The Tiger Lord

In fact, I rejected this book at first I saw it on the editor's recommendation and saw that the sales were good. Although the name is not very eye-catching, I still clicked it to read it At first glance, it was very good, special forces time travel, a proper story about the King of Soldiers from another world, and it is about accepting the three thousand beauties in the harem and embarking on the rhythm of a life of pretentiousness. Ah So I quit, I was really scared by this routine Later, when I was in the book shortage, I saw the promotion, and thought I should read the pretentious articles. At least it was cool. I found out that after time travel, I was a loser, and it turned out to be a loser rising up. Then a mysterious beauty appeared, and I felt it was real. I silently lamented that there are still people playing this kind of routine in 9102? It must be to take advantage of the girl and then make her unforgettable to take the harem. Then, the protagonist, unexpectedly, refused coldly, and did not show off as a pig like most novels like I thought. Although the process is similar, the attitude is really normal (I don't understand those strange women who come to your house, are powerful enough to kill you, and bring you trouble, and you agree to it as soon as you see that they are good-looking, and you still want to take advantage of them even if they are not). So I calmed down and watched slowly The youthful spirit is not afraid of the chaos, and the weather will not tolerate it. I will use my blood as a ladder to climb the ladder, and I will determine my destiny The routine is still very vulgar, I have no talent, I rely on my will, and the plot is a bit slow, but in the author's words, I see things I have never seen before The words are smooth and have some light rain in the world. There is not much explanation during the fight, but the words are as concise as a thunder. That bit of Jianghu spirit is revealed in the slightly plain words. The daily life of Qin Yin and Bi Fang is my favorite. Putting aside the slightly bitter and revengeful plot, peeling off the coat of the overly courageous and resolute protagonist, and forgetting the years of his previous life, Qin Yin shows a bit of youthful anger. I hope that the author can write slowly. I can't write a book, and I can't make any suggestions, but I think that as long as you stick to yourself and write slowly, you will be able to write the world in your heart. I also hope that new readers can read it slowly. The rain stopped ahead, and suddenly there was a different scenery. (The student party has no money to reward, so they can only silently support O(∩_∩)O)

Regarding this article I make more or less suggestions 1. First of all, I don't think this article needs to describe the protagonist's will too much (at least as little as possible in the middle and late stages) 2. It can be seen that this book is a slow-burning type, so now we have to consider the next cool thing. This point must be written about the villain's IQ (more important, because the villain is currently stronger than the protagonist and can use resourcefulness). After all, the protagonist has to use what he has learned in his previous life. He is at the level of a captain at least. It cannot be justified if he does not know resourcefulness (this aspect will test the writing skills) 3. Some authors have bad taste and add some strange poisonous points, which makes them look particularly uncomfortable. I hope we don't have this. 4. According to the character of the protagonist in the article, he should be a tough guy. You can add some brotherly feelings as appropriate (Feng Da's book is very brotherly. You don't need to add it) 5. If the main character's goal is not clear enough (the goal of returning to Earth, but the impression is not deep enough), you can create a bloody plot, such as the death (or not death) of a person, or a very important person, who can be killed by the enemy, and then the enemy is taken away by his patron, etc., And cannot be resurrected in the later stage (after all, it is too perfect) (you can also not add it, because it is a test of writing skills. If it is written well, it will be great, if it is not written well, it will be a poisonous point) 6. Then the author should describe the story so that it can't be too cruel to the protagonist, but it can't be very smooth, which will be better. 7. Can you not let the protagonist run into trouble wherever he goes? Let's do it step by step. Emm That's it for now and I'll add more later. I hope the author can read it. So far, it's still very good. After all, most authors like you want to try writing your own book because they have no books to read. Most of the poisonous points should be much less, and there will be a lot of pitfalls. I am very optimistic about this book.

