Confessions of a Salesman

Hello author, I liked this book very much at the beginning, but the problems became more serious later on. I will summarize a few points for you and hope they can help you 1. In terms of characterization, the male protagonist's character can be portrayed more deeply. For example, from the initial impulse to mature and restrained step by step, this is a process, and the characters form contrasts. 2. The stronger the logic of a story, the stronger the sense of substitution will be, making people resonate with it. For example, in the chapters about going to the casino, the education the male protagonist received from childhood should have his own resistance to bad things. A 50 million round is said to be on the rise, which is not in line with what he is going to do. His education, his character, and his kidnapping immediately followed. The story should have a beginning and an end. The police line should have a specific explanation. After the gambling, whether the police withheld the money or the guarantor swallowed it, where did the ransom come from, and how much did the male protagonist roughly have? Money, these can all be explained 3. The emotional changes between characters are a good way to present the soul of the character. For example, Mr. Lin, although he has passed away, he is still a book in the hero's heart. From time to time, he recalls going fishing at the beach. He resigned several times. There should be a process of transformation in the end instead of resignations one after another. The foreshadowing can be laid in advance, rather than waiting until the scene. It can be done once, but it will become a bit like a cool novel if it is repeated too many times. The relationship between the male protagonist and his friends can change, and the ending should be connected.        ，，，，，，

What era is the author from? Are you still writing in the first person? When it comes to sales, I only rely on those who sell houses. All kinds of skills are astonishing!

The more I write, the worse I get. I don't have the brains to use stupid routines. I have the status of a director of a listed company. I can't handle it with an industrial and commercial bureau. A few people in Beijing were all kinds of awesome at first, but later it was bullshit.

I finished reading the book in a few days. As a fresh graduate who has never been able to find a job, I really learned a lot from the book. . It also makes up for the fantasy of going to work, thank you author.

If nothing else, I really admire this perseverance.

After reading more than 30 chapters, I finally figured out why the author has more than 5 million words and the rating is still level 2.

How did you manage to comment on this point in more than a thousand chapters?

Which company is the author's prototype of Wanzhong?

I guess the author just practiced his writing casually, and the plot was endless. I don't recommend that you watch it, the only thing you can watch is the dialogue.

Come on. Every day's tickets are given to you

I'm afraid this book is just about whatever comes to mind, and there is no logic at all.

Damn it, the author is awesome. He has written more than 6 million words and only has 72 comments. How can he keep it up?

It's very well written👍, come on, everyone will like it

The more I look at it, the more I feel like I wasted my money.

It's so tiring to watch. I won't say anything. They are all bulls, demons and monsters that cannot be killed. It's like Tang Monk's search for scriptures, going back and forth.

It's okay to write about the front in the back, but it's out of touch with reality and like a piece of garbage.

Overall, despite a lot of problems, the story is good and has a lot to read, so I kept reading. In particular, the author's perseverance and perseverance have to be admired. Real-life texts are difficult to write, and the results are also relatively dismal. Being able to write such a long book without supervision is not something that ordinary authors can do. There is one less book to follow every day. I look forward to the author's next book coming out as soon as possible, with better writing and better results.

Life is already too sweet, and I dare not read realistic themes. Come on, author

The old lady's foot wrap is smelly and long

"The Red Dust" is a novel with realistic themes. The story begins in 1980... The writing style is simple and unpretentious, but the story is exciting. Friends who like period literature can read it. Please give me some advice. Thank you.

The writing is very good. I have never written a review after reading it for many years. This is the first time I write it. Rigorous logic and eloquent explanation. The dialogue between the characters is very subtle, and every sentence in the vernacular sums up the character's personality. Mr. Feng, Xi Mao, Mr. Lin, and Brother Zeng are all flesh and blood. A great article that I haven't seen in many years. Especially when I saw the Lobster Base taking out a bottle of Shaoyang Daqu, I couldn't write such a thing without personal experience. I have been engaged in sales for many years and this is what I feel.

The writing was okay at the beginning, but I didn't read it later. I felt that the protagonist was like a dazed young man, and his processing ability was like that of a child. Still a senior executive? ?

"An old man who time-traveled and picked up rags and made a living by making bad movies" [Mental patients have more happiness] A director graduate from his past life accidentally time-traveled into an old man who smelled like sheep and picked up rags. He was arrested for killing people at the beginning. He had a miserable job in variety shows. He was professionally incompetent, and he blackmailed people with group performances. Broadcast begging and exploring ghosts to scare people, crack down on counterfeit goods and sell fake goods, make horror videos to scare people, make short skits to scare people, and make bad movies to extend your life After that, you can travel to infinite planes and other worlds, collect movie materials, and return to reality on the big screen to scare the audience

I dare not read this book, the data is divided into two ends. . . Will falling into the trap shorten your lifespan? Is there any serious person who can tell me?

It is impossible for such a person with a criminal record to join a central enterprise as a leader.

First-person perspective writing is suitable for short films, such as ghost stories.

This book is okay at the beginning, but then it becomes rubbish. The plot is section by section. I just write whatever comes to my mind. There is no logic at all.

This book is pure garbage. . .