Marvel: Lethal Protector

Come on, author. It seems that there are no big problems in general. The writing is also okay. It would be nice if the character's image and personality could be more perfect. A good three-dimensional sense of the character can cover up many shortcomings of other stores. Just like "The Count of Monte Cristo", it is a very old-fashioned revenge story, but the characters feel very three-dimensional and real, so it is a big seller. Come on, I am a rare Venom fan, I still like this kind of painting style that is slightly biased towards lawful kindness.

Let's talk about it: Catherine pursues the male protagonist, the male protagonist pursues Wanda, and Wanda rejects the male protagonist. Then some people didn't like Catherine, so the author wrote her off. Childhood sweetheart, she has a lot of scenes in over 100 chapters, and then she will die if she wants to, pig's feet, if you don't like her, why don't you just keep her corpse? If you have time to call and send text messages to Wanda, why don't you have the time to keep her corpse? Didn't you say you treat her as your sister? And then after he died, his body was taken by Hydra and used to make a weapon against the protagonist? Is this considered whipping a corpse? Wanda, how many times have you met, and how long have you known her, and why do you like her so much? Maybe the root reason is that Naoko is older, and Catherine can't afford A? I can't stand it anymore. People behind me should consider their poison resistance 🙏

Come on, this is a very good Venom fanfic. I hope the plot is deeper and has some foreshadowing. Overall, the characterization is pretty good, not toxic.

What's the use of Catherine in the book besides making people angry?

Because you watched Aquaman and particularly liked the heroine of Aquaman, you forced yourself to visit Aquaman? ? Are you going to watch Journey to the West in two days and write about a group of four?

Can I ask if Mera is the one in Aquaman? She is also the author's original heroine. If it was from Aquaman, would it be written about DC?

For me personally, there are quite a few poisonous points 1. The protagonist is aboriginal 2. Being a dog for S. H. I. E. L. D. 3. An emotional drama comparable to a romance 4. Possible misunderstandings about contemporary Chinese people First of all, I would like to remind those who have not started watching it yet. Although the introduction says about traveling through parallel worlds, the protagonist actually has no idea about the plot, only knows a few names of people, and cannot recognize them in person. In other words, the protagonist is actually no different from an indigenous person. Furthermore, maybe I'm overthinking it. The author writes that the protagonist is a Chinese-American, and he always emphasizes that he is very patriotic, but I don't know why he has to write it as an American. Moreover, the parents who complained about China before thought that their children would be useless if they don't go to college, and they like the American way of education. The protagonist arrived in the imperial capital, and Hawkeye protected the protagonist. The author may just want to create a funny effect. Hawkeye changed rmb, and asked two Chinese people, one girl, Hawkeye called Miss, and the girl directly responded: Who are you calling Miss? Your whole family is young and you left cursing. Ask the uncle. The uncle thought he was a liar and called the police to have Hawkeye arrested. To sum up, the author says he is patriotic, but I don't know how many years it has been since you returned to the country and which era of the motherland you are writing about. Then the protagonist joined S. H. I. E. L. D. And worked part-time to study the Rubik's Cube. Then, because he was afraid that the protagonist would be in danger, he had to put the protagonist under house arrest and not let him go out. Then, the protagonist was tortured for a long time before being put under house arrest. The original text said "This is because Hill is familiar with me, so I dare to commit suicide." wtf? Did you sell yourself to SHIELD? And the protagonist's values ​​​​are: pay as much as you get. So, you get the venom, you pay for it, your nutrients are sucked, your organs are damaged, you can't separate, you have no privacy. This is what you paid for. What does this have to do with your Holy Mother's desire to save people? Of course, the Holy Mother is a complimentary word, and I don't hate the Holy Mother either. It's better than the protagonist whose three views are wrong, but the reason for saving people is too far-fetched. If you have the ability to save people, if you want to save them, just save them. It's so normal. As for the emotional drama, I'm also convinced. Am I here to read romance novels? When I read a Marvel fanfic, you want to torture me? Neuropathy? What you wrote is messy, don't write it if you can't write emotional scenes, and you complained to yourself: Who said that if the protagonist of the novel confesses, it will definitely succeed Do you know why? Because other authors know what most people want to see, did you write this sadistic-looking triangle scene to express authenticity? This is a novel, so authenticity must give way to readability, okay? I want to watch abuse, why don't I watch romance? Childhood sweetheart likes the protagonist, but the protagonist rejects her confession. The protagonist likes Wanda, but confesses to her, but is rejected by Wanda. Then the heroine on the label is Mela. Is this really reality? How about we stop traveling through time? This is more realistic

Maybe my personal aesthetics are different. After I found out that Captain America lived next door to the protagonist and didn't know the protagonist, I immediately didn't want to read it. Why did I read Marvel fan fiction? It's not because I like the feeling that the protagonist knows everything. . . . . . Personal aesthetics are different. I don't like this feeling.

It's a rare Venom novel. The first few chapters are amazing. Unfortunately, your expectations are dampened by your annoying female characters in just a few chapters. I admire you too.

Lightning protection! Lightning protection! Lightning protection! Say important things three times! This novel setting! The male protagonist is a time traveler who doesn't know about Marvel!