Kendo Ancestral Court

No one is talking? Be the first to eat crabs, the author is encouraged.

In fact, the writing is pretty good, and the training system and techniques are complete and logical. However, the plot is discontinuous, as if it was forcibly pieced together, and it left me confused.

The author's writing is really good, the sentences are concise, the imagination is novel, the plot is twists and turns, it is very attractive, like it!

There are flaws. Uncle Xu asked the protagonist to give her the second half of the swordsmanship. You didn't understand the situation or report it to the master and hid it, so you just gave it to her. Time travelers shouldn't be so brainless, they are sincere. Also, most of the people the protagonist meets have selfish motives, but suddenly he meets a He Yu who saves him for free and becomes a good friend. This is a silly and sweet label. Do you think this is really reasonable? Personally, I prefer the description of the exercises, which gives it a classical fairy tale feel. The plot must be coherent and compact, and should not be pieced together. I really feel that it is incomprehensible sometimes.

Thumbs up for your writing and amazing ideas! 👍, come on, ✊, wait for the update.