This Aura Is Deadly

I have been reading for two hours, and I have a preliminary understanding of the author and the work. Overall, the flaws are not concealed. Judging from the beginning, the author's word processing skills are very good, and he can control this kind of Crousu style work. The vocabulary is very precise, the writing is relatively transparent, and there is no useless information for the reader to sift through. However, the article still has some minor flaws in the program. The first skill to control the article is to plan the end of the article. Behavioral motivation is very important. Only with motivation can the character's behavior and thoughts stand up. The protagonist's motivations are not clear enough. Judging from the first hour of reading, the protagonist seems to have carried out a lot of things in a very orderly manner, which is very fulfilling, but the protagonist's decision-making at every step lacks clear motivations and is more of a forced business. Does he want to become stronger? Or want to find out whether the source of your plug-in is harmful? Or are we looking for a way to travel back in time? The author did not make it clear at the beginning. The article keeps arranging emergencies, life counts down, and there is no time to think. The protagonist has been passively coping without taking the initiative to create opportunities. The protagonist has always wanted to find the boss behind the scenes, but the reason is vague. It reads like he wants to uninstall the plug-in. So I hope the author can clarify in the outline what exactly the protagonist is going to do? Even a novice novel will clearly arrange various stepping stone plots to force the protagonist to have behavioral motivations to become stronger.

The author actually wanted to write a story about the collision between modern times and Cthulhu, but the writing was actually not very good. It hasn't been too long since the book started, so I'd like to make some comments. First, there is no horror atmosphere at all, and I can't feel the fear of the incomprehensible monster. Just an ordinary monster. There is nothing but an extra intelligence-reducing halo. Secondly, since we are writing about Cthulhu, we can't make it the same as the upgrade stream. It's too white. What everyone sees in Cthulhu is to see the author's imagination. To put it bluntly, it's curiosity. More often than not, the plot is unimportant. The author obviously could have written it, but he didn't care at all. He treated it like a novice and upgraded it, which is very boring. For example, when I saw this lifespan at the beginning, I was really surprised. I felt that there were too many things that could be written about the protagonist in the modern era of Cthulhu with this unique lifespan display. For example, the ancient gods secretly grabbed the lifespan, and the protagonist was in various places (the airtight building is very good, it can be seen as a divided relic). With this lifespan, he can predict the time when the ancient gods here will wake up (the lifespan limit). You can also convert many things with the help of life span. As a result, I wrote a murderous intent exchange for life span, which was too nonsense, and the exchange ratio was too high. It can be said that the protagonist got through the Novice Village without any danger. It is simply impossible to write about the thrill of the protagonist constantly extending his life at the limit, and the protagonist can be said to trade his lifespan for things casually. In such a limited lifespan, shouldn't it highlight the protagonist's wisdom and sophisticated calculations? Under the limit, break through again and again, escape for your life, and avoid unknown monsters. Find out the rules of this place. The author made me feel like he was borrowing a bit of the Cthulhu style from the current starting point, and what he wrote has nothing to do with it.

To be honest, the writing is very good. I read the latest chapter in one night. It can be said that it is the best Cthulhu novel I have read so far. The plot is well controlled, preventing readers from seeing the direction of the plot, and the timeline is handled well. The metaphor of beads and ropes is very clever, and it seems that the second foundation has a different explanation, so look forward to it. At the same time, the treatment of gods and dependents is also very good, basically consistent with the feeling of being unknowable and invisible. The story is basically smooth, with the feeling that the truth is difficult to find out. The more clues there are, the more pitfalls there are. The stronger the technology, the weaker it becomes when faced with that indescribable existence. However, it does not really reach the point where the Cthulhu Mythos seems to be very strenuous, there is no need to fight, and it will go crazy when you see it. In the end, the reader will understand the paradox. It can be said that it is handled very well in an online novel. If all the pitfalls can be filled in smoothly, it will be a really, really good book. It is closer to Cthulhu originalism. Mortals have a good grasp of the powerlessness when facing gods. The tricks given to the protagonist also make the protagonist's uniqueness well reflected. Finally, the author seems to have some self-doubt, but in fact it is completely unnecessary. If you want to read a fantasy fantasy about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger or an urban romance about pretending to be a slap in the face, you really won't read this book. Write a good copy and round out the story. It is much more necessary than those plots. Come on, author.

