A Reasonably Developed Ninja World

It's not that you can't survive without Golden Finger. It's that the development is too slow and no one cares about it. Then there are a lot of eunuchs with appendixes. It's a vicious cycle that no one cares about.

Reading the introduction is like asking a question, how does such a protagonist or author break out in the real world?

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ ​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ And the concept and description are both very good, but there is a more serious problem, the writing style is slightly poor. It's not about the writing power, but the handling of the article, the more typical of which is segmentation and some details. Your segments are too long, and people are limited in how much they can read new information.         4，，， When reflecting on a novel, because you don't need to memorize the text, you only need to understand the content, so it is usually divided into key points and turning points to facilitate memory. For example, my paragraph contains four paragraphs, each paragraph is a small point. As for the turning point, I will put it in this paragraph, because the four sentences in the previous paragraph are progressive, and the abrupt turning point will affect the reading experience. So, why should I do it, because it is more smooth, and it inherits the reason from the previous paragraph. The reason why we need to accept the because is because it can form an invisible thimble to double echo the above and make the article have a stronger connection. Such connections are like bones, which can connect your articles together, making your articles not only flesh and blood, but also bone and marrow.

Thank you for your many updates today. I am so happy to read them! I think you wrote it very well. The protagonist Nagata is also a very interesting person. Although he is getting younger, his mentality has not completely transformed into that of a child. He has the thoughts of an adult and the yearning of a child. My opinions are crude, but from what I've seen, this book has a lot of promise. Nagata is really a very cute and outstanding child. I can't help but think that Tobirama, Hashirama, Mito, Kosuke, and Aiko all have their own personalities and positions. I like Nagata. Although he has many shortcomings, such as his love of eating (I think he is also very pyrotechnic and very lovable), such as his indecent behavior at the Fire Temple (it should be called this), he is sincere, has an innocent heart, and thinks about Konoha, which is very lovable.

This book feels like reading a paper again——

The protagonist is so easy to choose. Why not be obscene and develop when you have no strength, but do some things that are inconsistent with your strength? In the first few chapters, the IQ is still online, but in the later chapters, it is all because of the protagonist's aura, and the IQ plummets! 😪

Come on, author🤭! (I really like the steady and smooth protagonist, please keep writing!)

This is a surprising Naruto fanfic, and it is very smooth to read. To me, the plot is not bad at all. I really like the character of Nagata and everyone in the Senju family portrayed by the author. Please keep up the good work

The first two articles were pretty good, but after that, I felt like they had a different author and the quality plummeted.

It is best to add a chapter number before the title.

Two things that Hasi hot moms care about. One, Madara. Two, the village. Gay friend Madara is no longer here, so let the village take Madara's place in the heart of Hasi hot mom.

The book is good to read, but the name of the author makes me hesitant to invest in it. The pen name is a bit discouraging.

I was in a bad mood yesterday and read some comments. The author's character is very impulsive, and he doesn't take hard advice. At that time, my anger was a bit uncontrollable. A book is like the author's child. Of course, the author hopes that everyone can praise their children, but are their children necessarily perfect? There are definitely shortcomings. Many friends have reported that the author's writing is very fragmented, which is a problem. I apologize to everyone here and will pay more attention to it in the future. However, I also hope that everyone will be merciful and be gentle, civilized and connotative when writing opinions. It also gives the author a little bit of comfort, okay?

When I read Chapter 5, I was very surprised. How could this kind of book get such bad results? I read another 20 chapters. Well, this result is so right. I stopped reading later. I guess the protagonist has already held a ninja civilian family event and had fun with the ninjas and civilians, right? It would be nice to have another Ninja World Spring Festival Gala! Why don't you take a few more eggs to the border to express condolences to the Konoha ninjas on patrol!

It's okay to cry with the protagonist, forget it, younger age is also a general trend

Ji Ji Wai Wai Wai Wai, write a few words, talk a lot, write a lot of stuff,

I couldn't stand watching anymore. I thought the protagonist was so good after reading the introduction, but in the end, haha ​​😡 (sarcasm) Is it possible to survive to the finale like this? Being a fool is a fool

It's well written, but it feels like it's been introduced all the time.

The style of painting is a bit uncomfortable, it's too dramatic

After being kidnapped, Style persuaded him to quit and said goodbye.

What about the protagonist? Where did the protagonist go?

Why are there so many comments in the comment section that I can't stand it? There is no problem with the book. The basic logic is clear to ensure that each character gives a certain impression. The characters who have a greater role in promoting the plot are guaranteed to have an IQ above the line (or even a certain degree beyond). In the case of only following the original work (excluding Fu Ren's biography) and the author's own second design (the important point is, don't use the second design that other fans use more as a fault). The logic is self-consistent and the plot is reasonable. Although the author may be a novice, the plot unfolds slowly, but basically every character has a brain. If you want to read cool articles, just read the book list under the famous cool articles. You will cry poison at every turn. Life is sadder than this. Without various cheats, you are not the protagonist. Haven't you seen you commit suicide? I can't stand it anymore and read another book. Who cares if this is disgusting?