Tiger Lord/Nian Lige/2019/02/08 Qin Yin/Tiger King/Tomb Tiger Sacred beast: Bi Fang Main training method: Taiyi Wen Tianlu/409 full opening 300 spiritual veins=1 cyclone, 3000=10 cyclones Body building exercises: Green Bull Divine Fist/2 Bull Strength/2000 Jin/Huang Xiapin White Ape Body Training Method/1 Niu/White Ape Boxing Sutra is a prerequisite White Ape Boxing Sutra/Huang Zhongpin Yan Huo Jue/Huang Zhongpin/Visualization Pictures taught by Bi Fang Star Chasing Leg Technique/Huang Zhongpin/Qinggong + Leg Technique: Taibai He Cang/Jumen Xiaque/Feng Shen Beidou Stepping on Tianshu/? /? Fengzhui Yaoguang/ The skills are divided into / Heaven and Earth Xuanhuang / Upper, middle and lower grades Weapons: Langya Dagger / At least the middle grade of treasure level Zui Jinchao / Heavy knife / Baozhong? Weapons of level 6 and 18 Mortal/Treasure/Spirit/Holy/Heaven/God Props: Pictures of the Spiritual Array Silver Medal/Legacy of Xue Qian/Eternal Night Assassin/Dead. 100 silver taels = 1 gold, 100 taels of gold = 1 low-grade spirit baht 10 low-grade spirit baht = 1 medium grade, 10 medium grade = 1 top grade Cyclone realm/1-10 spins/10 spins into a river River realm/1-10 rivers/10 rivers into a sea Guanhai realm/1-10 sea Zhaoyue Realm Zhanyi Realm Chengyun Realm Cuitian Realm Qin Dazhang/Father/Dead Qin Zhaoshi/Mother Chacha/Shuiyun Glaze Body Lin Xiyue Sun Wudao/Old Carpenter Xue Qian "Hunting Gold"/Yongye Assassin/Silver Medal/Dead. Yan Shujiu/Scholar Tianwu Dynasty Embroidered Clothes Envoy: Black Water Cavalry: Nanjun Longwuying/Shi Xingcuo/Qi 9 Song Biandao/Heishui Baiqi/Jiang 7/Dead Xiahou Lie/General Zhennan Yan Yao/Jiujiang Princess/Jade Pei Quilt Seizing the Master Yuanshui/Guanhai 2/Tianwu Wanxiong No. 3000 Liang Guards Yun Guanjia Shi Fang/Chasing Xue Qian, the princess' subordinate/died Yuliang City: Gao Wenlu/Prefect Gao Tianshang/Jinshang Casino Dong Cheng/Dong Lang and other 4 people/Gao Tianshang's men/died Yuliang City Zhao Mansion/Emperor's Family: Zhao Quyu/Eldest Young Master Tong Houfa/Tailor Shop Zhao Yuanchen/Second Young Master Hu Han/Second Young Master's Accompanying Reading Li Cheng/Qi 1/Second Young Master's Men/Red Gold Body/Dead Lv He/Maid/16 years old/Second Young Master xxx Zhao Ting/Third Young Master/Dead Zhao Xidan/Clan member Liu Country/Deacon/Ethnic Studies Instructor/Qi 7 Zhao Zhong/Former Butler/Qi 3 Zhao Er/Second Butler Jing Shuanggui/Zhao Family Caravan Guard/Dead Wan Lipeng/Da Dang Family/Tongtai Mountain Bandit/Qi 1/ Colluded with Li Cheng/Dead ——Jinyang City—— Nanjun Fujun Wei Junnan Tao Qinghu/Jin Yang Sanhu Hanlu Yu Jun/Qi Yi/Spirit Pattern Master Qian Xingning/Ping/Le/Yang Fan Yunhai/Blacksmith Jiujie List/Under 22 years old: Bai Hongfeng/97th place/Jiang 2, Bai Yue Youfa/Two Bird Seals Ultra North Xuan Mo Sect: Lv Luo Fei/Jiang 4 Lv Luo Fei's fake body Identity: Wu Yuexin/Yanyue Sect Chu Hange/Lengmian Gongzi Luo Yue/Dongli Singer Yuntai Sect: Elder/Jiang 7 Elder Wu/Jiang 6 Qiu Ping/Jiang 1 Wen Yunyue/Qi 10 Chu Yingjie/Jiang 1/Biyue Water Sword-Xuanzhong Kunlun Yaoguang Sect : Taking Chacha away Dahuangyan Palace: Nanzhao Mo Donghou/Guoshi Dongli Dynasty Occupying Anyun County of Tianwu Dynasty Six Sages of the Town: Emperor Baili Previous Life Qin Hidden/Tiger King/former captain of Dark Dragon Dark Dragon: Zhang Longwang/Division Commander Bayotide Tank/Bajiquan/Mingjin Peak Warhead/Detection Hyena Water Frog Nightingale He Hongchang/Captain of J City Criminal Investigation Detachment Cang Lang Club Wang Si

The writing is very vivid and soul-stirring. It has a chivalrous spirit and an unyielding fighting spirit. Even though thousands of people have died, I will die.

When I saw you writing about children, I knew that either the protagonist would save them, or Chacha would save them, and then it would be Chacha who showed a special physique and was separated from the protagonist. This SD plot persuades me to quit, the author, you can tell at a glance. Moreover, every time I see Chacha being kidnapped for no apparent reason, she inexplicably disregards her own life to marry an unknown child, and the protagonist falls into a trap every time. This is the most disgusting type of heroine.

What's your next pen name? When else will a new book be released?

To be honest, at the beginning, it gave the impression that the protagonist was just mindless and reckless. He felt that he was stupid to be a soldier. He wanted to cause such a big battle to kill people and it was impossible not to die. Since he didn't want to live and wanted to die, then there was also a hammer in the back. After time travel, it's not like he couldn't die. He just wiped his neck and forget it. Killing people in a low-key manner, but whose hands and feet are clean, what do you do to you? Even if someone is suspicious, someone will help you cover it up and treat everyone as equal. This is one of the most speechless beginnings I have ever seen. I don't know what will happen next.

The author should not write about low-level martial arts. . The previous sci-fi mechas would definitely become gods if they didn't collapse. Others unlock their world view bit by bit and guide the plot, which not only attracts you but also allows you to master it. Originally, you opened up your world view too quickly and stretched your horizons too far. You can only cheat and it will collapse.

I really want to make some comments. I have followed from Ji Po Xinghe. I have always thought that the author's combat descriptions are good. I thought that the ancient martial arts genre should also be very good, so I had high expectations at the beginning. But to be honest, I endured the discomfort from the beginning and read chapter 30, and then skipped to chapter 60. I can only say that I really can't stand it. First of all, there are some sentences that seem to be full of positive energy, but because of the frequency, I feel more and more embarrassing the more I read the plot. The main character's fighting style in the high martial plane has always been low martial arts. I persisted patiently until the protagonist activated the cyclone. Well, it was still the same. Suddenly I felt very discouraged. Although the author's writing style was not bad, I just felt that I was being poisoned from beginning to end until I couldn't stand it anymore. Although I left, I still want to tell subsequent readers to read it as a book written by a novice. Be more tolerant and don't have too high expectations at the beginning. This book is not outstanding. If you have too high expectations, you won't be able to persevere!

I have been pretending to be cool, or I am preparing to show off. The names are all high and mighty. If you don't accept anyone, you will face difficulties no matter how hard you create. You will face difficulties regardless of strength or ability. I, Qin Ritian, just don't accept it. I just want to defy heaven. I am the protagonist. Who am I afraid of?