In Search of the Immortal Way

I have read so many books, including Xianxia novels, but only Ergen, Huanyu, and Laowu are the best in my opinion. The plot is delicate, and it doesn't feel like it's made up of words and nonsense. Very comfortable to watch.

This book is much more exciting than before, with less text and a fast pace. It is hoped that it will surpass the Hundred Refiners. It is a rare and good article on cultivating immortals. In today's era when there is a lack of immortal grass, it can become a classic!

I don't know how this book will fare, it feels so nonsensical. If a cultivator is so stupid, there will be no bones left that cannot be eaten. It feels like Huan Yu initially wanted to write about traditional cultivation of immortality, but found that the results were not good, so he tried to change his style, but compared with Xiaoshuang's writing, it was far behind. Now if you want to be popular at the starting point, you have to add some lubricating oil from time to time. If you have something to do, run around at high speed. You don't necessarily have to open a harem and dig fish ponds, but the emotional drama should be heavier. This book has no female protagonist at all after arriving in the spiritual world. This way of writing makes readers have no sense of involvement, and the attention will definitely drop a lot. It feels that the conflicts are not high enough, and it is a bit ungraspable.

If it was written so humorously from the beginning, the results might have been better, but the first few hundred chapters felt like it discouraged a lot of people. Nowadays, there are too many traditional fairy tale novels that are bad, and too few that are good. Immortality novels can easily turn into routines if you are not careful. Those without novelty and creativity will not attract people. Those that are too unique will easily be criticized. It is really difficult.

The thunder is rolling, and an inner sect elder deprives the protagonist of his spiritual elixir in front of his face. Can you imagine it? It's like you were one of the ten top three students, and then the vice-principal of the school suddenly came over and told you that your quota was cancelled, because the quota was given to the son of District Chief Wang. I'm not saying that they can't do this kind of thing, on the contrary, they are too capable, but they usually are not so low-end and will do it in the background. If they do it, they will either not let you know, or even if they let you know, they can use other means to harass you, such as making a fuss about discipline, or making a fuss about your words and deeds, or even making a fuss about your dormitory hygiene. They are very capable of making things out of nothing, but they will not think of telling you that your quota has been cancelled? I wonder why the inner sect elders would do something so devoid of political wisdom? Sure enough, the upper limit of the IQ of the characters in the book is the author, so I can only say that it is too bad.

I would like to give some advice on writing the protagonist not to be too invincible, and the opponent not to be too stupid. Because these are all very routine. So far, it's still 0k overall, and I hope it will improve more and more and focus on the plot. I hope you don't mind my little personal opinions.

Over the years, I have read a lot of novels. How should I put it, I first read The Legend of Mortals Cultivation to Immortality, and then I read Hundred Refiners to Become an Immortal because of Wangyu's recommendation. I didn't know about the book Bai Lian before. At that time, I was fascinated by Bai Lian. Although the author's writing was indeed a bit wordy at times, the overall writing was really good. Compared with ordinary people, I think there are many things that are better. After all, mortals sometimes feel a little helpless when looking at it, but many of them feel more comfortable when looking at Bai Lian. The two books have their own styles, and many mortal regrets will be made up for by reading Bailian. Talking about Huan Yu Da Da's effort to become an immortal, Lin Xuan and Yue'er's dependence on each other for life and death is really touching! It's very interesting to see the Hundred Thousand Mountains in the Human World Chapter! The brotherhood and sect romance in the Spirit World chapter were very interesting to watch. The disadvantage is that the later stage of Bailian is too weak. The hundreds of chapters at the end are really incomparable with the previous writing style! Of course, I can understand it. After all, this book was written over a long period of time, and it is already very good that the author can write it like this. Let's talk about the last few books of Huan Yu Da Da! Immortal Broken Void has the shadow of Bailian. Overall it's pretty good. I've finished reading it, but the progress is too fast. Maybe the author doesn't know how to write it. After all, the enemy is too powerful! The author cannot round up the writing and ends in a hurry. The Immortal Broken Void is a good book, but it is a pity that it has the influence of Hundred Refinements to Immortality. Many readers are dissatisfied, and naturally their grades are poor. If I had written The Immortal Broken Void first, my grades would definitely be much higher! Let's talk about the journey of cooking. After reading this book, I wanted to complain. It can be seen that the author wanted to innovate and write some interesting things, but failed! I don't want to say anything about this book because it's obviously a dud! Maybe many readers won't like what I say, but I think it's fair. Let's talk about the author's dual cultivation of magic and martial arts! It seems that this name is an early work of the author! I've finished reading it. It's really good, but it's too little! Finally, let's talk about the most important way to find immortality. I haven't read much of this book yet, but I will vote for a chapter every day! I'm still a student, so I hope the author can understand! ps: Having said so much, can the Taoist friends you see give me a like? Thank you, lovely book lovers! Love you 😘

