The Immortal Cultivation Chef Goddess

In terms of the characters of the main and supporting characters, I feel that Jio's IQ is not high enough. The story about cultivating immortals uses modern popular terms in ancient times to accompany Jio's inner thoughts, and it always feels like a drama.

It's actually quite boring. There are too many supporting roles. The emotional line is inexplicable. The golden finger is too thick, causing the heroine's character traits and efforts to be obscured.

I feel like the author gave the heroine too much gold. Her training has always been smooth sailing, without any setbacks or training, which makes her a bit boring.

Seriously, are these three bad guys Russian nesting dolls? Night star phoenix, night frivolous, night youhuang

When we read novels, we sometimes feel that some of the plots are unbelievable. How could there be such an adventure? How could the protagonist have so many golden fingers? However, in reality, some people really have so many adventures. Some people are born in Rome, and some people are born with wealth that rivals the country. Just look at the founding heroes, which one is not like a legendary history. As the old saying goes, heaven and earth all work together to bring about good times, and heroes are not free to transport them. Some people have good luck, which is simply terrible. However, reading novels still needs to be based on logic, although reality sometimes does not require Luo Yi. As an author, you should rationalize the process of the protagonist's golden finger as logically as possible, and at least let him have it after some setbacks. Only in this way can the novel have more depth.

The characters of the male and female protagonists are interchanged, which is a bit speechless. There are many supporting characters, and the rest is pretty good!

Overall, it's really good, and there aren't too many emotional scenes. Some of the stories are purely romantic and domineering stories disguised as fairy tales, so I still like the author's emotional line style, and it doesn't feel like it's taking over the show 🤭. Secondly, the heroine's gold finger is quite big, but it is still within the acceptable range. After all, reading novels is for fun. It is better than having to read something every time the heroine is about to die. Then there is the character of the heroine. I have to say here that I like the character of the heroine very much. There is no seeking death, no white lotus, and no stupidity. I remember reading a novel before, and the heroine was so stupid that it made people want to cry. This book does not exist. The heroine has an independent and strong personality. I like it very much. The last little suggestion is that the author repeats the heroine's achievements too many times. As soon as others know the heroine, he lists her recent achievements one by one, which is a bit ridiculous. But it gets better later on, and I rarely repeat it too much. Regarding the exchange of personalities between the female protagonist and the male protagonist, I think it is acceptable.

What happened on June 14, 2019?

The first part is the same as a running account, the second part is better, but still not vivid, and the explanation is unclear. The secrets that many people knew in the first part are suddenly forgotten in the second part. I am surprised again, and it is the same situation many times. If high-grade elixirs are sprinkled casually like cabbage, won't prices drop? In the later period, you just boasted out of thin air, how awesome you are, so many strange fires in your body turned into fairy fires are new and unique, the emotional fairyland is just a slum? Without any background? Praise without comparison is exaggerated and meaningless.

I really can't help but complain, there are so many typos.