Holding the Body in the White Blade, Wandering in the World of Mortals

As soon as I saw the aura of Jianghu in the title of the book, I became a fan After reading the book review, it seems that it is easier to be an eunuch while sitting down, so I plan to keep it up and not die 😡

The writing style of the book is average, it combines infinity and time travel, and it is too complicated to read.

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The setting is acceptable, the writing is acceptable No outline The biggest shortcoming is that the protagonist's character is too bad. It's so bad that you will feel very stupid after reading it, without the slightest sense of substitution. A person in his thirties time travels through modern society, and as a result, he doesn't even understand some of the most basic principles of modern society. In the previous chapter, I wrote that I was in my thirties and had a lot of social experience, and in the next chapter, I was only a teenager, so I couldn't understand it. It was a mess and it was difficult to read.

I hope there will be more Hailong

The first one or twenty chapters are pretty good! Meow meow when you get to the back?

The front is pretty cool, but the back is a little watery. For example, in Shujian it is said that I defended the land of the Han family and what I did was praised.

Um, wouldn't it be better to have a chapter name?

Boss, please update Skeleton Warrior quickly! ! !

I can't stand it anymore. I'm not saying it's not well written. It's actually pretty good. I can't stand this kind of sudden unlimited flow

Zhuangbility

Does anyone know how to type the word "weak chicken"?

What's going on? ? ? Why haven't there been any stable updates in the past few days? What did you do? ?

It's just that the author doesn't divide it into sections according to the app's reading habits The editor doesn't say that either?

Several books written by the author are okay, but before reading the book, ask whether it is a eunuch or not.

The three views of the main character at the beginning of this book are really interesting. You have traveled through time and cultivated your inner energy, but you are careful not to make any mistakes while practicing. On the other hand, when you see century-old wild ginseng and tiger bones in the prescription, you can't help but become a popular science "brick" on the Science Park Guoke. Com? How do you understand why centuries-old ginseng lignification is useless, and why tiger bones are replaced with cow bones? Since it is so scientific, zhenqi must not exist! Don't be afraid of going crazy, just have fun!

This novel can be said to be the worst among the worst. It has no logic and is messy. I don't know whether it is about ancient times or modern times, time travel or rebirth. I guess it comes out one by one. It should be the king of bad martial arts novels. I don't know why so many people watch it, and some people recommend it so highly. I really don't understand it.

If you like the style of the protagonists being military generals, the protagonists are all the same, either swords or swords. At best, they are cool and unrestrained, but at worst, you seem to know these two. The key point is that some of them carry swords to the battlefield. Don't you think it's ridiculous? Only swords could barely make a living on the battlefield during the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period. After the Han Dynasty, who else would use a one-handed sword as the main weapon on the battlefield? Either for ceremonial use or for battlefield use, the main character has not changed his clothes for thousands of years. He is either wearing a black robe or a white robe, as if he does not recognize other colors. If you don't know how to write, at least learn from the character introductions of the four famous works. If you want to write about Lu Bu in the Romance of the Three Kingdoms, the appearance of the character is the appearance, and then he said, Suan Ni swallows the head with a chain of armor, wears a Sichuan brocade hundred-flower robe, has a purple gold crown with a pheasant and chicken tail, a halberd in the hand, and a red rabbit horse neighing under the crotch. Suddenly the character stood up. It's not that Lu Bu didn't have a sword, it's just that he didn't write it in detail. And he is good at bow and arrow. What a vivid character. Looking at the current protagonist, he is wearing a black robe and a long sword. I don't know if he thought it was the underworld coming out to kill people.

. . Bird, you are opening the book again and again!

The horse also looked at what I found? ! !

The protagonist travels back in time to "The Swordsman" and spends a lot of time complaining, accusing other people of being wrong about this and that, using history to complain about other people's martial arts settings, and even making his own settings to laugh at other people's settings.

Those who can accept the style of Weak Bird will naturally enjoy watching it. Those who can't accept it will find it ugly and messy. However, among all the protagonists in the author's works, I still like Bo Fu the most.

I'm curious, how did you get hundreds of thousands of fans? Are there really hundreds of thousands of people with such wonderful minds that they can continue to read?

There is no golden finger in the beginning of the time travel, but I am still a loser. After a few chapters, I return to the modern pretense. Each chapter has no title. I can't stand it anymore.

Most of the protagonists in Qidian's online novels have vulgar temperaments and mean hearts. The weak protagonists don't have that loser vibe.

One thing to say, Uncle Shu's book review area is also a major feature. Most readers are busy reading their own books. There are basically only those who can't stand it and can't accept negative comments about the writing style, and the book review area basically does not delete comments. It's really rare for a book to have such good negative reviews🙃

In ancient times, I was lucky enough to be able to get some drugs, but suddenly I was introduced to modern times, and then I kept pouring drugs. 1. I forced myself to appear in Japan to kill people. I don't know what the use of writing this is. 2. When I returned to China, someone suddenly stabbed someone with a knife on the street? The protagonist knows kung fu and beats an ordinary person, accidentally kills someone, and then runs away and becomes a murderer? Didn't look back. . .

Is this protagonist a normal person? He is not interested in power, beauty, wealth or ideals, he only likes to kill. The officials and emperors will give you a false position, and the protagonist will deal with all the opponents for them, whether they are rebels, revolting farmers or foreigners. Then the officials and the emperor continued to oppress the people and dominate, and the protagonists had no hair. I think the protagonist is suitable for traveling to a slaughterhouse in a different world. The profession of butcher is definitely suitable for the protagonist.

The Harry Potter section is really boring. First of all, the world itself is very boring. Secondly, let's not talk about boredom. You are deliberately trying to be endless. You might as well write more about the Tang Dynasty, haha

Extremely poisonous, the three views are strange, the blood bar has dropped, Shennong is dead, if you have something to do, burn the paper, roll it first as a tribute