Academy City's Puppet Master

I have seen more than 400 chapters so far. I don't know if this novel is considered a torture novel. Maybe it's because I haven't read a novel about abuse, so my resistance in this aspect is very low. For me, this novel is a bit abusive. More than 400 chapters later, the protagonist has not completely resolved any incident. Each incident basically only has room to save one's own people, but does not completely solve the enemy's strength. If the coolness point is 1, this book gave me a coolness point of 0.1. Maybe these are the cool bits of abusing the main article. I've read 400 chapters and haven't been happy at any point. I rely on sugar to support me until now. It can be seen that the author is writing seriously, and the rhythm gives me a feeling similar to the original work in the catalog. However, this is a failure in my opinion. The original work is a traditional light novel, and one chapter can contain a lot of content. However, the content of one chapter of an online article is only 2,000 to 6,000 words. This does not mean that there cannot be more, but it is a limitation of the business model. This resulted in too much content but it was divided (this is a sensory division, I can't ignore the title and number of chapters of each chapter). This gave me the feeling that the plot was very bloated, and it was very hard to watch. However, I have only seen New Testament 6 in the original work, because the plot and story felt too bloated to me. So I think this is my personal problem. After all, many people think A Certain Index is very interesting, but I think the plot is too big, making it difficult to read, and the rhythm is too dense. I can't enjoy this book, I can only skip from paragraph to paragraph. However, the author has a good grasp of logic and story, and it is obvious that he has a clear outline. I will continue to read and finish all the books I have written. Finally, cheers, author.

I have also seen the Puppet Circus and I really like that setting. And now there is an anime being serialized on site B. I think it is very interesting to add this anime setting. However, I think we can expand our imagination to enhance the strength of the protagonist. For example, when the puppet is damaged or the body cannot move, it is better to control your own body. Or to enchant the puppet. After all, the combat power in the later period of the magic ban is relatively high. Support it (although I have only read more than a hundred chapters)

The name of the protagonist..., Big brother! It's 8012 years old, why do you still have a name that smells like a third-rate ancient novel (｀Д´*)

To express my personal feeling, it is best not to write about mainland China... After all, as long as you write about it, no matter it is good or bad, someone will tear it up (ಡωಡ)

It's rare to see a two-dimensional fan novel on Qidian. I finished reading it in one day and now it's past one o'clock. I'm no longer lonely. . . I feel pretty good about the plotヾ ^_^♪ Actually, I only watched Railgun and not Magic Forbidden. The author needs to work hard to update. I feel a little dizzy (=_=) and I feel like my words can't make sense. No matter,,, as for the characters, I just hope there won't be a harem. The harem will definitely be abandoned. I prefer Hitomi Shiranui. I feel like an old married couple. . . I can't imagine how awkward it would be to be with Sister Pao😓. In addition, although the character of the male protagonist is full of flaws, it is what Chuni anime fans have said, but I hope it is not a one-sided battle. The author's creation of Hitomi's unique position should play a redemptive role in the later plots. Only by thinking can the characters grow and the characters be fleshed out. Of course, it mainly depends on the author's writing. Warning x1: Don't pursue artistic effects and write Hitomi to death. . . I have also seen someone mention the issue of plot rhythm. My opinion is that as a fan novel, respect the original work and focus on creation. The rhythm of the original work and the rhythm of the novel do not have to correspond one to one. After all, the soul of the novel is the characters, and the plot is to shape the characters rather than the characters to suit the plot. The author must be aware of this while maintaining interest😄😒😒 Go to sleep. I should be fattened up before killing.

