Myth Rebooted

I have been following March Flowers for a long time, starting from "I Am a Martial Arts Master". At that time, the martial arts infinite flow was in full swing. At that time, the author's plot writing was not bad, but there were many minor flaws. Later, "I Am the Martial Arts Master" ended hastily, so I watched "The Myth of Horror". To be honest, the level was pretty good, but the Infinite Streaming was not very popular, so I skipped it for a while. Until the beginning of "Krypton Gold Martial Arts", I clearly felt that the author's level had dropped. He said that martial arts is not martial arts, and fantasy is not fantasy. After all, I did not contribute a monthly ticket, so I didn't say much. Starting from this book "Myth Reopened", I found this book to be very good. Has excellent potential. But that's not enough. I'll make a few superficial comments below. The author can just take a look. If he makes a mistake, just pretend he didn't see it. 1. This book looks a bit like "Starting with Guyu Bird". I don't want to read "Starting with Guyu Bird" because she licks the girl Tai Sui like crazy. To be honest, Zhuang Xiaoman in Chapter 11 of this book has no effect other than pretending to compete with her, cooperating with the male protagonist to complete tasks, or having a relationship. I hope the author will consider it. It really doesn't matter if you have more of her or less of her. 2. The growth system of the protagonist is very important. I read that the author said that he prefers "The Legend of Martial Arts", and I also like it. I like the protagonist's step-by-step growth, with clear layers and clear logic. I don't think it is good for the author to choose Fei as his guardian beast. In fact, you can choose Tomoe Snake, Tomoe Snake Devours the Sky, and there are many snake ninjutsu in Naruto. Pig's feet can be used to shed skin, dragon and snake attack together, Sky Snake Breath Shooting Technique (inner breath, strong explosive power), snake scales can block small-caliber bullets, and snakes can turn into dragons. Of course, you can also choose the Divine Turtle, the Spirit Turtle Health Technique, and the Turtle Shell Technique (protect against acupuncture points and bullets, but it can only protect the chest and back, not the limbs and head). Snakes and turtles can evolve into Xuanwu. Of course, you can also choose ghosts, like the human centipede of Kadula in the new book "Summoning the Nightmare", which seals ghosts in the body and uses ghosts to balance each other. Only ghosts can kill ghosts. Kind of like a resurgence of horror. You can create a gluttonous ghost or a starving ghost (it can bite open the barrier and devour evil ghosts. You can write it like this: use the gluttonous ghost to swallow ginseng and polygonum multiflorum, converting the power of the medicine into a strong body) 3. The small map written is scary. It is best to travel through that kind of ghostland and survive through intelligence and reasoning. How many people die on each map and the pig's feet can protect themselves wisely, similar to Han Li. This is just my idea. Of course, you still have to write this book. I hope you will get better as you write.

As soon as it was recommended, I became a eunuch...

The reason for the poor score is that there are currently too few chapters to make it interesting to read, but judging from the current plot of the book, it will definitely be popular. If you can't hold on for this little time, then you shouldn't write disgusting novels. As long as you are not one of those great authors, it is impossible for anyone to write a book and have a lot of people cheering for it, let alone your previous eunuch records.

By God's blessing, the Emperor Zhao said: Today there is a famous flower named March, and the book written by it is very suitable for me. He was specially recruited into the palace and sentenced to palace punishment. He will always serve me. Admire this!

To be fair, I dare say that the author of this comment I posted will definitely give me more attention when he sees it, and maybe he will pin it to the top of the page.

Why do I remember your plot is the same as having an unlimited stream?

Brother, why didn't you write the last one?