A Certain Scientific Urban Catcher

I have voted for a total of 14 monthly votes. I feel that this book is innovative because few people write about motivation + bullet time. The rhythm and rationality of the plot are also okay, but the updates are a little slow, but the veteran author is better than stable.

I don't know if Tiger Bee is an original character or an existing supporting character. Anyway, I can't search it on Baidu. This guy stabbed the protagonist's Seven Swords when he first came up, and then he kept hanging around the protagonist. I really don't know what the role is. And he let Shokuhou know the secret of the time traveler. The author's highlights are a bit dense 😅

To be honest, I'm tired of watching A Certain Magical Index fandom blindly save so-called tragedies. I am not against saving tragedies, but basically many time travelers want to fight against the darkness of Academy City beyond their own capabilities. Based on the author's plan, the time-travelers' confrontational actions were naturally successful one by one. But to be honest, if it is based on logic, it is impossible to eradicate the darkness of Academy City. You think you have saved 20,000 Misaka sisters, the victims of the Talent Workshop, and the victims who have appeared in other plots... But in fact, there are countless victims in Academy City. The protagonist can succeed simply because the author arranged it this way. Otherwise, it would be impossible to save 20,000 Misaka sisters. The sisters are one of the puzzle pieces of Alistar's plan. Before the time traveler shows enough potential, the darkness of Academy City will naturally stop the traveler's actions. Even level 5 Misaka Mikoto has not solved the problem, so why can the time traveler stop it? Of course, the above refers to those protagonists who have not grown up and "overestimate their abilities". The protagonists who have the ability to directly flip the table naturally do not need to worry about these rules and regulations. Personal opinion, don't comment.

I remember that a few years ago, there were a lot of people reading and writing fan fiction about The Forbidden City. But in recent years, I feel that the popularity of The Forbidden City has dropped a lot. Why? Fan fiction often travels back to Misaka sister. The ones that impressed me include: A certain scientific otaku railgun, Code Zero, a black railgun. A certain scientific Kamijou Demon, a certain scientific pseudo Misaka sister, Academy City's Celebration Monster with the largest number of words, A certain scientific space user. This book is the darkest, Guardian of the Railgun. Lv0, after my death, I traveled to the Forbidden City. The heroine of A Certain Magical Index: Scarlet Leaf is Archbishop Laura, Kamijou Touma (traveling to Magic Circle, Honkai Impact, Arknights), level 5 of Rebirth of Railgun, a certain scientific star player, and Accelerator of the Land of Eternity (complex comics involving re0 Magic Circle, Black Bullet, Stars and Moon). I have read it in Tieba. The two people who should not meet are in tears, a one-way railgun, the appearance of fantasy beasts, and a certain mass-produced Kamijou Touma. It seems to be a pity that the author deleted this book. If Accelerator picked up the catalog, Kamijou Touma traveled to the East and had an heir with Marisa. Misaka Mikoto and the sex-changed second child became good friends. Misaka Mikoto is a person with low abilities.

Come on, after all, in recent years, it is rare for a fan to finish writing a novel about A Certain Magical Index. It is available on all three platforms. I will still vote for it if there is a recommendation vote. I just hope that this book will have a plot of the New Testament. In recent years, Shirai's books are the only ones that have written about the New Testament.

