Konoha I Am Uchiha

A pretty good Naruto article A few suggestions: Classic scenes from the original work can be reproduced, but it's best not to have too many. For example, although the story of four generations of husband and wife working together to seal the seal is touching, it is a classic scene that everyone already knows, so describing it again would be too short of a word count. I feel that the focus of the writing should be more on the protagonist, or the original text does not describe many supporting characters, such as writing about Iruka's father helping the protagonist escape. Although the author of Shisui's Eye-Opening is very high-spirited, to be honest, the proportion is a bit too heavy. Currently, one-fifth of the plot of the 35 chapters is devoted to Eye-Opening. . . In fact, you can briefly mention it in the main text, and then describe this paragraph in the form of memories and extras. Under the current detailed description, it is recommended not to forget to follow up on the excavation. For example, the subsequent development of Shisui's companions, the subsequent gratitude of Sarutobi Shinnosuke and others, the interaction with the protagonist, etc. Like the old man at the beginning, his existence value is just to open the eyes of the protagonist, which feels a bit wasteful. Then there was the reaction within the Uchiha clan after Shisui opened his eyes. It's unclear how the author plans to arrange the Uchiha. Is he still going to exterminate the clan and then the protagonist defect, or is he going to integrate into the village. . . If you plan to deal with the Uchiha peacefully, you can prepare now to write about the structure within the Uchiha clan, such as the plans of the elders (down to their names) and Fugaku's attitude. This way, when the protagonist starts planning for Uchiha's future, it won't be too abrupt, and readers won't even know who the main radicals are. The annihilation of the Uchiha clan is the biggest highlight in the early stages of this article, and I hope the author will not omit too much of the high-level games involved. Although there are many radical people in the upper echelons of the Uchiha clan, there is definitely no shortage of knowledgeable people. I hope the author will not kill everyone with one blow and forcibly reduce their intelligence. In addition, although the protagonist is an adult soul, it is really embarrassing to act like a baby in front of Shisui. It's really a bit poisonous to just bow down to Shisui when he sees him. It can be written on the side that it is soul fusion, so the protagonist will be much better if he is younger in front of Shisui. In addition, I hope that the identity of an executive will help the protagonist participate in the political game between Konoha and Uchiha. As of now, the protagonist is still a bit too negative and passive. He has neither the courage to change the plot nor the talent for verbal escape. He just learns medical ninjutsu as an escape, which is a bit of a waste of the setting of an executive. As for the growth of the protagonist's strength, I personally feel that it is still a bit too brief, and I can write more appropriately. For example, the protagonist's further thoughts on using medical ninjutsu to assist in opening his eyes, his inner anxiety, etc. To be honest, Itachi is the first force to destroy the Uchiha clan. Shouldn't the protagonist take advantage of this moment to do ideological work non-stop? It was also a problem that the brothers didn't communicate well before Shisui opened the kaleidoscope. Logically speaking, the protagonist should start doing Shisui's ideological work as soon as possible after the Nine-Tails Rebellion. Use your own eyesight as a weight to continuously output ideology. Although I don't have much say now due to strength issues, the "brainwashing" cannot stop. . . Although the "brainwashing" has begun, I hope the author will not ignore this. In fact, in a sense, the key to Uchiha's civil strife lies in the three (potential) kaleidoscopes of Shisui, Itachi, and Fugaku. The protagonist can actually make arrangements in advance instead of reacting passively after the event is triggered.

Be a little nicer to the Uchiha clan. Logically speaking, we all have different inherited powers. The Senju Uzumaki immortal body, the ghost lamp turned into water, the corpse bone veins of Kaguya, the Hyuga Byakugan, the blood dragon eye of the pool of blood, and the Uchiha Sharingan. Why do you say that the Uchiha are an evil clan? Damn, why are you saying this? Can you be kind to the Uchiha clan? Let them leave Konoha and build their own village or country like Orochimaru. The biggest mistake Madara made was to alliance with Senju Hashirama. Give Senju Hashirama a slap in the face. He reincarnated from the dirt and let him see what his village has become. Hashirama's Konoha breeds darkness Tobirama's Konoha suppresses and spreads darkness Yuan Fei's Konoha vividly displays the darkness of Konoha I used to watch Naruto because of the passion inside, and I have experienced a few years of social university. After the teaching, I found in retrospect that Naruto, the anime, cannot withstand scrutiny Naruto has been crooked since the beginning of the Six Paths Asura's Ninja Way is everyone giving a piece of love Indra's Ninja Way is the restraint of strength and rules

