The Tiger Lord

I actually rejected this book at first. I saw it in the editor's picks section, and the sales seemed pretty good. Although the name wasn't very eye-catching, I still clicked to take a look. At first glance, it's great! A special forces soldier transmigrates to another world—a classic soldier king's otherworldly slap-in-the-face story.

I have offered some suggestions regarding this article. 1. First of all, I think it's unnecessary to focus too much on the protagonist's will in this story (at least minimize it in the mid-to-late stages). 2. This book is clearly a slow burn, so now we need to consider how to make it exciting.

Tiger King / Farewell Song of Those Years / 2019/02/08 Qin Yin/Tiger King/Tsuka Tiger Mythical Beasts: Bi Fang Main cultivation method: Taiyi Wentianlu / 409th volume fully opened 300 spiritual veins = 1 cyclone, 3000 = 10 cyclones Fitness Exercises: Green Ox Divine Fist / Strength of 2 Oxen / 2000 Jin / Yellow Grade (Lower Rank)

It is written vividly and movingly, with a chivalrous spirit, an indomitable fighting will, and the determination to go against all odds.

When I saw you write about children, I knew that either the protagonist would save them or Chacha would save them, and then Chacha would definitely show her special constitution and be separated from the protagonist. The plot of this SD (Slam Dunk) is off-putting, author. You could tell just by looking at it.

What will be your next pen name? And when will you release your new book?

Honestly, the beginning gave the impression that the protagonist was just mindlessly reckless, as if he'd gone mad from being a soldier. Why make such a big fuss about killing people, making it seem like death was inevitable? If he didn't want to live and just wanted to die, what was the point of writing the rest? He's a time traveler, not invincible, he might as well just slit his own throat.

Author, please stop writing about low-level martial arts worlds. The previous sci-fi mecha stories were absolutely phenomenal if they hadn't fallen apart. Other authors gradually unlock their world-building, guiding the plot step by step; this keeps the story engaging and allows for better control. Your previous work expanded the world-building too quickly, broadening the scope too much. It relied on cheat codes, which led to the story's collapse.

I genuinely want to offer some feedback. I followed the series from "Machine Breaking the Galaxy" and always thought the author's combat descriptions were good. I figured writing about ancient martial arts would be great too, so I had high expectations from the start. But honestly, after enduring the discomfort until chapter 30, and then skipping around to chapter 60, I just couldn't keep going.

He's always showing off, or he's always preparing to show off. He always comes up with fancy names. He's defiant and doesn't respect anyone. He'll face any challenge, even if there isn't one. He doesn't care about strength or ability. I, Qin Ritian, refuse to accept this. I'm going to defy the heavens. I'm the protagonist. Who am I afraid of?