I finally understand why my writing skills are okay but I am not famous. There is really nothing to criticize about the plot, the problems are not big, but the most important thing is the strength of the protagonist. From the perspective of these hundreds of chapters, the protagonist's strength has not improved at all in terms of hard power, except for some improvement in practical application (actually it is as if it has not changed). This shouldn't be like this. The improvement of strength should be a curve, a process of accumulation. Just like those development games, the value will be expanded every ten levels, but the small levels in the ten levels will also be slightly improved. For those Level 5 characters in the original work, you can see through dialogue during testing that they have made progress in normal times. Therefore, if your protagonist has room for improvement, you have to show it in the text. For example, the weight that can be lifted by telekinesis has increased by one kilogram, for example, the protagonist's mental upper limit has been improved, etc. It's like riding a donkey with a carrot hanging in front of you. You have to give readers something to look forward to. Aren't readers tired of reading an article with no feedback at all? Or simply for your protagonist, his upper limit is level three and cannot be improved; or his improvement requires an opportunity, an unexpected event... But these things need to be reflected in the text and hinted at. If your article only has a few dozen chapters, you can also say that the article is still short and needs to be paved. But it's two hundred and three and there's still no movement at all, so it's painful to wait. After all, you can't really design a plot where the protagonist jumps from level three to level five and level six. It would be too inconsistent to do this. That's it, I'll wait for you

If it warms up too slowly, it will give people a feeling that there is no possibility of improvement in strength. It will make people uncomfortable and feel unspeakable depression. You can give people a direction in the early stage and give people something to look forward to. It will make people resist the depression without giving any expectations. Those who can continue to watch it are those who have strong ability to withstand stress.

Why do I feel like the more I write the emotional scenes, the more I go back. I feel like the male protagonist has become a tool. The female character says what the male protagonist does, and the male protagonist has no ideas of his own. He is led by the woman. Everything he thinks in his head is seen by Shokuhou. Physically, he is controlled by the Tiger Bee. I feel spiritual and material. I am not free at all. I look so suffocated. I feel like the male protagonist should be punished so that he can't be seen thinking about things in his head. Otherwise, there will be no privacy at all (it has nothing to do with whether he trusts Shokuhou or not). Tiger Bee's explosive temper should be controlled. Now it's outrageous to want to stab people when they meet Finally, I want to say that this is still a male video. Why does the emotional line look so frustrating? The plot has reached this point. The male protagonist should have his own personality characteristics and opinions. Don't be led around by the nose when you see a woman, and you have no brain to make up for the women around you. Shouldn't the character flaws as big as Tiger Bee be taken care of? I don't want to affect the author's outline, but the main plot belongs to the main plot, and the emotional drama belongs to the emotional drama. The emotional drama should really be changed. The male protagonist should be made stronger and don't treat the emotional bitch. This is 1.5 Million words

Is it necessary to forcefully suppress the protagonist's strength to prevent the book from being too powerful?

It's already been chapter 137, and the protagonist is still sitting in his loyal wheelchair

Seeing that 177 has not changed at all, it is better to be a v5 or remain the same... I have no motivation to continue reading.

The more I think about it, the angrier I get, and I can't sleep tonight The protagonist can ignore Sha Damshan. Is Sha Damshan's approach correct? The author really doesn't want Sha Damshan to accept any grievances. The protagonist has to bear all the blame. What is the meaning of this role? Is it used to annoy readers? The protagonist has been hiding in hiding. The author will not regard himself as Sha Damshan.

The protagonist seems to have changed something, but it seems like nothing has changed

The protagonist's name is Lin Wuming, it's really a drama

Every time she appears, she makes me feel sick. She is too self-righteous, as if the whole world owes her, and I feel that she is not very strong. How can she be so arrogant

Brother, it's almost 200 chapters. Don't keep readers eating the side dishes. Let's get to the main course. Shokuhou Misaki has only appeared in a few chapters. This is too few. The rest are all supporting characters. Readers are crying for food. They are so hungry! ! ! We're going to have entrees, entrees, entrees! ! ! On to the main course! ! !