Before reading this book, I thought it was a novel about a novel written by a novice, purely to kill time, but after reading it, I became more and more fascinated and lamented that I had not missed this book First of all, I am very grateful to the author for writing such a good book. The protagonist is not like other books who can speak a few months after he is born. , Collected the harem, beat up Uchiha Madara, and made Uchiha Madara kneel down and beg for mercy I actually prefer this kind of protagonist who is actually unpretentious. The author's writing style is logical and coherent. The protagonist is an ordinary person, but he has lived a lifetime longer than others, and has the calmness, self-control and knowledge that adults should have [About supporting characters] Many authors will forcefully recruit a few characters in order to let the protagonist shine and feel the aura of the "protagonist". The children of a wealthy family come to trouble the protagonist. To be honest, it is like what the author said. Every circle has its own rules. The ninja clan has a long history. They don't even want to give you a look, let alone trouble you and challenge you to bully you. If you are angry with a commoner, they may really feel that they lose their status. This is really good. They did not forcefully lower the IQ of the supporting characters for the protagonist [About power] The protagonist is not very exaggerated. I just move forward day by day, step by step, set a small goal first, and then adjust my direction according to the actual situation after completing the small goal. I don't like that kind of parallel text very much. I feel that it is very unrealistic, like getting something for nothing. After the protagonist decided to protect Shisui when he was young, he has been working hard to enlighten and guide the thinking of Shisui and Itachi. He is afraid that Shisui and Itachi will be brainwashed by others, and he always reminds them to plan for them. [About genocide] I have read many books about people who traveled through Uchiha. They either wanted to survive and rebelled against the village, or they wanted to hug the protagonist Naruto's lap, or they wanted to change the fate of genocide. In the end, they just talked about it, or they were unable to change it. This article The protagonist of the article is right. We cannot leave our future destiny to others and let others decide. This is what I love about the protagonist. The future is opened by oneself and should not be decided by others. The kind of person who firmly controls his own destiny and does not naively expect others to save him or expect others to save him. People have pity and hope that others will save themselves. Such a protagonist is really hard not to like me [About senior management] To be honest, many people think that the third generation is a good person, and the third generation does not know what Danzo does, but I personally don't think so, first of all Let's talk about White Fang's suicide. White Fang has made so many hard-earned contributions, but even though he was trapped in a political conspiracy, the Third Generation didn't stand up for White Fang at all. Well, let's not talk about Hizashi and Naruto, Shisui's eyes were gouged out, and the Uchiha clan was annihilated. Is it true that the Third Generation can't do anything about these things? After decades of being in power, is it really impossible to solve the problem? Human beings are social animals, and it is human nature to seek groups and long for warmth. After experiencing the suppression of Uchiha by the second generation, no matter how arrogant people are, they will lower their heads in front of life. Without him, life will always have to go on. The third generation feels really hypocritical to me. He has been in power for decades In the article "Sakata Gintoki's Hokage Career", Gintoki's metaphor is right: "Credit is a thing that has no credibility once it is overdrawn. It's like taking out a loan from a bank. When the bank calls for debt many times, you always procrastinate and evade. When you need a loan to buy a house, you are informed of the credit blacklist by the bank, and then you regret it." Everyone is a companion, emmm, etc., And then we receive a wave of supporters of the Will of Fire [About Danzo] Danzo's operation is really cool, but Danzo in this article is the only one I have ever seen. This is a book that makes Danzo realize his dream. In other books, Danzo is dead and miserable. Oh, and there is also a book in which Danzo enjoys his old age (although Danzo is asked to raise piglets). "The Dark Flower" of Sanqianshi is quite good. Danzo raises pigs Finally, I would like to say something about the Naruto articles I wrote at Seven Points. To be honest, many articles have thousands of chapters and millions of words, but I feel that many of them are very watery. After reading it, don't tell me that you can write it. If you don't like it, don't read it. To be honest, it's not that I want to complain, but I really want to ask other authors, since you have spent so much effort to write so many words, why don't you write well? It feels like a lot of them use the word "water" just for the sake of "water". Maybe it's a matter of my personal taste? I like the protagonist in this article very much. He is down-to-earth, not blind, and can plan for the future Recommend my favorite Naruto novel "Naruto: Anonymous". Many people say that this is a dark novel, and that the character of the protagonist is not good or bad, but what I see is a time traveler who has become a cannon fodder. In order not to be used as cannon fodder on the battlefield, he works hard to survive, skins a tiger, and seeks strength bit by bit. Take a look at the six or seven steps. , Taking a step back is an abyss, and has no qualifications to be willful The author forgives me for tweeting, but I really like this kind of protagonist who is actually unpretentious, walks step by step, does not entrust the future to others, does not blindly follow the crowd, has his own goals, and will adjust his goals with the times

I haven't even seen it listed on the shelves.

​ ​ ​​What is the difference between an Uchiha without a kaleidoscope and a salted fish!                                                                                                                                                                                 but the kaleidoscope abilities of the protagonist had been set in Buzhuan in the past, but there were always areas of dissatisfaction. Now we are soliciting everyone's wishes in the hope of making the characters more fleshed out and the plot smoother. The following ability settings do not differentiate between left and right eyes. Setting 1: Time and Space Ninjutsu After all, the protagonist has traveled through time and yearns to return home. Time and space ninjutsu can be biased toward teleportation or subspace types. Setting 2: Defensive Ninjutsu The protagonist from Heaven believes in "I will not offend others unless they offend me" and hopes to protect his family and friends. Defensive ninjutsu can be biased towards the space barrier type. The above settings are part of the author's draft, and I hope everyone can provide good ideas. Requirements: There are specific ability names (in line with the original naming rules) and detailed ability settings. I hope it can inspire others, thank you all!

