Confessions of a Salesman

Hello author, I liked this book very much at the beginning, but the problems became more serious later on. I will summarize a few points for you and hope they can help you 1. In terms of characterization, the male protagonist's character can be portrayed more deeply. For example, from the initial impulse to mature and restrained step by step, this is a process, and the characters form contrasts. 2. The stronger the logic of a story, the stronger the sense of substitution will be, making people resonate with it. For example, in the chapters about going to the casino, the education the male protagonist received from childhood should have his own resistance to bad things. A 50 million round is said to be on the rise, which is not in line with what he is going to do. His education, his character, and his kidnapping immediately followed. The story should have a beginning and an end. The police line should have a specific explanation. After the gambling, whether the police withheld the money or the guarantor swallowed it, where did the ransom come from, and how much did the male protagonist roughly have? Money, these can all be explained 3. The emotional changes between characters are a good way to present the soul of the character. For example, Mr. Lin, although he has passed away, he is still a book in the hero's heart. From time to time, he recalls going fishing at the beach. He resigned several times. There should be a process of transformation in the end instead of resignations one after another. The foreshadowing can be laid in advance, rather than waiting until the scene. It can be done once, but it will become a bit like a cool novel if it is repeated too many times. The relationship between the male protagonist and his friends can change, and the ending should be connected.

What era is the author from? Are you still writing in the first person? When it comes to sales, I only rely on those who sell houses. All kinds of skills are astonishing!

The more I write, the worse I get. I don't have the brains to use stupid routines. I have the status of a director of a listed company. I can't handle it with an industrial and commercial bureau. A few people in Beijing were all kinds of awesome at first, but later it was bullshit.

I finished reading the book in a few days. As a fresh graduate who has never been able to find a job, I really learned a lot from the book. . It also makes up for the fantasy of going to work, thank you author.

If nothing else, I really admire this perseverance.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I finally figured out why the author has more than 5 million words and the rating is still level 2.

Which company is the author's prototype of Wanzhong?

How did you manage to comment on this point in more than a thousand chapters?

I'm afraid this book is just about whatever comes to mind, and there is no logic at all.

I guess the author just practiced his writing casually, and the plot was endless. I don't recommend that you watch it, the only thing you can watch is the dialogue.