To be honest, my impression of this book was okay. The author obviously has a good story, but unfortunately, you can't tell it very well. The subject matter of New Ghost Story is indeed very novel, but the story of New Ghost Story relies more on narrative techniques than ordinary online novels. I personally think that the main problem with this book is that you add too many things to the story, which makes the climax of the story not obvious, or it is always in the atmosphere before the climax, so the reader's emotions are not well aroused. Higher highs don't do that effectively, only lows do. I hope the author will continue his efforts in the next book.

The setting of this book is very good, but the protagonist's IQ is just not online. [F n=31], it would be fine if the rhythm was tight all the time, but the author also included an emotional scene (which was also not grasped well) 2 The supporting characters are well described, and each woman is no longer stereotyped and has her own characteristics, but the emotional scene between the protagonist and Lucina is quite sudden to be honest. I have always been concerned about why the protagonist didn't use it when he had obtained the flame seed. In the previous assassination, he had given up on ordinary ideas. Doesn't getting the flame seed mean waiting to eat ashes? If you haven't made up your mind, why don't you ask Lucina what she thinks first? I don't understand why I have to go see the female doctor as soon as possible. As for Huisu, the protagonist knew beforehand that he still had a few months to live. Are those two strangers more important than his girlfriend? Could it be Diana? Wang Aileen was introduced by Diana, and it is obviously more convenient for her to contact herself 3 The protagonist's IQ is not online. The latest one I read is that he decided to become a killer in order to get close to the extraordinary. Give me another expression 🙂. The protagonist is already extraordinary (can use skills). Is it necessary to take on the assassin mission? I can go into the Great Void. Although there is no guarantee of harvest, being a killer is not the only way to approach the extraordinary no matter how you think about it. Then I decided for a stone that I don't know if it is useful. I used all the life-extending souls in my hand, and it felt like I carelessly dropped the pistol when I got a large number of souls. I wrote it like this deliberately for the dilemma later (I did not continue to read) 4. As for the setting, I think the setting is very exciting, but the author's description does not give people a good feeling. At the beginning of the third volume, two similar but different views on time were written. This book is not a popular science article, nor is it a science fiction novel. This description does not add much color to the reality.

To be honest, before Chapter 300, I didn't feel much of it, but after Chapter 370, I felt that the protagonist was becoming more and more mentally retarded. He could easily believe whatever anyone said, and the ridiculous murder contract was even more hilarious. I don't know what benefits this contract can bring to the protagonist. If it is money, it is of little use to the protagonist, because the protagonist has not spent a lot of money so far. If it is because of the symbiosis stone, this reason is simply untenable, especially because it is possible to obtain the symbiosis stone in the future and absorb all the souls he has reserved to increase his life limit. . . I ordered it all the way, and I read more than 370 chapters in two days. I can't say I didn't like it, but the recent plot development is simply a shock to my wits, especially the change the author came up with is to change the girl? ? ? Those who read this kind of novel don't really have high requirements for the protagonist's partner. With the protagonist's ability to travel through time and space, it doesn't matter even if he doesn't have one. If you have this intention, it's better to think about the plot and not feed him poison.

Saved my book drought If you can think of this book as a fusion of Cthulhu-style plot + GTA5 version of the game + Hollywood-style movie, don't bring it into the first-person perspective. Treat yourself as watching someone else play a game. Some of the content will become CG cutscenes of the game plot, and some will become someone playing the game. In short, this unique writing method has saved me from the book drought these days. It's amazing.

I accidentally opened this book and after reading the free chapters, I felt that the writing was pretty good. At least it exceeded 90% of the same type of books on the market, and the number of words was also quite a lot. However, why was the score so bad? I guess it has to do with the title of the book.

