The Ominous Shadow of One Piece

The book is good, but I have a word of advice for the author. Chapter names are very important. Many readers read the chapter names first and then read the content. So don't write chapter names that are too simple or weird. Be normal and serious. It's very strange if you look at those popular books and see chapter names. Basically, there are none.

The writing is really good, but I suggest that the progress of the task of beating the aunt can be slower. Personally, I suggest that you do more other things (such as slaying monsters and so on), because I personally think it is best not to write too much beyond the original work. Knowing the original work very well is your advantage as the author, which you should make good use of (The Pirates of the Starting Point) I have never seen several authors who know the original work as thoroughly as you). If the changes are too big, your advantage will be gone (for example, if you really kill Big Mom, then the subsequent plot has nothing to do with the original work, and you have to make it up yourself... After all, One Piece is not over yet, and Big Mom is not dead in the original work). I think most of us who read doujins hope to have a sense of immersion in the original work. If the changes are too big, the sense of immersion will be lost. (Sorry, I'm a little tired recently. Maybe the language is not organized well, but that's probably what it means. ^_^)

As the author, I have said that your writing style and understanding of One Piece are very good, but you must maintain stable updates, and the content must also ensure high quality (readers would rather read two high-quality chapters than 20 chapters that are all water). Don't always have only one update. Otherwise, readers will easily be lost.

Personally, I think the former "Four Emperors" of pirates should have been Roger, the Golden Lion, Whitebeard, and the Solitary Red (Big Mom is still slightly younger than them). The individual strength of these four people is about the same (maybe Gu Gao Hong will be slightly stronger, but not much, after all, he was able to defeat Kong without eating the fruit, and was captured by Garp later. After being released from prison, he ate the fruit and became stronger). Then, in terms of power, the Golden Lion is greater than Whitebeard, greater than Roger, greater than the aloof red. Of these four people, the Golden Lion can be said to be the most ambitious and the most consistent with the setting of a hero. The Flying Pirates are also the force that is most like a real big pirate group. He has brains, ambition, and ruthlessness, but he also admires his recognized opponents (after Roger surrendered, he went to challenge the Navy Headquarters for Roger alone, which Whitebeard did not do). Roger's pirate group is actually an adventure group that pursues freedom. The Whitebeards are more like a big family than the Pirates (even more like a family than Big Mom's real family). As for Gugao Zhihong, he is a lonely man, a lone wolf. The strong will return to strength, but it is not considered powerful. Of course, Roger became the final winner among the Four Emperors back then (after all, he has the halo of the protagonist), but I have watched One Piece for thirteen years, and I feel that the character of the golden lion in One Piece is the one that best fits the setting of the big villain (pirate leader) (the other one is Ming Ge). Others are either too kind to be pirates or too stupid to be leaders. The golden lion written by the author really conveys the original feeling of his character, which is really great. I hope this kind of later pirate characters can be portrayed so well.

There is only one comment - you are just a writer of novels, and you know nothing about One Piece [ 🤫 ]

In fact, users with cat fruit abilities can transform into pseudo-elements. After all, cats are fluids...

This man is ten feet tall, with a ferocious appearance, a tall body, five big and three thick, big arms and a round waist, a face like a gong, a weight nose, and a catfish mouth. I found that the characters Oda painted are very similar to those mentioned in our storytelling

Speaking of cats, I think of Detective Whispering Cat, Rainbow Cat and Blue Rabbit, Legend of the Seven Heroes, Happy Star Cat, Blue Cat Naughty Questions, and Black Cat Sheriff. And the strongest jingle cat.

Trafalgar Law → Evolution → Rossinandi, Don Quixote → Evolution → Doflamingo, Don Quixote → Evolution → A certain blond little Bitch vampire → Evolution → A certain shameless useless cat

Is the author Fei Lu Lu writing about the noble prince of the navy? To be honest, this book is much better than that one. I feel that the strategy written in "The Prince of the Navy" is greater than the strength, and it is crazy about Garp.

Extreme chaos is good. Is it possible to reply with an update?