I went back and looked through it again, and finally felt something was wrong. Recently, the pace has accelerated, and there are explosive moments. It should be more attractive, but the fighting scenes left me with no fluctuations in my heart and I couldn't get into it. The most intuitive reason is that the protagonist's power system is not concrete. He has practiced physical training, mastered the exercises, and opened the golden finger. However, the disadvantage is that the strength of the physical training is not concrete and allows readers to identify with the protagonist. For example, now, the protagonist kills Du, but what is his specific strength? What are some of his unique features compared to ordinary immortal cultivators? Emmmm, maybe that's not quite right. But in fantasy cultivation, the power ladder system must be rigorous, otherwise it will be difficult to watch, or the shining point of the protagonist will not be seen. Just like now, I don't know anything about the protagonist's strength. When he kills others, I am just like an ordinary viewer. There is no fluctuation and no way to get involved. Just imagine, if Yingying Yueyue knew that the protagonist could compete with the ninth or eighth level of Qi training, and met the Du family at the seventh level of Qi training, he knew that the protagonist had killed Du, but he couldn't see the protagonist's strength and thought that the protagonist was just a loser, and then took action. The plot may be a bit old, but the author with high skills can immediately give you a sense of expectation. emmmm, it's just a brief discussion, don't blame me for being wrong.

Book Review: When I first read this book, I thought it would be like other cultivation novels. The protagonist is a loser, but because of some great opportunity (plug-in), he starts to show off in the cultivation world and is on the road to the pinnacle of life. However, upon closer inspection, it is not the case. This book is a slow-burn novel, which made me immersed in the world of this book without even realizing it. When I came back to my senses, I had already read the latest chapter of this book. After reading it, I looked through the book review area and found a lot of comments about how this book was so toxic. The management should have deleted a lot of it. But to be honest, I read a lot of online articles, and there were really not a few that made me become addicted. After reading their complaints (I guess), they can be roughly divided into the following points: 1. This book is too cruel to the protagonist. The first few pictures made the protagonist too sad, and they couldn't accept it. 2. The supporting characters in this book are not above the IQ level. They like to find troubles and force themselves to be sent to the protagonist to upgrade and gain experience. 3. The routine is too old and has no new ideas. Basically, you can guess the subsequent plot just by seeing the beginning. But is this book really as poisonous as they say? I think it is not as serious as they said. Let me analyze (refute) these points one by one: 1. This book is said to be abusive to the protagonist. After reading the first few pictures, I did not feel that it was very abusive. All I felt was that the plot was well written. It should be natural that he should develop in this way, because the protagonist Qin Yan is only a mortal, and for those immortal sects, his existence is not necessary. He was selected by the Immortal Alliance simply because he relied on perseverance to practice the "Book of Seeking Immortality" to develop his inner energy. He thought that he would be admitted to the Immortal Sect, become a disciple of the Immortal Sect, and obtain the skills to cultivate immortality. Is it poisonous here? The Knight is not poisonous, but it's just written in such a realistic way that it makes you, the flowers growing up in the greenhouse, feel uncomfortable. That's why you think it's poisonous? But you have to know that this is actually written very clearly, and the tempering you receive in society is far more than that. 2. I think the supporting character in this book has a low IQ and likes to make trouble and kill people by force. Then I have to ask you, have you really read this book seriously? What made you think the supporting characters in this book made you feel this way? For example, Du Kong, who has been targeting the protagonist in the early stage, targets the protagonist because Elder Murong treats Qin Yan better than himself. He becomes jealous of Qin Yan and feels that he is better than Qin Yan but cannot be favored by Elder Murong, so he thinks of how to target Qin Yan and give him a stumbling block. It is reasonable and reasonable. There is nothing like what you said about making trouble. I don't know how you came to this conclusion 3. I think the routines of this book are old and have no new ideas. You can guess the ending after reading the beginning. So the question is, with this plot development, can you tell me what its ending is? Don't tell me that this is the story of a wasted boy's counterattack and reaching the top of his life. If you put it this way, then basically all books can be summarized in this way, so why else should you read them, because they are all routines, and you can guess what you are thinking at the end just by looking at the beginning. From my own experience, this book also has some tricks, but I won't tell you that you can guess the ending at the beginning. I can only say that there are some things. If you read more books, you can roughly predict the fate of a certain character. For example, some people who want to kill the protagonist will definitely die. Therefore, this article cannot be considered true So, after analysis, these problems actually do not exist at all. If you insist on saying so, it is actually nitpicking. I am quite disgusted with this behavior. If you like it, you just like it, if you don't like it, just delete it. Why leave a message and complain? It will not only increase your own trouble, but also bother the management to delete the banned package for you. It is unnecessary. The above is my book review, thank you for reading, and please forgive me if there are any shortcomings.

The family can last for thousands of years because they are all smart people and know the rules. The children of the aristocratic family described by the author really give people the impression that they are all mentally retarded. It is really a miracle that such a family can survive. Comparing a family to a small circle, the small circle is divided into countless parts. The resources within the family are limited, and they will definitely compete with each other. Everyone has their own plans. The children of aristocratic families are often much more mature than poor teenagers of the same age. In order to bring out the protagonist, this is very brainless, how is it different from those white novels. If a book starts poorly, it will be difficult to attract readers, because after such a long period of accumulation, there are really countless books in this field. A book is a world, with various characters and personalities, and all kinds of world conditions. Only in this way can we draw a colorful world. Every character in the book is well written and has a soul, making people feel that they are all flesh-and-blood people with stories. Only such books have soul, can be savored carefully, and are fascinating.