Demon King Uchiha

A very good book, I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Some people who don't understand Japanese can't understand 🤭

If you want to get good grades, you must re-revise the previous text, chapter by chapter, so that you can do better. Remember to read everyone's posts, so that you know where your problems are. While writing, you must also correct the previous mistakes. There is one thing in fan fiction that should show readers the happy side. Of course, it is not just a simple feeling, but a sequence from low to high, how to lay out the foreshadowing, etc. These are all things that need to be paid attention to. While understanding the character, constantly describe the character's portrayal, which has foreshadowed the subsequent plot, such as an item, and what will happen later because of it. This kind of foreshadowing must be there.

Dear book friends, please take pity on the children. I can vote for recommendations myself, but there's nothing I can do about collecting them!

Hey, the author is so miserable and pitiful... This data is really out of this world.

RT Naruto is a fantasy work. Although it was drawn by a Japanese, the author has connections with Japan and reality from time to time. It is still a bit strange to see it.

The plot is not rigorous. Firstly, the third generation became Hokage too early. Secondly, the protagonist's father can also use a kaleidoscope, which is a terrible movie.

The "Sannin" should be the first batch of students in the Ninja School founded by the Second Generation. At that time, the Third Generation was still a Jonin. The author got the time period wrong. If Sarutobi is now the Sandaime, how can he serve as the instructor of the "Sannin"? ? 🔨

Good evening, friends, today is the twenty-fourth day of my serialization, but I have not received the website message yet. As expected, this book is probably a failure. I am really grateful to all my friends for their support and their collections and recommendation votes (of course a large part of them are my own votes, haha!), But don't worry, this will continue to be serialized. Finally, thank you all again for watching.

The more I look at it, the more I want to send you a blade. The front is fine, but the back is shit. Do you want some Aoli?

The third generation became Hokage, and the first battle has not yet begun. Earlier, Kirigakure's people were asked to use water breaking wave. Later, they said that this was the iconic ninjutsu created by the second generation Hokage. The plot of this book is contradictory and there are too many plots that are inconsistent with the original book. The author is too careless. Even after readers pointed it out, you showed no intention of changing it. If you don't take readers seriously, how can you expect readers to take your book seriously?

It looks good at first glance, but it doesn't make much sense if you look closely.

The protagonist knows a little bit about everything, but is not very good 🙂

Basically, all Naruto fans have seen the starting point. My friend asked me to come and take a look. I will try the poison.

It's finally finished🤭Congratulations👍 No matter what the result is, the process is beautiful! Take a rest and look forward to the next one😃

The author's first chapter is about persuading people to quit based on their strength. 🙏🙏🙏 The third generation obviously ascended to the position of Hokage after the First World War. 😤

There is a problem with the setting of the Sharingan. The author has written it wrong. When the Sharingan does not reach the Mangekyou, it will not be weakened or become blind. There is a problem with the opening chapter.

Why is the protagonist not Madara? Farewell

Generally speaking, the author has too many personal settings!