The Otherworldly Merchant

I hope you won't be a eunuch. This book is really good.

The subject matter of this book is very good. I originally wanted to see the protagonist traveling around the world, but it ended up being more than 300 chapters and still wandering around my own home. Not to mention, the Ning Meng portrayed by the key author poisoned me. The protagonist had to give her a share of all the good things. Is that a world where children can indulge at will if they are cute? Ning Meng and her grandfather just put a child next to the protagonist without asking if he agrees with it. As a result, the protagonist just accepted it and actively said that he would try his best to protect her. What kind of relationship do you have with their family? You killed a demon together and brought a gift, a burden to the mortal realm? I really don't know what the author was thinking.

Support, although there are a few flaws, but it is already very good. I hope the more I write, the better it will be.

What the hell is this book about? It says at the beginning that Shang Qiu helped the protagonist for 10 years. Later, when Qiu Zhan died, he said that he could not repay his kindness even if he wanted to. It seemed to give people the impression that the protagonist killed his benefactor because he did not want to repay his kindness. After that, the protagonist just let it go because Qiu's daughter was too fat. Go and see if Qiu's daughter will die. This gives readers an image of the protagonist being ungrateful. In Chapter 69, the protagonist was cheated, sold, and deceived by Ning Yuan and went to hit the clock. After that, he was not angry. It was revealed in a wordless sentence, giving readers the feeling that the protagonist is mentally retarded. If Ning Yuan had made it clear to the protagonist from the beginning that the protagonist wanted to win, that would be the opportunity you, Ning Yuan, gave the protagonist. Now you don't say anything and you ask the protagonist to risk his life to hit the bell, and when you come back, you ask the protagonist to take the blame (make an enemy). The protagonist didn't get angry when he found out, he just said nothing. I am also speechless! I'm wondering, the author, if you want to write that the protagonist is an ungrateful retard, or if you think the readers are stupid. The logic doesn't make sense, how do you want readers to read on?

What does the author mean by this? First, establish a complete training system, and then write a protagonist who crushes this system under his feet. 100 Yuan can be exchanged for 100 physical fitness. Writing like this is not as good as directly writing about physical sanctification. Why do you need so many martial arts? You can even do nothing and just draw every day. You can increase your physical fitness by 130,000 in ten days. Then if you draw for a month or a year, will you directly become a saint? What else should you practice? Just draw. It's okay to say that each person only draws once. Your physical body is strong enough to live in the forest, and you can just draw animals every day. The reason why some big-name books can become gods is because they have a complete system and a complete world. Writing like this reminds me of a joke: "If China has 1.3 Billion people and each person gives me a dollar, I will have 1.3 Billion." You are even scarier than this. You are directly robbing money, not just a dollar. Those who have more money will rob more, and those who have less money will rob less. But in the final analysis, it is robbing money. The same goes for conversion. If you directly convert 100 to 100, there is no middleman to earn the price difference. Other people's big book books have later attribute points that are more difficult to obtain. It's better for you, there is no middleman to directly upgrade. What's even more terrifying is that in other people's systems, it's difficult to become a saint through the physical body. It's better for you to just ignore everything and make your physical body stronger first. There is also the obsessive attitude towards physical fitness. You can only see your own physical fitness, but not others. Do you want us to compare? Also, the protagonist's physical fitness is 100 times strengthened by 1300 times at the beginning. Is this going straight to the sky? Later, it will be 4300 times higher. It is so ugly. In other systems, physical sanctification pursues the unity of the Dharma and the body, carrying thousands of worlds with the body. This is good for the protagonist. The Dharma is not needed, and the world is directly carried by the body. Are you going to follow the route of Pangu? Pangu is the person who incarnates the world and transforms millions of living beings. You plunder tens of millions of living beings to achieve yourself.

What does the protagonist get in Jiu Chi Cliff, and what do the two pets get? This section is a bit vague, is it foreshadowing? If so, the writing is a bit confusing. It seems like you got something but you feel like you got nothing. The person you saved said you owed a favor and then gave you the fruit. Is this repayment? Or is the price the protector?

Haokan, I'll give you my first monthly ticket this month, no more eunuchs 🤓🤓🤓

Doesn't the author create a group?

😆I hope the author can stick to it. This book is as good as "The Great God's (Xiaoyao Menglu)"!

I like it, author, cheers (ಡωಡ)