Yaeger

It's so embarrassing, I can't understand it

It's been a while since I started following Process Destroyer intermittently. I beg you to finish writing a book.

I, Jaeger, just want it. . . . Sorry, I went to the wrong place

Is this entering the palace?

Actually, your book is pretty good, but the biggest problem is the sense of immersion. . . To be honest, you can learn from the book Lord of the Abyss, which is the most classic starting mode, and the writing style is very good, and the sense of immersion is super strong. The Dark Moon God and the Black Tide are so low at the beginning, and the protagonist has no sense of existence. In general, the writing style is okay, but the concept and settings are taken very much for granted.

I feel that the setting is okay, but there is not much sense of expectation and interest, and there is a lack of character interaction... You must know that the most important thing in a novel is the characters! Now it feels like just playing games, which is very boring.

Um, I'm so bored watching it, I don't have any sense of involvement at all.

Can the author please evolve into a beast? One update a day will save your hair, and one update a day will extend your life by ten years.

The setting of this novel is a bit like an underground castle.

Welcome to join the "Shinto-ryu" circle to publish your Western Shinto novels.

It's a pity that the West believes in Shinto.

Please be a human being and finish writing a book carefully, don't be a eunuch

Isn't this just a word game that was popular in the past? It's almost the same.

Yeah big head? Is that you, Datou?

As long as it's Shinto, I'll collect it first. Generally speaking, as long as it's not particularly bad, I'll read it later. There are really too few Shinto novels. And there are a lot of eunuchs. Both Western Shinto and Eastern Shinto like it. Come on, author

All right! Can the God of Day and Night be Orientalized? Let's have a god-conferring system, just like our Chinese god-conferring novel.