Big Pirate Arrita

A more accurate description of the protagonist's fruit ability (｀ω´) I have always felt that the name "Slippery" fruit is a very superficial description... The primary manifestation of the ability is invulnerability and zero friction on the skin (at least it seems so), but if you think about it carefully, no matter how smooth an object is, it should be affected by force! (Refer to the theoretically absolutely smooth neutron star surface?) According to the simple friction formula F=μN, if you want the friction to "disappear", you must either make the pressure zero or make the friction coefficient zero (it does not exist in reality). However, the friction coefficient is zero, the surface pressure still exists, and the body will still be impacted... So the actual situation should be to make the surface impact pressure disappear. There are two possibilities for making it disappear, one is to deflect the direction of the force, and the other is to offset the force (refer to reactive armor). Obviously, the ability user's car cannot offset this force, because the force that offsets this impact force does not exist... Then the nature of the ability of "deflecting the direction of the force" can no longer be summarized by "sliding". Having said so much, what I actually want to say is: The slippery fruit is actually the ability to operate vectors! (Accelerator!) Is such a NB ability only used for defense and beauty? Oda must have just thought about the ability to make up numbers, but as a fan fiction... Hehehehehehehe

There are relatively few transformation stories in One Piece fanfiction, so I'll save it anyway. However, after reading dozens of chapters in one go, I still found a big problem. Maybe it's because of the author's limited writing power. To be honest, I can't praise the rhythm of the story. It feels a bit like a running story. There's nothing wrong with the fruit ability. The interaction with the original characters is quite abrupt, just like Garp and Dragon. It feels like the plot is for the sake of the plot. In fact, it might be better if you time travel in advance. However, if you travel too early and collide with Luffy's team, you will find that the protagonist of this book has become a passerby. However, I hope the author can make improvements in the future.

Thank you for taking the time out of your busy schedule to read the crap I wrote. I am a world-class visionary. I am posting this because I hope you can leave a few comments or chapters if you can. Every time I finished coding, I would hold my phone and count how many people clicked in. Even if I gave up in the blink of an eye, it would be an encouragement to the newbies. As a novice, on the one hand, I have so many ideas that I can't help but want to share them. On the other hand, I also have the idea of ​​​​earning some extra money to supplement my family income by writing compositions at the elementary school level. So no one commented, no one collected it, and no one voted for recommendation. I gave myself six recommendation votes, and I won't vote again. See what level you are at and whether you can write a plot that everyone will like! One thing I have to mention is that as a reader, I really don't like the author's behavior of asking for votes every day. But now I have started writing a book. It turns out that asking for votes is not for grades, but to cheer myself up, so please.

After readers' corrections, I have to make revisions to these previous chapters, which should be overhauled. So there is only one chapter per day in the past two days. After all chapters are corrected and completed, you can read it again. Anyway, it is free. Just think of reading a new book.

Hush, guess whether this will only appear later.

Just kidding [Chapter 13]: If Kizaru had moved directly without using the eight-foot mirror, Kizaru would have traveled 120,000 kilometers when he stopped.

I really hate this kind of time travel and want to hug the thigh of the original protagonist. This kind of thing is usually very boring, because it is basically the same plot as the original one, and there is very little original plot.

Is the protagonist Rita the fat woman with the mace?

I originally thought that A-Ma looked really good-looking after eating the fruit, but it's a pity that she won't have anything to do with her later. Please help the author, I'll wait for more words 😏

, Your novel has been collected, One Piece: The Visit of the Nine-Headed Dragon King, you can read it, they are all new authors, please support each other.

It's rare to see someone wearing a fat woman, but you actually gave up your natural weapon. From then on, the mace became a legend for thousands of years.

The pace is so fast, I feel like I can finish the book in 50 chapters. . .

The front is too fast, it feels a bit jumpy.

The transformation stories of One Piece are very rare. I want to know if there are any similar ones. I will save this one first.

If it never wears out, can you live forever?

Update it quickly. Only if you have 100,000 words will you be motivated to read￣￣)σ