To be honest, the writing of the side plot is okay, but the protagonist is also a 24-year-old person. In the environment of a few hours, his growth is too low, and his IQ is not online. I can't stand it, especially when Li Moyang was forced to agree to kill people.

I read two chapters and had a very bad experience. One is that there are too many English words, and the skill names are all in English. Second, the dialogue is too translatable. What is ass?

It's really good. I feel like getting lost. Some people say that the author is a toad vest. They all agree that the author's writing is beautiful. Come on, keep paying attention.

Nine monthly passes this month, I tried my best...😰

After reading the introduction, I wanted to curse. What does it mean that human beings have existed for millions of years...

Even if I, Wang Jingze, can only play Quanqin! I also want to finish this crappy book! Please feel free to collect and watch!

This book is like Knives Out of the Sheath. The author's intention is to depict the entire world from the first perspective, just like a Russian matryoshka doll. He starts with the smallest one, and then adds details through supporting character descriptions to add a larger world view, layer by layer. The disadvantage is that the plot is too messy, like a matryoshka doll with a lot of wool hidden in the middle. It is annoying, and the gems must be forcibly pulled from the original world to be used as tools to kill gods, and the setting is forced. So he said it was a slap in the face, and I think he is serious.

This is about my doubts about the description of time in the book and my thinking about time. The book writes that time is a pseudo-concept. Time does not exist. Time is just a scale for people to observe changes in the universe. This concept is understandable. However, the description of the world as a string of pearls later conflicts with time being a pseudo-concept. Time is a pseudo-concept. What I understand is that we in the past have disappeared, just like a program that constantly replicates itself and then deletes the original file. The copied program is now, and the deleted one is In the past, you could use time to record two programs before and after copying, but the past program has disappeared. You cannot see the past program (disappeared) through time travel. Using pearls to have different time worlds means that you can use four-dimensional coordinates to represent the world. If you can time travel, it means that the past and the present exist in parallel, just like the two-dimensional coordinate system (length and width) after adding the concept of height becomes a three-dimensional coordinate system. Let's talk about the grandfather paradox of time travel. There are two conditions for the grandfather paradox to occur: 1. Being able to time travel and 2. Being able to kill the grandfather. I don't think parallel worlds are time travel. It's more appropriate to call it space travel, because when you arrive in a parallel world, it's not the past of your world. Assuming that time travel is really possible, will the grandfather paradox occur? There is a plot in the later period of "Xiling Empire" where the protagonist and his daughter from the harem travel through time. The method used is the father + mother = child method. Simply put, a pair of parents are born as children. Then by deceiving the world into thinking that the father + mother then gave birth to a child, the child born in the future appears in the present. At this time, there is an idea. If one of the father or mother dies, will the child still exist? I don't think it will exist. The grandfather paradox actually stipulates that you can kill your grandfather, so will you be able to kill your grandfather, and then the world will collapse instantly and time will go back to before your grandfather was killed? (This assumes that time travel is possible. If time is a pseudo-concept, time travel is not possible, just like you cannot drive to a place that does not exist)

I just started reading the subscription chapters, and I think the author's writing is actually very good. The plot is also very coherent and has a lot of foreshadowing. As for the issue of murderous intent raised by other readers, I think it is just a difference in the power system. If you accept the author's setting and read it quietly, you can understand the author's intention. To be honest, the author's achievements are not directly proportional to his subscription. I personally think this book is very good in the current era of novices. If you read it patiently, you will truly realize that this book is actually on par with Lord of Mysteries. What an immature view, it's ridiculous.

This book I just ordered recently is very well written. I hope the author will stick to this style. What surprised me the most was the 2006 chapter. I can tell that the author is an old gamer and can get a lot of points. The IQ of the protagonist is not low! ! ! It's just that I don't have access to much information. To paraphrase a sentence in the book, "What is common sense in the eyes of many senior executives is secret to ordinary people."

This plot reminded me of the first part of Prototype. The protagonist also woke up with residual blood in his face, and there were people chasing him. He also lost his memory. What's more, you thought I was Lin Mo, but in fact I am the mother body of the psychic virus!

