Painting Box

Although it is still very young, the writing and story are very smooth to read, and the author is really rich in imagination. Xianxia focuses on imagination and writing. Looking at what is written now, it feels like it has a complete training system and a big map. If the updates are stable, it will be worth pursuing.

The rare classical fairy tale in the starting point feels a lot like Asking the Mirror, but the moonlight treasure box is too dramatic. It suddenly appears inexplicably and its origin is a mystery. This kind of gold can create a time loop and continuously superimpose the income from the time loop back to the real world. The fingers are just like the infinite resistance of small butterflies in the plane, the kind of ability that only high-dimensional beings have. The style of painting is incompatible with the world of Xianxia. Even the Great Desolate Current, which has the highest level of power among Xianxia, does not involve time manipulation. It feels a bit super travel.

It's time to go out after entering the dungeon for the first time. Also, is the entry condition the day before the fatal round? So can the protagonist enter even if he doesn't find the crisis? I hope the author has thought it through. The most important thing is to update more.

It's crazy that the protagonist's sect can be passed down for thousands of years. The basic skills of a sect can only be opened after you practice them to death, and the skills passed down from family to family are dozens of times better. Is there any need for this sect to exist?

How did you update it? The author wants to work hard and put it on the shelves for full order. I hope you will be optimistic.

Everything else is good, but it's a pity that the protagonist is an unreasonable and reckless man. To be honest, he is not the material to make a big deal. He can easily be used to kill people with a borrowed knife.

Originally the writing was okay, but as far as I could read the first few chapters, it fell apart as soon as "Westward Journey, Moonlight Box" came out. Why can't we tell a good story and have to make this crap?

It would be better without this golden finger

After reading four chapters, it gave me a headache. I will pick out the shortcomings of these four chapters. The first is that without the golden finger, the protagonist is useless. He is still a low IQ who is not vigilant, otherwise there will not be so much laughter at the critical moment. More importantly, how can there be a sense of substitution in this kind of thing that requires intelligence but no brains, no ambition, no talent, no talent, and no golden fingers? When everyone reads the book, the first thought that crosses their minds subconsciously is "I want to change the situation of the protagonist, what will be the result?" After four chapters, as a reader, I feel that it will only get worse, and then the sense of substitution is gone. Second, the long-standing argument, not to mention multiple paragraphs, does not divide the parts that should be divided into paragraphs! For example, the beginning is about the weather and scenery, and then when the protagonist appears, it turns out to be consecutive, and the paragraphs are ridiculously long. How many of you are going home? It's so tiring. Three, okay, I won't say much more. I was distracted after staying up late, so I just wrote an essay. If you don't like it, just treat it as nonsense and go to sleep.

By the way, the author, please speed up. Originally, the number of words in a single chapter was very small, and there was only one chapter per day. No one else will follow you for updates. After all, the number of words is too small. I saved it for a week and finished reading it in fifteen minutes. And it would be easier to ask for votes if you write more.

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That box is amazing, you can go back in time by carving any one of them, it's amazing! I don't know if this box will be explained later, but it's so funny now!

It's very similar to the setting of "Legends of Tomorrow"

Something was delayed tonight, so I will post the evening update at noon tomorrow.

Mark it, the introduction is pretty good, I'll read it after reaching 100 chapters.

The style of this book is quite similar to Asking the Mirror, but the gap between Lu Cheng and Yushi is too big. There is no firm will, no lofty ambitions. I feel like I have been drifting with the crowd and being manipulated by others. Can the protagonist grow up as soon as possible? It is not about the power of argument, but the will.