First of all, there is a problem with the setting of the protagonist, and he should be younger. A well-protected college student who revealed his innocence and stupidity at the age of twenty traveled through time under the crisis of his original identity being silenced, and was hospitalized with barely a chance to survive. When I saw a seriously injured person in the hospital, I later learned that he had been assassinated but it was an inadvertent mistake, but I still had no real sense of crisis. Park Siege and Black Moon Institute were too slow because the author repeatedly emphasized that the protagonist came from a peaceful environment and did not want to kill anyone. Even if I watched it in one go, I completely ignored it. The protagonist Park was attacked and immediately rushed to the head office. From not feeling stripped of being a test subject at all, to witnessing the miserable condition of the test subject, to being reminded by the tiger bee and changing some of his mentality, the whole plot only took half a day of plot time. At least as a reader, I don't have the plot cognition that the protagonist "recognizes the current situation and adjusts his mentality." The biggest impression is that "the protagonist cannot recognize the situation." Then there is the description of the tiger bee. The setting is a young soldier who is exposed to minefields on the battlefield. Perhaps he wanted to write about "post-traumatic stress disorder" and excessive care about Dr. Sakurai. But she writes like an epileptic woman with mania and split personality tendencies😅

Let me explain in advance that this is the author's third step in the forbidden novel. The author is very good at shaping the characters of the protagonist and supporting characters in just a few pictures, but they are not very likable characters. At least for me. Starting with jumping off a building, the adult protagonist travels to the body of a falling child. When he is about to die, he awakens telekinesis and bullet time. In order to prevent him from hitting a white-haired passerby, he fell to the ground with broken bones and ruptured internal organs. During my hospitalization, my brain was read by Shifeng and I watched it all. The classic supporting role of a big-breasted and brainless female doctor uses the excuse of being a field doctor to discover that the killer doctor has a gun in his pocket, and then she directly points it out and asks the killer doctor if he wants to kill the protagonist? Just when readers thought that this busty female doctor had any confidence that she was not afraid of guns, she was taken away by a few bullets fired by the killer in a panic?      ，，，，😅，？ The classic Japanese Asashi male protagonist, in order not to injure passers-by, smashed himself to pieces, and kept silent even though he was stabbed 7 or 8 times in a row. He helped the female doctor to stop the bleeding, and protected the doctor from the debris splashed by the battle. At the same time, he had to fight with the fierce girl. He was not ruthless, but just in uniform. When it was over, he fell to the ground and fell into a coma. The girl was not injured at all, it was too Asasi. 😥

Qidian is currently the only serialized Magic Forbidden fanfic that I can watch. . . .

Come on, author, it's a rare magic forbidden novel, and it really uses love to generate electricity. I understand all magic forbidden novels these days. I recommend these magic forbidden novels by the author to anyone who wants to read magic forbidden novels. They are already rare masterpieces among magic forbidden novels.

Although I know that the Demon God will not be very strong if he is not a complete body, it is still difficult to stretch Othinus' strength even now.

Haven't you read this in a few months? Isn't it written in the New Testament? This is an important step for the Forbidden fandom. I hope that the Demon God Chapter can be finished, at least Othinus, because the other Level 0 book from the starting point has been written here, and Brother Shirai has not written further. It would be better if he could finish the Golden Chapter. There is no hope of creating a new one. The best fanfics I have seen so far are about gold and celebrating monsters.

The chase is over. After more than 700 chapters, the pace obviously dragged out and started to get boring. It was pretty good before Chapter 700.

Is this a harem story? Is there a Shennong?

Have you thought about your next new book? When will it be released?

Dear author, when will the new book be released? I gave you some suggestions for the next new book. How about the main character's super-power magnetic field rotation? The magnetic field rotation system is quite comprehensive and scientific.

The author's two books, one is the Rokutsuka holism of the previous one from the outside in, and the other is the localization of the nameless person's ability to master bullet time and telekinesis from the inside out. One yin and one yang, one surface and one interior. This is an excellent fan light novel. The author's imagination and brainstorming, and the construction of the protagonist's superpowers are wonderful, and it brought back to me the feeling of seeing things in a grand picture many years ago. I sincerely hope that the author's inspiration will never run out. It would be even better if he could write a few more Demon Forbidden fanfics and bring the New Testament together to play with 😭

The name of the protagonist makes it hard for me to hold my nerve

Does the author have any new book plans? Are you still planning to write about the magic ban?

When will the author publish a new book? I can't find a substitute at all