The Sect Leader Is So Handsome

The leader-style style with a bit of humor feels okay. The language and characters, and the plot can be more humorous and relaxed, but the setting itself is better to be stricter and crueler. I hope it can be achieved.

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Except for the two spies who are a big poisonous spot, everything else is good. Do you know why it's so poisonous there? Because a department manager must know the reason why suspects should not be used. Instead, you ask the protagonist to recruit them into his gang when he discovers there's something wrong with them. In fact, it doesn't matter whether you join the gang or not. It doesn't matter if the characters and settings are a bit conflicting. The most important thing is to have fun. You let the protagonist take such a big blame from the beginning, and it will be difficult for readers to accept it. In addition, in such an important battle as Gushan, you only summoned the old man in the end, which made the whole story vulgar and dimmed its early glory. Here are three options for the author: 1. Modify the plot so that the protagonist discovers their abnormal behavior and exposes them in advance, and then the monster takes the opportunity to hurt people and run away. Although the protagonist has meritorious service, he is still sent to fight Gushan. 2. Modify the Lonely Mountain Offensive Campaign to allow the protagonist to struggle a little more and then explode at the last moment. It's better not to explode for a while. Even if it is to explode, it should be when the readers are not expecting it. 3. Continue to write like this, and then hurry up and slowly finish 4,000 words every day, and continue on the road to success.

At this point in writing this book, it is comparable to the book about The Eunuch, My Sister is the Demon God. The more I write, the more I get off track.

It's my sister again. There are so many sisters in Qidian.

This is well said. Is there still a pendant missing on your thigh?

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The numerical values ​​are a bit loose. For example, little Loli sometimes says she is in her teens, and sometimes says she is ten years old; sometimes she says she has reached the intermediate level of Qi training at the age of ten, and sometimes says she is already at the peak of Qi training at the age of ten, reaching the point where she is about to reach the foundation building level. So what exactly?

"Sword Builds the Eight Wilderness Roads" is a new work in the fairy tale genre. It has 400,000 words and is ready to be released.        ，        ，，        ，，，                                                                                                                                                                                            brothers.

I am here, wishing that the new book will become a god.