How should I put it? It's not impossible for fans to add additional settings, but if there are too many, it will change the taste. Personally, I think a large part of the reason why readers read fanfics is because they hope there will be a slight variation without affecting the normal plot flow of the original work. I can only say that there are many irrational readers who keep saying that if the ending of the plot is not changed, why do they read the same novel? However, if there is any change, these readers will disappear without a word.        ， I think most authors don't have the energy or writing skills to make changes like harem hordes, changing the ending, or deus ex machina. Indiscriminate changes will only make readers feel that they are full of flaws and poisonous points. I can't read this work until I've only read the fifty-fifth chapter. A large amount of text has customized a system and opponent settings for the protagonist. In the confrontation between Kanzaki and Kamijou in the original work, the protagonist has no problem inserting himself into the battle. The enemy is dropped from the sky and takes over the role. A large number of settings are added to the enemy, and the length even exceeds the battle in the original work. I think the author may have failed to consider this. Personally, I feel that it has exceeded the definition of the word fan.        ，，

I talked so much and wrote so much because I was really pissed off. What I wrote earlier was really good. Unfortunately, when I saw the scene where Shiranui was kidnapped together, I couldn't stand it anymore. The more I liked it in the early stage, the angrier I am now. I looked at the fan list, and I was ranked 107th just by simply subscribing there. Take a look at me In the front, the number of fans is about the same, including the monthly tickets, which shows that that paragraph dissuaded many people who were originally subscribing... For a complete book of more than 2 million words, the total number of subscriptions is less than a few dozen. Author, you really use your love to generate electricity. I admire this. If you write this book to amuse yourself, then just think that my previous comment is just a fart.

Shiranui(:з∠)_

Can the author explain the protagonist's pathological sense of justice? Even though he was being chased and beaten because of the original code, and then couldn't defeat Accelerator, he still insisted on protecting his sister. This is not like a person who has had fighting experience since childhood. The sense of violation is too strong. With the character of the protagonist, wouldn't it be possible to just grab a random passerby as a prisoner and be restrained? This is no longer in line with human thought... I don't object to saving people, and the Holy Mother does not object, but you must know what it means to act within your ability.

I feel like the plot is progressing too slowly now, so I decided to add more chapters. Find a reason: a monthly ticket will add a chapter, a reward of 100 points will add a chapter, and they will be settled together during weekend breaks. The previous ones will be added slowly.

I've read a few Magic Forbidden fandoms and all of them like Misaka Mikoto as the main character, but I still like Shokuhou Misaki.

Personally, I feel that the protagonist lacks subjective initiative and is always led by the plot, lacking a sense of agency, which seriously affects the reading experience.

Damn, I survived more than 300 days. . I almost forgot about the previous plot. But come on!

The protagonist's strength improves too slowly! It's monotonous and the battle process is single. It's obvious that I'm fighting Accelerator at 5.6, But it's so troublesome to fight a puppet? My classmate's girlfriend has been arrested several times, and I feel like it's all up to my seniors to save her! I open it at 55 next to me!

I'll do it! There is no good fan of the Demon Ban 🤓 (Manual dog head)

For the author, the few months of missing contact with this book were too painful.

After seeing the amnesia plot, I gave up on the spot, 88888888

Give the author a whole new job (referring to becoming number one on both lists by relying on rewards)

Is there no room for growth in the protagonist's abilities in this novel? I just saw that the original scripture is fake. It has neither magic nor development of abilities. When can I reach level 5?

Iron Man Teacher…

Why is there no review at the end of this book? I have been listening to the book but never read the text. When I opened it today, I was shocked. There was no review. I was thinking about these 2 million words.

Not bad, not bad, self-recommended, Samsara Eye of All Heavens, multiple female protagonists, and has now entered the world of Inuyasha. There are some pictures to see

The combat power and other aspects are all very well controlled. I like both books very much.

I've gained weight, but I don't have time to look at it, so I'll save it first.

I was following it at first, but then I stopped and thought it was a eunuch, but the sudden resurrection was really shocking.

After reading the book review, it seems that Shokuhou and Pao-san both have a crush on the protagonist, but why does the author say it is a single female protagonist? Is it just a good impression but no further development?

By the way, is there a group? I have almost finished listening to the book 😰

By the way, is Pao Jie the heroine? It feels like a pity that the Demon Forbidden fanfic Pao Jie is not the heroine.

Shamelessly act like an editor and set up a recommendation slot. Not many people will read this.