, but there is no soul of Jianghu. What is the soul of Jianghu is, of course, the protagonist's love, hatred and every important decision, a flesh-and-blood, vivid and extraordinary ordinary person. This is what I want to say after reading this book. I am just expressing some personal thoughts. In addition, the book is indeed a good book.