One Piece: Capone Bege

I haven't read much yet, but to be honest, the beginning was a bit off, the characters were immature, the direction of their efforts was wrong, and the writing style needs improvement. _(:з"∠)_ 1. Your control over practice is weak. If you can't quantify the training volume for the main character, then just write, swing the sword until you can't lift your hand anymore, or swing the sword until…

Is the Castle-Castle Fruit really that weak? It's written like it couldn't even withstand bullets? Seriously, Bege survived being beaten up by Big Mom in the anime and didn't die, is it really that weak? Is the Castle-Castle Fruit really that weak?

I haven't watched it yet, but let me share my thoughts on the Castle-Castle Fruit. Personally, I think it's an incredibly overpowered fruit, it's just a pity it was taken by someone who only knows the power of numbers. Development Direction 1: Shrinking. Since it can shrink people and store them inside, why not keep the shrinking ability outside, making all ranged attacks almost ineffective?

The statement "There are no bad Devil Fruits, only bad Devil Fruit users" is meant to fool idiots. Is there any comparison between a Mythical Zoan-type Dragon Fruit and an Alpaca Fruit?

The author ruined a selling point for the novel. Bege, being a gangster, could have developed his gang's power, gradually swallowing up the underworld, monopolizing the dark market, becoming the uncrowned king, accumulating strength, and then gradually conquering the world. But instead, you made him a pirate.

Gecko Moria was quite domineering in his youth.

When we got to the part where they fought the Fear Pirates, the main characters and their crew suddenly became incredibly stupid. I don't know what the author was thinking. Anyone would know to be wary of the Marines picking off the weak, but the protagonist just recklessly charged in. And then there was that woman's betrayal—what the hell? There wasn't a single bit of romance in it.

From beginning to end, he always said the toughest things, got beaten the hardest by the Navy, and had to escape and wait for rescue. He also had the Fortress-Fortress Fruit, but even then, it wasn't very strong initially, easily breaking apart. His spatial manipulation didn't really give the feeling of a fortress. I came here expecting a fortress-like character, but all I saw was him teleporting with a sword and fighting people—utterly speechless.

This Devil Fruit ability offers absolutely no help to the protagonist, and it even has several weaknesses! How is the protagonist supposed to become stronger? With his abilities, he hasn't even reached the level of Iron Cutting after more than ten years? Or are they planning to force a super-powerful swordsmanship later on?

There's a way to kill Big Mom. When she has bulimia, throw her a Devil Fruit. Eating two Devil Fruits will cause her to explode; that's an ironclad rule. The entire pirate world will surely perish.