Naruto: Don't Make Me Angry

It's ridiculous how Naruto is written like this. The protagonist is useless; the cheat ability is exactly as written, so it's better if it didn't exist. He can only do bad things and can't do anything good. Even his speech is restricted, making him even more tragic than a lone star. This writing completely eats up the original Naruto setting.

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Kotoamatsukami is overhyped. First of all, if he were truly invincible, why wasn't the Third Hokage controlled? Was Danzo really that kind-hearted? Moreover, his only function in the original work was to override the Edo Tensei, and his influence on Mifune was even discovered. Kotoamatsukami was something Kishimoto hyped up, but then found it difficult to develop, so he simply gave it a name and stopped writing it. Setting things like this is easy to fall apart, like in Boruto.

Starting with Kotoamatsukami, it's all too far-fetched. The Mangekyou Sharingan can actually alter the will of the Tenseigan? You're kidding me! If it were the Rinnegan, that would be somewhat plausible! The protagonist's will being altered? You might as well have just changed it to the protagonist committing suicide. Besides, Shisui's mental strength isn't even as strong as the protagonist's two incarnations.

One chapter is enough to make you give up. Other books have three golden chapters, but this one is toxic from the very beginning. The book and character names are ridiculous enough, but the opening is just a bunch of rambling nonsense, explaining nothing, revealing nothing, and the dialogue is incoherent and nonsensical, like a lunatic. Aside from the plot and timeline, it doesn't reveal a single useful piece of information.

Author, your introduction is enough to make people give up. The words "Fat sheep, I'll lock you up and you'll bring bad luck to your husband, brother, and whole family" are really vicious and excessive!

Many plot points felt forced and awkward; it was really frustrating.

The name is too silly, so I won't look... ┑(￣Д ￣)┍

Honestly, the whole book boils down to one word: deception. The book is deceiving people, the protagonist is deceiving people, and it's so deceptive that it's utterly disgusting.