Hunting Journal

It was okay at first, but since he was adopted as a younger brother by the princess, the whole article has been weird. I remember the protagonist was thirty years old before he traveled through time? In the following chapters, the words and deeds have completely changed into that of a child, and she has been describing how the princess plans to shape the protagonist into a chess piece she needs. To be honest, it smells like licking.

There is a problem with the description! It looks like a female video!

Wow, what a great book. I dug it. I dug it.

Overall it's pretty good, but the plot needs to be written in a more detailed way, rather than revolving around a few female protagonists. There is nothing wrong with the idea, but the structure needs to be sorted out.

Some people openly scolded the royal family for being okay... Even if the prince is a copycat, outsiders don't know it!!! Is this kingdom too weak or that person is too strong...

After seeing the introduction, I was interested in reading, but after glancing at the book review, I could only say I'm sorry for bothering you.

Can anyone recommend some novels as clear as this novel😏

At first I didn't believe it based on other people's reviews. . . As a result, when the female knight and princess appeared, it was extremely poisonous, and the protagonist's thinking and logic were misaligned. This is not called writing what others cannot write, this is called not being able to write. Routines are for authors with poor architectural skills. They are a good thing for most authors. The author of this book obviously needs to write according to the routines. The characters who appeared in this book were able to hold on at first, but after getting through the first dungeon, a group of people took advantage of it, and the new characters appeared like mental patients. This is a serious poison, not a minor problem. . .

The sea race, battleship artillery, flying race aircraft carrier, and sail battleship are not suitable for aircraft carriers. Steam engines or magical arcane power need to be developed. The technology is limited to artillery and steam engines, and the rest cannot be used. Floating islands, even floating continents, civilization in the sky. There are four major civilization systems: land (human race, giant race, insect race, dinosaur race, ferocious beasts, giant beasts, auspicious beasts, and some flying races), underground, sky, and ocean (offshore amphibious, island amphibious, and pure sea race). Each civilization system has army and air force races. Every civilization has several intelligent races that fight against each other. First it was within one civilization, then two civilizations, and finally all four major civilizations were involved. There are three main points. The first is to downplay the gameplay and species combat power level system, and present a real fantasy world. The second is that the emotional plot must be impactful, especially the love plot, which must be titillating rather than nauseating. Third, the rhythm should not be too fast or too slow. There should be no hints of pretentiousness or foreshadowing that a big game of chess is waiting, or that apocalyptic disaster will come. This is very childish and disgusting. There are also ferocious beasts, huge beasts, strange beasts and auspicious beasts. You can draw inspiration from the Classic of Mountains and Seas as well as various Chinese myths, stories, strange stories and novels. To construct a Chinese-style fantasy world, the world view must be deep and impactful. Break away from the traditional binary moral and ethical framework. Race, civilization, beliefs, and interests transcend the flat binary values ​​of morality, right and evil, and enter an objective and macroscopic three-dimensional worldview. I also don't like those dark novels that pretend to be cruel, bloody, violent and terrifying. I really hope for a grand and sophisticated fantasy novel. Naval battles, air battles. Aircraft carriers of flying races, air and space battleships, air fortresses, air and space carriers carrying flying races

Everyone helps invest, and if there are hundreds of people, we will promote it on a small scale.

That Dorothy is really poisonous. There are actually worms in a mouthful of delicious food. This is how it feels.

I feel that the author is getting better and better as he writes. The latter part of the book is more interesting, and I also skipped reading 's at the beginning.

The author is so awesome and still perseveres!