Neji from the Hyuga Family

It's good-looking, with very few typos, and the plot is weak and well-founded.

Very wonderful work, included in the book list to support. Author, if you have the opportunity in the future, please write something original. The subject matter of Japanese-style juvenile comics is not suitable for your strengths in shady political shows.

This is a book with its own worldview, which is rare among Naruto fans. But the more ideas there are, the more bland the content and pacing become.

How few Japanese married their cousins ​​before? Meiji married cousins

It feels like this book is not like Kishimoto's Naruto, but rather a Naruto based on a realistic world view, using calm thinking to infer how the world should develop and what the world should be like. There are advantages and disadvantages to this writing method. The advantage is that as long as the author's writing skills are good enough and his knowledge is broad enough, he can have more depth on the basis of regular online articles. From the perspective of popular literature, it surpasses most of the fans, at least becoming the "Hokage" version of the "One Piece Code". Of course, there are many shortcomings. The most obvious one is that it will cause a cut-off in the character of the original characters. Take Kai, who most readers think is a drama, for example. Kai in the original work is definitely not so sophisticated, at least the portraits presented to the audience are not like this. But what if it is the real world of Naruto? Are there any fools among the few elite Jonin who can become the mainstay? He may be hot-blooded, he may be funny, but he will never know anything about politics. If we take away Kai's inherent label and treat him as a real person, he will present another side that will not appear in hot-blooded comics, which will cause drama. Such a depiction requires extremely high writing skills from the author. In addition, there will be situations where it is too much and too much emphasis on reality will lead to "taken for granted" situations. For example, in the section where Jiraiya talks about Orochimaru's views on war, he will think about the system of war, but not in such detail. Naruto is a world that lacks systematic theory, and such a view will only appear in a reality with a highly developed political system. Of course, by now you can see how serious the author is about his work. It's been a long time since I've seen such an excellent work in the fandom area. I hope the author can pay more attention to the details.

There is a half-way route for the Byakugan to evolve into the Tenseigan in Naruto. A real hammer, using a large number of Byakugan to synthesize the reincarnation eye. This is real, and the setting of the caged bird is actually very scary. The Hyuga family had no idea in the original work that they could synthesize the reincarnation eye. But he has mastered the caged bird, which is very scary when he thinks about it. Even though the entire Hyuga family was growing leeks from others, the Hyuga clan thought that they were butchers of pigs, but they never thought that they were just a pig. The second type is only metaphorical but not concrete, so it is considered half a method, which is to stimulate the evolution of the Byakugan through a large amount of chakra that is several times the size of the tailed beast. Moreover, later there is a metaphor, that is, the caged bird is not only a curse of restraint, but also like a baby in the mother's belly, risking a narrow escape to come to this world, implying the advent of life and the nirvana of the phoenix. That is, if there are people who have been planted with a caged bird in the Hyuga branch. Being able to possess a large, large, large amount of chakra in a short period of time can break through the caged bird, and the caged bird will evolve the Byakugan into the Reincarnated Eye. But if the branch family, which was bullied by the Zong family since childhood, had a genius beyond the shadow level, he could do this. It is a disaster rather than a blessing for the clan. In the original work, only Hyuga Neji could do this, but unfortunately he died. It's scary to think about it

There is no snow in Wall Street, but the cold is the heart of the people. Disgusting politics, but we have to move forward, things have two sides, and we will eventually be deceived by the surface. Hey, the warm-blooded Hokage turned into a dark political figure by the author. I still don't think it's enough, Zuzhen. The writing is beautiful, keep it up.

Let's put it this way, your novel is as light as water, bland, with no long-term goals (revenge Kumogakure or reform the Hyuga clan?) And no short-term enemies (the grievances between the protagonist and the villain in the early stage are the highlight of the Naruto fanfic Ambrosia or Poisonous Weed). You are not happy about it. The main line is unclear, the daily interactions between branches and teammates are too short and dull, and the direction and progress of the protagonist's strength are also very vague. The entire writing style is depressing and obscure, and it is very difficult to read chapter by chapter. Now, compared to the same period of the original work, the protagonist Ningji has a slightly more cheerful personality. Generally speaking, there is nothing outstanding and no big poisonous points. At first glance, people think: Oh, this is a Naruto fanfic. There is a temporary shortage of books, and the feeling of making do with it 😅 is not a joke. I hope the author will not blame it.

