Time Stopped for 499 Years

I'm afraid I stopped for 500 years after reading it and then wrote it? Even the title of the book is only one year away from being true6

The subject matter of the book is quite good, and the weird background is quite attractive to me. However, the further I go, the more I feel that the author's writing skills cannot keep up. There are a lot of useless setting explanations and rigid environment descriptions. Most of one chapter is useless nonsense. The plot advances very slowly, which makes people feel that the author is unconsciously overstating the word count. Many settings make it feel that these things will not appear again in the plot later, but the author just wants to carve out these useless details. I also had this problem when I was writing narratives in high school. I didn't distinguish between priorities, details were out of order, and everything was described too carefully. I wished I could write out the pits on every stone on the road the characters walked on. This way, readers can't grasp the key points, and it's very difficult to read. After reading a long paragraph for five minutes, I found that it didn't make sense, and it's the same thing if I just skipped it. Well,,, well, I'm also guilty of this problem now? 🤔

People who read this book, please don't pay attention to the comments in the book review section, because they are just other people's opinions. Anyway, in my opinion, this book is well written. It doesn't take much time to read a few chapters. If it really doesn't suit your taste, you can just leave. There is no need to waste your time posting here.

I would like to write this book to commemorate a lost book

I feel like I misunderstood it. At first I thought the protagonist was a kind of weirdo with no solution. Even if he is repelled, he will keep coming back and become stronger, similar to the setting of the ghost in the mysterious revival written by "Laying Flowers in Front of the Buddha". But the protagonist of this book is too emotionally rich, more like a powerful person than a ghost. Emmm, but in the end, although it is not what I want to read, I still hope that the author will write better and better.

. . Come on, I think the beginning of a book is really important whether you can read it or not. . These various settings are not done well. . It's really big to see. Forget about bothering. . Farewell😅😅😅

In fact, they are all very good, but the plot progress is getting less and less, and the content is getting more and more abundant. The fragments of chapters and pieces make people want to stop. However, the fragmentation is very deliberate, and it becomes more and more confusing. I feel that there is no need to read it. The book is a good book, but the author is too greedy.

I saw the author's photo. It's super beautiful👍👍

The game I wrote about at the beginning of this book was a bug. It was a computer game or a virtual game. If it were a computer game, who would have a lot of time to study game strategies? Would a computer be able to play a game with such a large memory? If it were a virtual game, who would use a computer to play it? The level of technology is too low. How should I put it? The author is so self-indulgent that the book will be over as soon as the book is finished. Also, I am not afraid that my post will be blocked. The value of this book is getting less and less worth reading. The protagonist explores the world alone for hundreds of chapters, haha. The post has been blocked once, I am not afraid of the second time.

Reminds me of a book where the human world was transformed into a game five hundred years ago. Did the author draw lessons from this novel?

There are too many female characters in this book, isn't it? Everywhere you go, there will be a nb female creature. As long as the protagonist sees all the females, he will accept them?

To be honest, I am a pirate. Because I was a relatively poor student and liked reading novels, I read pirated copies. When I first watched 499, I felt like I couldn't stand it anymore. It was boring and not what I wanted. But now, I find that Loli's writing is really good. She has a very grand world view, a very clear main line and a lot of foreshadowing. I feel that she can compete with some first-rate writers. Loli itself is quite hard, I hope you can pay attention to your health and insist on finishing 499. If you are too tired, you can update less. Take your time when you have time, don't rush. I'm still looking forward to the next story, and I don't want Loli to be exhausted and unable to do it. After all, it is better to have a steady flow of water. I personally feel that the quality of 499 is comparable to, or even better than, many first-rate writers of the same period. The details are well controlled. Although I don't have much money, I still need to support if I can. I also hope that other people who watch pirated copies will also support it, and I will also promote it. Finally, I would like to wish Loli good health, not to be too tired every day, 499, her grades will be high, she will become famous and popular. ----From a poor student who saw pirated copies but supported the genuine ones

Although the middle and later stages are a bit confusing, the setting and plot are really good. 😊

The protagonist is too impersonal, and the author is confused as to why you are writing it. 😅

It was a headache to watch, there were too many plot lines at the end, and the relationships were handled in a mess. Let's reorganize it and add some explanation chapters in the middle. In the world of clones, it's even more confusing. Why write so many clones? Forcibly added to add plot? Also, all the bosses in the original game ended up being me. Isn't it fun? The author's writing is good, but the plot is handled very poorly.