For example, Aru's Demon King's Smell and Wolf King's Exploration can sniff out other people's souls and know all the other person's body information. No matter where others go, they will leave brushless traces, and they can find each other by smell, no matter how far away they are. The special electromagnetic waves that Coco's eyes see, other people's hostility, malice, mental state, and death. The protagonist awakens with the fruit, and can see other people's various states of the protagonist and their life span, electromagnetic waves of various colors, ominous black, murderous red, neutral gray, and life's gold. The destructive power and range of Zebra's voice, the sonic positioning map and the sound of death, Zebra's death sound can instantly make all enemies within a few kilometers fall asleep and die. After the protagonist awakens, Nekomata can emit the sound of death, causing the opponent's soul to become unstable and die or escape. In Gourmet Hunter, eating the meat from the Deer King can awaken the inner channel. The protagonist's awakened fruit can enter the inner space of the pirate world. You will find many fruit demons in the space, waiting for the fruit to mature and become a new fruit state, or to capture those who have highly awakened devil fruits.

Didi Didi The purpose of this post is to record the daily updates If the eunuch is a eunuch it will be updated according to the format of "how many days did Sao Qing enter the palace"

I think the author wrote about Nekomata's fruit abilities in detail. Except for Black Flame. What will happen if the protagonist eats the soul?

Shaoqing, you quit Fei Lu and changed to a trumpet.

Your pirate group's chef committed suicide because of your order and left a suicide note, and your reaction was just to put it in a book? I have to say that this description made me feel very uncomfortable. Although you used trickery to get them on board, they have been companions for some time now. Most of the crew members on your ship were born as slaves of the Celestial Dragons. Wouldn't they feel a little uneasy and disgusted with your approach? Even if you arranged for his escape route to be suicide of his own choice, the thought of me joining the crew must be chilling. You don't regard them as your companions at all, if you only rely on the kindness of rescuing them in the first place as a hub. That's not a long-term solution either. Human hearts are made of flesh. No matter how ruthless you are to the outside world, at least you have to give some affection to your own people, right? The novel is good, but I hate the character of the pig's feet.

Why does every fanfic say that Zhenzhen Fruit has side effects? Apart from the fact that sea water and sea floor stones are known to restrain Devil Fruits, and that Dark Dark Fruits can absorb double damage, this is not mentioned at all in the original novel!

Book friends! Something happened just today. Shaoqing was released after serving his sentence. Let's take care of her.

To be honest, I don't know what the golden lion is afraid of. Will losing his legs affect him? ? Yes, but it doesn't have much impact. He is a Piaopiao fruit and can fly. Moreover, you don't need to hold a sword. Why are you using your legs? I'm drunk. ,

Personally, I don't think Smoothie is that beautiful. Is there something wrong with my aesthetics?

I got a book of Devil Fruit and became a spirit, and I'm working on it with Lieutenant General 🙂

Don't forget about the sea shaking. People who write about pirates like to write about the sea shaking after big events happen. Have you ever considered how the sea feels?

It seems like it will never be finished. I can't update it even once a day. The author probably gave up on himself.

What's going on, brother, have you entered the palace?

I haven't updated for a long time, I thought I was blocked.

The author's description of the protagonist in the first chapter was straight up to me, and he looked like a coquettish person at first glance.

This book is very good, and the author is very imaginative. It's a bit like a funny book. Because there is no specific strength improvement, but it is a eunuch. It can only be said to be a pity, after all, very few pirate stories can be written well. Let me comment on what the author said. The Nekomata Fruit should be very strong, but this article does not describe the growth of strength, so even if it is used in the later stage, it will be of no use, because it will be unreasonable and cheating like Wang Luffy. Furthermore, the setting of the pirate boss is too high and has no overwhelming power. No matter how strong the physical skills are, it cannot be stronger than Garp. Leave a comment to support, I hope the author can cheer up.

How could the author wear Pinru's clothes?

I have seen this author before (￣y▽￣)~* covered her mouth and snickered

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