Naruto: The Legend of Qianye

This is a pirated copy, but the author is awesome! I've subscribed to the whole thing and am giving it a recommendation vote.

Ahem! I'm here with a long review. Actually, I've only read a few chapters of this novel and I've noticed the protagonist's overpowered abilities are too much. I was worried about the age difference between the main character and Tsunade, but as I patiently continued reading, I found that this wasn't an issue.

After reading the author's note in the latest chapter, which mentioned hoping for a more lively comment section, I came to check it out. Indeed, there are few people and few comments. I'm also planning a longer review, starting with the plot. I reviewed the plot and its clear message. Although the protagonist is somewhat overpowered, it's not angsty and still enjoyable to read.

It cost five yuan to make. Although it's not quite what I expected, it's the best I could do, and I'm still satisfied. 😁😁 The official images leave the readers to figure it out themselves.

Without chakra, tell me how he became a ninja and opened the Eight Gates. Can you at least finish reading the Naruto lore first?

You have almost all the bloodline limits, all the powerful ninjutsu, and you still act like you're on par with Hatake. Tell me: with the protagonist's halo and cheat codes, all you can do is act like a piece of crap? You bully genin, always acting tough, but when you encounter a mage, you don't even get a scratch. It's ridiculous!

Putting everything else aside, the most basic thing for writing fan fiction is to respect the original work's setting. Since the setting has been changed, you might as well write your own fantasy novel instead of fanfiction. A nobody, just a little provocation, and his eyes were opened... What a genius! And nobody even knows where the kaleidoscope's abilities came from. Unbelievable.

The protagonist is a member of the Moonlight Clan, and his cheat ability is fusing the bloodlines of other people. He revealed his Sharingan at the age of five, quickly told Orochimaru that the Sharingan could evolve into the Rinnegan, and even claimed to be Madara Uchiha... You can decide for yourselves whether to continue reading. 🤭

This Naruto fanfiction 🥵 is so negative it makes me want to vomit; it's practically an insult to the reader's intelligence.

The Third Hokage, Danzo, was always scheming and plotting. The protagonist, despite clearly disliking Danzo, was constantly risking his life for Konoha, acting recklessly. It's a miracle he's still alive. And then there's Hayate Gekko. He's clearly a ninja, yet Black Zetsu inexplicably confronted him, and he didn't even trust his own brother, but instead believed a monster who suddenly appeared. Are all ninjas this stupid?