Add as few ancient style words as possible. It feels a little awkward looking at it. As for the heroine, I personally think it's okay if she's not Sakura-chan. Tenten-chan and Ino-chan are pretty good, and I can't think of other female characters from other villages who are around the same age as Neji. If the heroine is not good at writing, she may become a poisonous character. It is easier to write a heroine who is about the same age. Most readers probably won't care too much about whether it's cousins. I hope the author can persevere! Come on! ! !

How to say it. . It's obvious that you don't intend to write a trivial article. . You have your own ideas. . But some places are really average. . If you don't write simple articles, some things require more thought. . The number of jounin in Konoha, the number of jonin in the sun. . During the Third War, Konoha fought on multiple fronts, with Hinata and Uchiha taking the main force to stop the Mist Ninja. . Then you said there are no jounin in the Hyuga branch. . There is also the issue of Metkai's character, which is really dramatic. . Also, Danzo is not a Hyuga clan member because of the protection of the caged bird. . Otherwise Orochimaru would have taken action long ago. . There would be no one who would take refuge in Danzo, so Hinata wouldn't dare to stir up the caged bird. If this were the case, who knows how many pairs of Byakugan would have spread out. . There is also the fact that the family secrets are in the sealed book. . Basically, these five families, Pig, Deer, Butterfly and Dog Insect, do not use conventional ninjutsu. . If the family secrets are contributed to the village. . There is no need for this family to exist. It is not a wealthy family in the first place. If the secret technique is handed over, everyone will be wiped out in minutes. How about the fourth generation of Sannin, they all developed their own ninjutsu. Could it be that the secret techniques are all handed over to the village, but I just want to give you face, and we don't learn them here? Personally, I feel that your writing is pretty good, but there are some issues with some of the settings. Keep up the good work. .

I've always found it strange why some people think caged birds are important. If it's for protection, you leave the self-destruct function behind after death, or change it to something that can be activated by yourself. Can't the control function be removed? This is just a way for a slave owner to control his slaves.

There is an opinion about eyes that I hope the author can consider. Madara opened the Reincarnation Eye through Hashirama cells. The known information is that the Reincarnation Eye comes from the Six Paths Sage, Uzumaki, Senju, and Uchiha are all descendants of the Six Paths. Senju and Uchiha closing their eyes is more like an atavism. The conclusion may be that the descendants of the Six Paths have a chance of opening the Reincarnation Eye through blood fusion, and the reincarnation chakra of Indra and Asura increases the chance of successful atavism. So looking at the Byakugan descendants of the Hamura line, the Byakugan evolution proposed by Boruto and the movie version, one is the fusion of a large number of Byakugan, which seems to achieve qualitative change through the accumulation of quantity, and the other is through the "Byakugan Princess" Hinata, through a series of indescribable and then evolution with extremely pure direct descendants. So what we can know is that the opening of the reincarnation eye is more like replenishing one's own bloodline, or in other words, genetic defects and returning to the ancestors. Although it violates the theory of evolution. . The following is my own speculation, because Kaguya's exposed ability is also the corpse vein, and the black one among the three sons will never be mentioned. The one most likely to inherit this ability is Hamura, and Kaguya's name is obviously connected with the corpse vein clan of the Kingdom of Water, which makes people doubt whether this clan is the descendant of Hamura. Coupled with the inexplicable connection between the Hyuga clan and Kaguya, could it be that Hyuga Kaguya is the Uchiha Senju in a sense? So what will happen if the blood of the two merges? In addition, in Boruto's biography, Boruto's pure eye is also a variant of the Byakugan, and coincidentally, Boruto's parents are the reincarnation of Asura Chakra, a descendant of Uzumaki, a descendant of the Six Paths, and a "princess" with the purest Byakugan bloodline of the Hyuga clan, a descendant of Hamura. Such an arrangement is completely unreasonable for my wife not to cheat. Then it seems that there are more roads in front of Neji.

