The Road to Death

The author had better learn how other novels are formatted. This method of one chapter and three paragraphs is too uncomfortable, and there is no good storytelling in the first place, plus this layout. . . . Well, sorry, farewell!

There are too many words in each paragraph. It is recommended to replace the next paragraph with no more than 4-5 lines, otherwise a large paragraph will interfere with reading.

I feel like the protagonist is crazy. I don't know, but I feel like I'm going crazy. The way you describe it makes readers crazy. I've only read Chapter 4 now. Why don't you change your job as an evil god? You have great potential. Codewords are certain to die.

Come on, author, you wrote well.

Aren't they all segmented? It hurts my eyes to look at it.

The results are dismal, but the perseverance is great. Although I have never read this book, I forgot when I ordered it. But... I'm at a loss for words

I can't stand it segment by segment. I feel dizzy.

It's like writing an essay! It hurts my eyes to see it! It's not **Oh! I really feel uncomfortable looking at it

The writing is smooth and the narrative is clear, keep it up! "Who Will Bite the Dog", encourage each other, collect and encourage, I have unexpected gains from investing!

The number of words in the paragraph is so long... I think it's quite interesting, but it hurts my eyes.

My eyes are tired from looking at my cell phone. The layout is so bad.

The writing is passable and the ideas are good. However, it is not possible to choose a world. Except for the first world where famine is possible, I don't think it will work in the second and third worlds. After all, these worlds are not very popular.