Naruto: The Legend of Qianye

Pirated copy, the author is awesome! Full reservation, recommended tickets are provided.

Ahem! ! I'm here to make a long review. Actually, I have only read a few chapters of this article and I found that the protagonist's cheats are too powerful, and I was worried about how old Tsunade would be, but I patiently continued reading and found that there is no such problem, and I gave some different evaluations to the characters of some third generations than in ordinary Naruto novels, (but the author did not inherit the fire in Minato) The third generation before the movie was still very young and had the title of the hero of the ninja world) but the article is generally good, and there are some funny things. In addition, other Hokage mostly let Uchiha use his appearance to save Uchiha, such as using newspapers to say that Uchiha was not good at talking about his physical integrity. This novel gives a different plan. I hope the author will continue to maintain it. I believe that the votes will always be full of sunshine (๓´╰╯`๓)

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​ Out of the author's comments in the latest chapter, I said that I hope the comment area will be more lively, so I came here. Indeed, there are few people and few comments. I'm also going to give a long review, so I'll start with the plot. I reviewed the plot and it has a clear concept. Although the pig's feet are buggy, it's not abusive but it's still enjoyable to watch. In fact, a few days ago, I was relatively negative, but it was also very interesting. To be honest, the Naruto theme is really bad. Out of 10 Naruto books, seven were darkened and three were left. . Not to mention, I usually finish the Naruto fanfic, and the basic timeline is the three battles. Of course, this one is no exception. This is the only Naruto fanfic I have followed. I won't interfere with the author's ideas when it comes to the plot. However, I always feel that the plot characters are still a little bit different. The character's personality may not be that distinct. The pig's trotters also give me a kind of popular pig's trotters. It's clear, maybe the writing style is a little bit worse. There are a lot of problems with the early thoughts of the characters in the third generation and the final moment of their death. There is no real sense of portrayal, and there is an illusion of forced intelligence. In addition, Orochimaru is too white, and there are too many typos for me to complain about. Although it doesn't affect me much, you can even mention my name twice in the author's statement and you can make it wrong. I I will. . . 😡

It cost five yuan and was made by Dayang. Although it is somewhat different from what I have seen, this is all I can do and I am quite satisfied. 😁😁 Readers of the Official Picture Province think for themselves.

Without chakra, tell me how he became a ninja and how he opened 8 doors. Can you read the setting of Naruto first?

You have almost all the blood inheritance limits, you have all the powerful ninjutsu, and you still act like Hatake Gogo. Let me ask you: The protagonist's aura + plug-in give you performance, can you only behave like a piece of shit? Bullying genin, being aggressive all the time, touching a maki, you didn't even touch a hair, it must be poisonous!

If nothing else, the most basic thing for writing fan fiction is to respect the setting of the original work. The settings have been changed, so why not write fantasy by yourself? What kind of fanfic should I write? A little bit player, with a casual stimulation, his eyes will be opened,,, what a genius. And I don't know where the kaleidoscope's ability comes from, so I'm convinced. Author, I don't say it sounds good, but I suggest you think about it carefully. This is a fan. If the setting of the original work has changed, it will change the flavor.

The protagonist is a member of the Moonlight family, and Goldfinger is the bloodline of other people. Then he exposed his Sharingan at the age of five, and soon told Orochimaru that the Sharingan could evolve into the Rinnegan, and also said that he was Madara Uchiha... You decide whether to watch it or not 🤭

This Naruto fanfic 🥵 is full of negative energy. The more I read it, the more I want to vomit. It simply challenges the reader's IQ.

The third generation of Danzo spends all day scheming about this and that. The protagonist's character clearly hates the third generation of Danzo, but he works hard for Konoha all day long. He does all kinds of things. It's a miracle that he's not dead yet. There is also Moonlight Hayate, who is obviously a ninja, but Hei Zetsu wants to talk to him for some reason. Even his own brothers don't believe it, but he believes in a monster that suddenly appears. Are all these ninjas so mentally retarded?