The more Naruto fans read, the more they feel disgusted with the original work The 3rd generation has been hypocritical all their lives. Why did Danzo cheat and defect with so many talented and strong people? After being found out by the 3rd generation, there was nothing wrong Because he needs someone to do these dirty things in order to stabilize his own power. Look at what the 3rd generation did after he came to power. In order to stabilize their political power, the Senju clan only has the granddaughter of the first generation, Tsunade, the princess of the land of fire. The permanent ally of the Uzumaki clan was directly abandoned after Konoha used up almost all its high-end combat power in the third ninja war, leaving only two or three big and small kittens. The Uchiha clan was oppressed to the extreme and was completely wiped out when they were about to rebound White Fang was so strong at the time. Because his reputation and strength threatened the position of the Hokage of the third generation, he was cheated to death. At that time, rumors were flying around the third generation. Didn't the third generation know it? If the third generation had not indulged White Fang, he would not have died During the Nine-Tails Rebellion, why was the fourth generation using the ghoul seal instead of the third generation? The Kumo ninja kidnapped Hinata and was killed. He threatened the third generation with war and asked the Hyuga clan to hand over the murderer. The third generation asked the Hyuga clan to surrender. Is Konoha really afraid of war? It was just that the three ninjas left at that time and the strength of the Hokage clan was declining. Use this to test the Hyuga clan. If the Hyuga clan didn't make friends, there would probably be no Hyuga surname Why was Naruto treated like that by the village? Because the third generation needed a target who was resented by the village instead of a son who sacrificed Konoha's heroes. Moreover, Naruto was treated like that and still loved Konoha. If he was willing to fight to the death for Konoha, wouldn't he be assigned another god? Do you believe it? The third generation often said that as long as there are leaves flying, the flames will burn. Remember that flames need combustible materials to burn. Only by burning those leaves can the flames burn stably. The Hokage at that time was the third generation

I just read it, why is it that this rare good novel is about eunuchs?

The Hyuga clan has the farthest eyes, but they always fight in close combat. They act as shooters, escape, and attack from a distance.

The author must not write about helping everyone in the branch family to get rid of the caged bird. I read the same in the comments. Everyone only sees that the branch family is controlled by the Zong family because of the caged bird, but fails to see another function of the caged bird, that is, if the eyes are gouged, the eyes will be directly damaged, so the branch family will not be attacked by other people from the Ninja Village. Targeting and gouging out Hinata's eyes, Kumo Ninja wants to roll his eyes and steal the clan's Hinata. If the protagonist unlocks all the caged birds, or even abolishes the branch family and cannot be labeled as a caged bird, then Hinata is not far away from annihilation. The protagonist can't always protect everyone in the branch family from being targeted, killed, and having their eyes taken away, right?

After two years, I once again clicked on this novel that was gathering dust in my collection. I just wanted to look up to the sky and sigh, when will he come back to update?

Writing time travel novels means having your own ideas and understandings, writing, practicing, practicing, and being funny for the sake of being funny. It's really boring after a long time. The same plot is not as good as this kind of author who has his own understanding of animation.

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In fact, all the reasons are because Hinata was not carved as a caged bird. Anyone with a discerning eye knows that Hinata Hinata is now focused on cultivating Hanabi as his heir. According to regulations, Hinata should be carved as a caged bird and become a member of the branch family. Although Hinata Hinata is delaying, I don't believe Hinata doesn't know the Hinata family's rules about caged birds. She is actually pretending to be deaf and dumb to be special. Since you have chosen to be special and continue to enjoy the freedom of being a clan member, you will naturally have to bear the consequences of being special.

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