Naruto: Sakura Haruno's Tale of a Hero

Because I saw some people asking, I pinned it to the top to explain ✌️

Because this is my first time writing a book, I actually have no idea how what I write will look like to others. I quite like it when I read it, but I think any author feels good about himself when he reads what he writes. So if you have any thoughts and opinions about this book, please leave me a message here. I can accept any criticism. I just hope that the things I write will get better and better. Then, thank you all for reading what I wrote. As a newcomer, if someone reads what I write, it is already a kind of affirmation for me. This makes me very happy. Thank you again. 😁

I spent a lot of time doing it, and I feel better than before 😃

The problem with the shadow clone is a major poison. It would be embarrassing to force the shadow clone to rely on Misaka's feelings. A ball of chakra demands to eat good food every day or not work, and even has a confrontation with the main body. I have no problem with letting the shadow clone play tricks in daily life. The problem is that in battle, it is too much to let the shadow clone take the opportunity to blackmail the main body, right? Originally, the Yin Seal did not reach the expected power because it was restricted from using tailed beast chakra, and it had to take drugs and kryptonium every day to speed up the filling of the Yin Seal, but the shadow clone actually rebelled again? More than a hundred benefits? Are you sick? The villains forcefully survive each time and become stronger and stronger. The protagonist has struggled so far and not a single major villain has been killed. The tailed beasts that were originally said to be captured have disappeared now. They are obviously very powerful but they are always failing. Orochimaru will not talk about it. Kabutanzo and the Lord of Snow Country are just like that. Is it impossible to kill him? The protagonist's personality is obviously one that has gone through many vicissitudes of life, is indifferent to life and death, and is decisive in killing. Although he usually plays tricks but is ruthless, how come he has not killed a future threat until now? Is it interesting to force various accidents to allow the villain to escape?

I have to say, this book is really a pity

I can accept being single, becoming a hundred, or getting married. I don't need to look at other people's opinions about who I like in terms of relationships... But I have no confidence in 99% of the male authors of Qidian. In terms of relationships, even those written by great gods are still very confusing. Can you find 100 books with good emotional dramas among Qidian's million novels? Especially the emotional scenes of love between men and women, it's simply terrible... It's miserable! !

It was okay at first, but the protagonist revealed Naruto's life experience and Naruto became an adopted son. These two points poisoned me. . . . . .

Without this 1,400 years of experience in cultivating immortals, this book would be okay. Adding this setting makes people doubt that the protagonist spent 1,400 years in his previous life cultivating paramecium? He doesn't understand the Five Elements, he's not good at martial arts, his IQ isn't high enough, and he's still a middle-class student. The opening chapter says that he integrated the spiritual power of his previous life, and as a result, his chakra content is only 3 to 5 times that of a normal jounin. It might be better to switch to a 2-good otaku.

Weird character design, average writing style

What I want to see the most is actually the one with Ino... Sakura and Ino are my favorites in Naruto, and the other CPs are completely indifferent.