The flames of fire are gradually extinguished, but Wang Ying is nowhere to be seen? I smell a hint of Miyazaki's conspiracy

😏😏😏

Do you want the protagonist to cosplay the blood source, with a pistol in his left hand and a gun in his right hand to take out his kidney? Or do you want the protagonist to cosplay as Dark Souls, with his left hand holding a shield and his right hand stabbing with the back of the sword? The way I arranged it is absolutely ridiculous, just take a look...

I just read Chapter 26. What do you think, the author, to rub the reader's IQ to the ground? For example, as mentioned before, the protagonist's lifespan is five hours. I suspect that some company is responsible for this. I endured it, after all, we readers have a God's perspective. It's okay for the protagonist to have this idea. But but! ! ! Later, the protagonist kills a high-level monster, and the time limit is increased to nine hours. Could this be done by a psychic company? You can think of it with your kneecap. The protagonist actually thinks that Goldfinger is the work of a psychic company. Please don't put the readers and the protagonist's IQs on the same level just to advance the plot. It's a very good book, but it has to be a piece of shit. I read this book in the middle of the night and it was so good, but it ended up giving me shit! Forget it, you will definitely ban me anyway.

The character and behavior of this protagonist made me really uncomfortable, but the setting and world view of the whole book are very good, which makes people want to continue reading and feel very tortured at the same time. Especially the part about Li Moyang made me feel like it was stuck in my throat. He spent so much money to kill the old man. What do you say when people ask you? The one in the suit shop cost 100,000 at a time, but here in Li Moyang, 30,000 allows you to use 90% of your life limit to kill people? No wonder the sacred candlestick reminds the protagonist of his lack of intelligence

I just finished reading the first chapter and saw that the protagonist threw away the weapons that were obviously problematic and related to transcendence and rebirth. I felt like a bucket of cold water was poured on me, and my feeling was reduced by 70% as I continued reading. Maybe the author had other arrangements behind the scenes, but it was obvious that he only focused on the plot and not on the emotions. When I lost my weapon as the protagonist, I felt I also lost my IQ.

This book is quite well written, but it tramples on several pitfalls of online literature, causing many readers to abandon the book after the free chapters. What impressed me the most was the protagonist's reasoning about the source of the cheat. I understand that the author wanted to use the protagonist's thinking limitations as an ordinary person to create a sense of reality, but to be honest, most people will only think that the protagonist is wise after reading it, and the author did not write the desired feeling. Apart from this, other parts are well written, especially the doomsday dungeon in 2006. The feeling of moving forward in mystery and gradually uncovering the world view is very exciting to watch.

Except for some game elements that are a bit distracting, reading this novel is like watching a heavy-hit American TV series on Netflix. The background is rich in elements of American dramas. In the dark and decadent metropolis (New York), various forces are surging undercurrents, including overwhelming consortiums, private armed forces controlled by big capitalists, various underground gangs, cults, and secret societies. The fun part is to watch the protagonist kill people when others block them, and kill Buddha when Buddha blocks them. This is the first time I read a novel in the style of an American drama. It's very exciting. I support the author and don't be a eunuch 👍

Here are some weapons and holy objects used by Chen Ke, with pictures for everyone to have an intuitive understanding. Real-life firearms use real pictures. Some pictures of sacred objects use real photos, and some may only use game pictures or 3DCG pictures. Also, I found that I can't see the pictures on Qidian. Com on my PC. I can only use the Qidian APP on my mobile phone to view the pictures. So for a better experience, I recommend using the APP to browse the comment area. I will draw maps for some copies in the future and post them in the comment area as separate posts.

The protagonist's IQ is really written to be very low. To put it bluntly, he is as mentally retarded. It's so heart-wrenching to watch.

The protagonist knows that increasing the upper limit will make him stronger but he doesn't continue to use it. Is he happy because he was eliminated? Even if you save some just in case, it's totally okay to use 1/3, right? Just relying on being the protagonist and not caring about logic at all