Chapter 75, this is a mistake,

Let me make a prediction. One night, Pigfoot suddenly talked in his sleep and told the story of Naruto. The ANBU heard it and reported it to the Sandaime in advance.

Pig's feet are so common and there is no system, so they are dead. Think about what kind of monsters Naruto is? Even Kakashi can only become a unit of measurement in the end

🙃 Extremely poisonous, the protagonist is completely useless, and Danzo even became the Hokage. Uchiha was still exterminated, and Shisui was still dead. No wonder the grades are so bad

If it were me, I would drag Uchiha to defect and go it alone. There is no way out in Konoha.

This plot is really crazy. Instead of Itachi annihilating the clan, Shisui replaced him. Danzo the old dog could become Hokage, and the protagonist is his younger brother.

I've read a lot of Naruto fanfics recently, and they're all the ones that want to cheat but don't dare to find a seemingly reasonable way to cheat. For a seemingly reasonable trick, people are exterminated, but as soon as the trick is obtained, the protagonist can defeat Danzo. Do you want to write a cool story or a reasonable story?🙂. If you say it's cool, you'll be exterminated knowing everything; if you're unhappy, a loser like the protagonist can kill Danzo if he has a kaleidoscope. The protagonist can do it, but Shisui Fugaku can't? Is this genocide? Do it?

The protagonist's feelings for Uchiha Shisui shouldn't be so good. The protagonist is Seishou, and he is not the original owner who has been with Shisui since childhood. Moreover, the protagonist has been in society in his previous life and has a mature mind. Writing too much about the protagonist's past life is a failure. The more you write about it, the more awkward it will look when you later write that the protagonist is attached to Shisui. How would an adult feel attached to a child he just met? It's okay for you to say that you want to rely on Shisui. After all, Shisui was much stronger than the protagonist at the beginning, but you wrote that the protagonist had feelings for Shisui as soon as he passed through it. It's very embarrassing. Feelings also require a process.

In the situation of Uchiha, I think we can try to unite with a wealthy family like Hyuga, even if the relationship between the two families is not very good, but I think the wealthy family and the upper management are naturally opposed, just like the Sui Dynasty family and the royal family.

Personal opinion: Can't Uchiha lead his tribe to leave the village and build a small village alone? He must die in this dirty village of Konoha! Although this is a bit unrealistic. The most common people in the Naruto world are the genocide murderer Uchiha Itachi. There is definitely something wrong with the minds of those who worship him. Regardless of men, women, old and young, newborns, ordinary Uchiha, and ninja Uchiha, in a sense, they all died at the hands of Itachi! Such a guy with bad views should not die well! You know the bottom line, ninja Uchiha will not comment, non-ninja Uchiha, and new child Uchiha without strength are innocent!

The protagonist's IQ is really hard to describe, it goes up and down.

He is obviously a time traveler who knows the secrets of the past and the future. A lot of things can actually be changed, but in the end the story has to stick to the original story. For example, find a reason to imply that Obito is not dead, or suggest that Shisui Danzo covets his other gods, so that Shisui can smoothly impose other gods on Uchiha. Every detail can avoid tragedy.

Shisui is a pig and cannot be saved. Itachi wasn't much better. I can't give you a good example, but Madara, a tycoon, wants to create an infinite Tsukuyomi. . . . Three and a half years old? (Three-and-a-half-year-old Madara: I am a combination of Batman and Superman, and I want to protect world peace 🐷). Hashirama elevated the war between families to a national level. Originally, there was still a glimmer of peace for the common people, but now it is gone. It can be called the greatest sinner in the ninja world from its emergence to its destruction.

The biggest mistake was Shisui's younger brother. The genocide of the Uchiha clan started with Shisui. He led Itachi to follow Danzo, and was blinded by Danzo. His thoughts were extreme from beginning to end. In the end, he never thought about the other innocent clan members. He chose to escape before he died and left everything to the younger Itachi. What a scumbag!

This is the author. 😁 First of all, thank you very much for your support of this book! This is the author's second book. I didn't expect it to go smoothly and I signed the contract. I'm really flattered. The author is not a person who likes to publicize everywhere, so this book has been added to his own reading list. The author is really grateful that someone can see it and be willing to collect it. If you have any comments or suggestions about this book, you are welcome to leave a message for discussion, but please pay attention to the wording and beware of crabs! Finally, the author hopes that friends who have recommendation votes will consider this book. Thank you all again, thank you!

Haha, it turns out it's been 6 years