Am I taking on the role of the protagonist or am I watching the protagonist from a third person perspective? ! There is such an inexplicable thing as "What on earth did he see?"? Damn it, it's uncomfortable to watch (also: this is not a derogatory word, just some feelings, the book is overall very good)

I found a book called Time Stops for 500 Years. .

As a person with an immortal body, when you see something, you just say it's dangerous and leave? I am also speechless. How can a good thing be without danger? It is obviously very dangerous, you go up (two big guys are robbing you, you just grab it and you will be chased), the danger may not be great, you give up and don't want it (the red plant is poisonous, you don't even try to pick it, just leave) I am speechless Call you a coward, you are still shabby Call you fierce, you are just a younger brother, a younger brother who makes readers uncomfortable You also talk about explosive photos all day long, who the hell wants to see it, I'm afraid it's you who caused the topic.

What's the plot! The transition in each chapter is too hard, please make the transitionbetter, thank you to the author! ! ! ! ! !

This book is quite good, I finished reading it in two days. The author has written his own structure in this book, and I hope it will be helpful. The title of the book is a flaw. Many people are really annoyed by mindlessly following the trend. Once the title is written and the introduction is not explained, many people really will not open it and read it. Moreover, the author has a lot of PY. If the website does not recommend it, PY is very useful. Another small problem is that many people in the book review said that the author is off-topic. Digressions can be written at the end of the chapter, and side stories can be explained at the end.

I saw Chapter 356. You are my one-time full subscription plus automatic subscription, come on. All tickets are for you. I hope the later ones will have the same quality as the previous ones. Don't collapse!

What is your relationship with him 500 years later?

It looks good so far, but it is a little messy. The references to the settings of the horror recovery in the other world are also quite interesting. It can reasonably explain some of the settings of the horror recovery (do you know the author). The shortcoming is that the plot connection is very poor, giving people the feeling of rambling. I don't know whether the author wants to write in the horror aspect or in the fantasy aspect. At present, it feels that the author wants to give readers a feeling of terror, but also wants to write a fighting feeling in the combat aspect. I personally think that you cannot have both, and it is not possible to stew randomly. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better books as time goes by. The creativity is really nice. 🤭

The Loli in the code word, keep moving forward bravely and don't want to be a eunuch! ! !

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I contribute hundreds of millions of essence to paper towels every day. I wonder if there is a chance to add some essence.

To the author First of all, I would like to apologize. Money is tight at the moment, so I made do with this book that I knew was for free. I didn't order it, so I'm going to make up for it now. Secondly, it is enough to lay out the book to this extent. The protagonist already has the capital to become the mastermind behind the scenes. Don't write out everything about the protagonist, otherwise you will face the situation where you will have nothing to write about later. You can directly skip the plot of the protagonist's era and supplement it later in the form of revelations. This book is called Time Stop 499. The time stop period is a long paragraph, and the time stop is another long paragraph, and it will be even more difficult to describe after recovery, because it is a very strange state for a high-ranking person to face a group of novices, because there is no reason. To put it bluntly, you can wipe out the human race, so why write about it, right? So the main The character needs a reason (don't be obsessed with the human race, this reason is definitely the worst), such as to transcend a higher plan, or human faith is crucial to becoming a god, etc. The reason must be of actual benefit to the protagonist (the protagonist who can grow to that level will never care about me protecting the human race). That's all. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes. The invincible flow of the new era will become another trend once you finish writing.